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Chapter 23 (Final Chapter)
(Alice) Tell me about the caterer
Tina raises her hand, placing it over her eyes.
(Tina) For fuck’s…
Bette raises her eyebrows and slaps Tina’s leg.
(Bette) Tee!
Tina lowers her hand and looks to Bette and then to Angelica.
(Tina) Sorry
Angelica beams back at her and the others all smile and sip their coffees. Tina sighs and turns to Alice.
(Tina) Alice, I swear to God you are going to love the party. Every single request you’ve made has been seen to. Would you please just trust me and try to relax
That evening, Bette and Tina are at home getting ready for Alice’s party. Bette stands by the bed in their room with her dress hanging from the back of the bedroom door, and Tina is applying her make up in the ensuite bathroom. Tina’s phone sits on her bedside table and has been periodically beeping as notifications come through.
(Bette) Who’s messaging you?
Tina sighs and responds from the ensuite.
(Tina) Alice, of course. She’s checking I’m on schedule, repeatedly. Also that I’m coming at all
Bette smiles as she pulls her dress over her head and adjusts it as she stands in front of their full length mirror.
(Bette) Why is she hassling you? You’re throwing her the party, she’s really worried you’ll not show up?
(Tina) Well, she’s stressed. But also she knows what we’re like when we see each other dressed up for something
Bette smiles into the mirror as she puts on her earrings.
(Tina) How many events have we been late for?
(Bette laughs) Or missed altogether. I see her point
Tina’s phone beeps again.
(Tina) Can you remind me of this if I’m ever crazy enough to think this is a good idea again?
(Bette smiles) Sure
They both continue getting ready and after a short while Tina walks out of the ensuite and stops still as she looks at Bette. Her eyes move slowly down her body before she raises them and meets Bette’s gaze in the mirror. Bette holds up her index finger in warning.
(Bette) Tee, no
Tina bites her lip and Bette smiles and shakes her head as Tina moves towards her. Bette turns to face her as she approaches.
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Thanks for the chapter… I am glad to see that Bette and Tina are considering cutting back on professional lives. They must consider their priorities. If they are financially secure, then cutting back inorder to work on their family relationship is always a good idea. Angie will not be around forever and at some point they may retire and have more time with each other or possibly grandchildren.. For most people, one’s relationships last longer than their profession. These two have gone through years without each other. They have both had different experiences and have made changes in their life. Its a good idea to get to know the person they each are today and that takes time.
Thankyou for this story. Its a wonderful contribution to the readership.
Your stories are like no other. I thoroughly enjoy your writing. I hope you write something new for us:)
Great story, loved it. And nice ending.
Waiting for the next stories from you!
Great last chapter! My favorite line was Alice getting a kick out of Bette & Tina being together.
I loved this story. I love the way you write, I enjoy all your stories and look forward to reading more from you.
Finally able to read this chapter.
Sorry to see this story end but it was a great story!
Hope you will write more!
Loved every Chapter thank you.
This is the second time I’m reading this story and I think I liked it even better this time around. Thank you