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Chapter 21 – The end and the beginning
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”How do you even know about him?”
”To be honest, it was all aunt Al, I have no idea who he is,” Angie grinned and took a sip of lemon water.
”The car will pick you up at 6:20. What else… oh, your hotel room. I thought you might like this one, so I booked it. And there seems to be a good spa, so you can relax the next day”
She showed a couple of photos of the suite and finished her story.
Both Tina and Bette were pleasantly surprised by how much their daughter had planned and thought through everything. This was her first experience in organizing anything, and it was clearly impressive.
”Hon, everything looks ready, doesn’t it?” Bette smiled and tucked a strand of hair behind Angie’s ear.
”Well, I hope so. Actually, I’m a little nervous. I want everyone to like everything…”
”I’m sure it will!”
”You did a great job!”
Tina and Bette said it in one second, which made Angie smile.
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After a stunningly romantic morning, breakfast in bed, and a pleasant, leisurely preparing for the party, Bette and Tina arrived at Bel-Air. It was evening, all the guests had already gathered in a beautifully decorated garden with stone bridges, a huge number of flowers, many decorative elements, with a long wooden table that was decorated with hanging glass balls with candles inside, as well as a large gazebo that was surrounded by white columns and the same color fabric, inside which there were several sofas for a more relaxed. The entire setting looked even more mesmerizing in the twilight, with candles burning and several lanterns shaped like crystal chandeliers.
Tina and Bette met with friends to their loud congratulations, the most sincere smiles and hugs. Here were all the people they loved, adored, and missed. Shane and Quiara, Alice and Nat, Dana with her son Jacob and wife Karina, Helena and Dylan, who just returned from a long cruise in Europe yesterday, Helena’s son Wilson, who is now in medical school, Helena’s daughter Jang Yin, who graduated from RISD this year and talked a lot with Angie about it. Peggy was also able to appear here, who had restricted any flights as much as possible due to her deteriorating health, but at all costs wanted to be here today and see the Porter-Kennard family. Kit’s son David was there with his wife and daughter, and of course Angie and Jordi.
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Very nice ending to the story…. a twenty-fifth anniversary party…. a honeymoon suite and a trip to Switzerland on Monday…. wow… very nice….
Looks like things are going well for the family…. they have a good foundation on going forward…. Angie is over the troublemaker and attracted to Jordi….. just hope this does not disrupt her plans for college and a future career.
Love at a young age is sincere and passionate but not always the best judgement. Angie will make her own decisions, but if you she puts going to the best school which fulfills her goals on the line as a result, both Tina and Bette will not be happy. I wish them all the best. It appears that many of their problems can be diminished with good ole fashion conversation.
Thank you for your lovely story…. Happy New Year….
I agree with Martha. You tackled a tough subject matter and brought them out the other side in a healthy way. Angie planned a lovely party for her parents, Glad Eddie is yesterday’s news. Good job!
Thank you! It’s been an amazing journey Happy New Year
Hi Ada,
First, Happy New Year!
This was a great story to read and i am very happy with the end. I didn’t always comment but read every chapter. It was quite the journey but they got through it to the other end and ended it with a lovely party organized by Angie.
And the finish touch a second honeymoon to Switserland, a cabin in the mountains.
The eyes speak volumes, especially Bette’s eyes, windows into her soul, i quote these lines because i truly love it:
“Admiration, adoration, reverence, tenderness, care, awe, trust, infinite gratitude and something else that cannot be expressed in words, that can only be seen in the eyes of a person who unconditionally and endlessly loves you.
They continued to look at each other, silently expressing all the feelings that fill them now. It was such a powerful eye contact, such an emotional outburst, a declaration of love that was felt in every cell of the body. A conversation of two hearts, when any words are superfluous.”
Beautiful!
Hope you will be back with another story! I wish you joy, health, inspiration and love for this New Year! Stay save!
Thank you for the story, it was a emotional rollercoaster.
But we wouldn’t know what was Tina’s present?
Happy New Year!
When are you posting more stuff?
Good story line! When can we expect more? Soon I hope!