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    Chapter 17 – LOVE FOR TWO

    Author’s Comment –

    Our ladies are at the threshold of declaring their love for one another – FINALLY!!! It’s been a long road with some obstacles thrown in the way, but they have been true to their feelings & each other.

    Now comes the most important part – thoroughly loving each other like no other.

    In this chapter, I wished to convey their yearning for each other and some romance to light their way. As complex as Bette can be, she’s just as determined as Tina is to make this relationship work. She just goes about that realization in a different manner.

    Without further ado, let’s get to it – Love at Long Last!

    As always – thanks for reading & please enjoy.

    ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~

     

    Previously from Doctor of Hope Chapter 16 . . .

    When they reached the highest most position on the wheel, Bette whispered in Tina’s ear to turn around. The blonde did as requested and turned within the circle of Bette’s long arms. She gazed into dark chocolate eyes of the brunette.

    “We’re at the highest point in London.” Bette voice was low and saucy. “I have to kiss you.”

    She didn’t allow Tina to respond or resist as if she would ever do that anyway. Their lips meet in a soft, thorough kiss that told the world all it needed to know about their feelings for one another. They slowly pulled apart. Bette placed a kiss on Tina’s forehead as the blonde closed her eyes and laid her head on the brunette’s shoulder.

    “God, you are the best.” Tina nuzzled in close.

    “You deserve the very best of everything.” Bette sighed into Tina’s hair. “And I intend to see that you get it.”

    “You’re going to spoil me.”

    “I plan to.” Bette shifted a bit so that they could both look out of the glass enclosure and see the rest of the city as the capsule descended.

    The rest of the ride seemed to race by and soon their capsule was back at ground level.  They were the last to leave the enclosed compartment, being polite and allowing the other people to exit ahead of them. They held hands as they finally exited. They walked the short distance away from the wheel and looked up at its grand structure.

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    Comments

      • Hi Aslin,

        Thank you, thank you for continuing to support this story. I know I’ve been a bit late on posting an update – so thanks for your patience.

        Will try to post more often.

        Thanks so much!!

    1. This was excellent!

      Such romance and devotion to each other.

      Both women are so deeply in love with one another. You can just feel that love through your words.

      Awesome update.

      Looking forward to the rest of their journey.

      • Hey JW,

        These two were definitely made for each other & now they’ve finally come home to each other.

        Touches my heart that you liked the chapter so much.

        Their journey continues as we get caught up on their activities & get back to present time.

        Thanks a bunch!!

    2. So the moment of intimacy finally has arrived and been consummated. A romantic scene to be sure. And a declaration to be the last and forever from both of them… With only months to go before Tina will head back to America, anxious to see what the plan is to make this declaration a reality.

      Thanks for the chapter…

      • Hi Martha,

        Thanks for your kind words. I took a bit of poetic license & used that first, last, forever mantra that we have heard so often in regard to Tibette.

        The next few chapters of the novel will the course of their lives & love as we soon jump back to present day.

        Thanks for taking the time to leave your thoughts.

        Stay well.

    3. Really loved this – it was so intimate and touching – their love for one another made me all warm inside. They’re so perfect for each other. The romance, teasing and tender moments were terrific.

      And Tina affirming to Bette that indeed she was ready to take their relationship to the next level –

      “I’ve never been surer of anything in my life.” Tina caressed Bette’s cheek. Her fingers maneuvering the brunette’s chin towards her. The blonde’s hazel eyes turned darker with hunger for the tall Brit. “Make me yours.”

      Wow – How could Bette ever refuse?

      Now – can they make it last??

      Thanks for a great update.

      • Hey Leigh,

        They deserved an intense, intimate love scene that spoke from the heart & touched their souls.

        They are devoted to each other & their journey is just beginning.

        As you can see, they can’t resist each other & we’ll see if they can last.

        Thanks for your thoughts & compliment.

    4. Hey Collins,

      So good to see a new chapter and wow it was an incredible sexy one!

