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Chapter 23 (Final Chapter)
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(Alice) And the venue? It definitely ticks all the boxes?
(Tina) It’s perfect Al
(Alice) Decent dance floor, good atmosphere, terrace with a spectacular view?
(Tina) Yes, all of those
Bette looks to Alice.
(Bette) Aren’t these questions you should have been asking before the day of the event?
Tina turns to Bette.
(Tina) Oh she has. We’ve covered all of this many times
(Bette) Remind me again why you’re organising this for her?
Tina sighs.
(Tina) Because I love her and she’s done it for me in the past
Tina shrugs and Bette glances between her and Alice.
(Bette) I don’t think they’re good enough reasons to subject yourself to this
Alice throws one of her fries at her and Bette smiles and brushes off her jacket.
(Alice) Be nice to me Porter, it’s my fucking birthday
Shane gives Alice a stern look as she nods towards Angelica.
(Shane) Hey, language
Alice and Angelica smile at each other and both roll their eyes. Shane turns to Angelica.
(Shane) What are your plans tonight Ange?
(Angelica) I’m staying at my friend Carla’s
Bette gives Tina a look and Tina places a reassuring hand on her leg.
(Shane) Have I met them?
(Angelica) No, we only made friends recently
Angelica nods towards Bette.
(Angelica) Mom hates her
Bette doesn’t say anything and Tina squeezes her leg.
(Tina) No she doesn’t
Bette sighs and turns to Angelica.
(Bette) I don’t really know her yet
Alice glances between them all and then focuses on Angelica.
(Alice) Don’t worry Ange, the best people to know are always the ones your mothers tell you to stay away from
Angelica smiles and Tina and Bette both frown at Alice.
(Bette) Alice!
(Tina) Jesus Al
Alice shrugs as she has a sip of coffee.
(Alice) What? It’s fucking true
Tina gives her an exasperated look and Alice looks back at her.
(Alice) What?
(Tina) Can you tone it down please?
(Alice sighs) OK, no problem. So, back to my party, time to talk details
(Tina frowns) Are you serious? Have we not done that already? We’ve spoken about nothing but details for the last month
(Alice) Last minute details Tina
Dana glances over at Tina.
(Dana) Do you regret this yet?
Tina meets her eyes and raises her eyebrows and Dana smiles as she has a sip of coffee.
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Thanks for the chapter… I am glad to see that Bette and Tina are considering cutting back on professional lives. They must consider their priorities. If they are financially secure, then cutting back inorder to work on their family relationship is always a good idea. Angie will not be around forever and at some point they may retire and have more time with each other or possibly grandchildren.. For most people, one’s relationships last longer than their profession. These two have gone through years without each other. They have both had different experiences and have made changes in their life. Its a good idea to get to know the person they each are today and that takes time.
Thankyou for this story. Its a wonderful contribution to the readership.
Your stories are like no other. I thoroughly enjoy your writing. I hope you write something new for us:)
Great story, loved it. And nice ending.
Waiting for the next stories from you!
Great last chapter! My favorite line was Alice getting a kick out of Bette & Tina being together.
I loved this story. I love the way you write, I enjoy all your stories and look forward to reading more from you.
Finally able to read this chapter.
Sorry to see this story end but it was a great story!
Hope you will write more!
Loved every Chapter thank you.
This is the second time I’m reading this story and I think I liked it even better this time around. Thank you