      They finally made love and expressed their deep love by making love, First, last and Forever! It’s what they both feel. Sadly we all know they will separate for a long time, still very curious to read what happened that they didn’t see or spoke to each other for such a long time, but for now I’m very pleased with this chapter, a tribute to making love between two soulmates.

      Hope you are doing well!

      Look forward to the next chapter!

      • Hey friend,

        Thanks for your kind words. Happy that you liked the chapter & their devotion to each other.
        Sweet, young & in love!

        New few chapters will get us back quickly to the present & their meeting in NYC.

        Doing great.

        Stay healthy!!

    5. So happy to read this! What we’ve all been waiting for, Bette & Tina, too..

      I love your writing, Collins, but this chapter was on a whole other level. It was sexy, hot and the intimacy just was so well-written.

      The end of the chapter had my 2 favorite lines –

      “I’ve never loved anyone like this before”

      and

      “you are the first woman I’ve made love to”

      And of course the last line – One that could last a lifetime

      Oh, my heart. I love this story. Thanks Collins!

      • Hey Westy,

        Hope you are doing okay in your neck of the woods – saw all the snowy weather in your area!!

        Yes, we’ve all been waiting for their declaration of love for each other & their consummation.

        Thanks for the super kind words – truly appreciate your take on the chapter. It had so many rewrites, additions & I tried to conjure up a little something different & yet romantic for their first time.
        Think I’ve written a few dozen love scenes by now & it’s a challenge & opportunity to keep them fresh & realistic.

        Their declarations of each other being the first woman they’ve actually made love to was important. I tried to infer that all their other prior relationships were casual, not based on being in love & although the sex may have been good – their love making was beyond what either had ever experienced before.

        Hope springs eternal with them – Yes, it could last a lifetime.

        Until next time – thanks so much & so happy you loved the chapter!!

    6. I love this story – so good.

      It was sizzling hot – you portray them so well – they each have their own personalities and yet, they’re made for each other.

      Can’t wait for what comes next.

      • Hi Erin,

        Thanks for reaching out.

        I try to give the characters depth & realistic dialogue & actions. They are soulmates & belong together – but yet they do have unique personalities, quirks & how they process feelings & info.

        Next chapter coming up very soon. It’s in the final stages of editing.

        Thanks again.

    7. Hey Collins,

      Loved the sexiness and love Tibette had for one another in this chapter. They are true equals – both giving and receiving.

      Fav Lines this chapter –

      Bette – “T, no one had ever reached in and touched my heart and soul like you have.”

      And then end part was just so perfect –

      “You are the first woman I’ve made love to.” Tina held Bette’s hand against her chest. She took a deep breath. She was laying her heart out for Bette to take. “You are my first and hopefully my last.”

      “Mine too babe.” Bette kissed the back of Tina’s hand, her heart in her throat. Her voice caught. “I . . . want you to be my forever too if . . . if you want.”

      “Oh, I want.” Tina let go of Bette’s hand and put her own behind the brunette’s head to pull her down into a passionate kiss that got messy rather quickly. They both fought for control as lips and tongues danced with each other.

      “Be my first, last and forever?” Bette whispered between tiny kisses as they broke for air. Their bodies now wrapped around each other also. Tina’s right leg hooking Bette’s and the brunette’s legs sandwiching Tina’s other limb.

      “Only if you’ll be mine?” Tina cooed as she nibbled along Bette’s strong jawline.

      “Always.” Bette declared as she moved to take Tina into a deeper, passionate kiss, one that could consume them both.

      One that could last a lifetime . . .

      WOW – Awesome chapter – can’t wait for the next!

      • Hey K,

        Thanks ever so much for reading & staying the course with this novel. Seems like I’ve been writing it forever!!

        But I love these two characters & JB/LuH bring them to life & inspire our imaginations.

        They’ll have some more intimate moments in future chapters, but it’s time to move forward & get to the heart of the tale.

        Much appreciate your comment & support.

        Take care.

      • Hey Carol,

        Thanks so much for continuing to follow along with the story.

        Some more catching up to required as to what happened during the years before their breakup. But then right onto their meeting in NYC.

        Almost done editing the next chapter!!

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