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Chapter 40 – Do You Wanna Come In?
“Do you wanna come in?” Tina whispered breathlessly.
“You know I want to, right?” Bette asked.
“It feels like you want to.”
“I do. I just don’t think I should.”
“Why not?”
“Tina, I think we both know what’s going to happen if I come in.”
“I think that’s why I want you to come in.”
Bette sighed in frustration. She wanted to come in so badly. More than that, she wanted Tina to come, so badly. But she knew that she didn’t want this to be a one night event. She wanted to know more about Tina before they took that step. That’s why she wanted to know about Tina’s past relationships. She needed to gauge what Tina was willing to offer because she knew that she had started to develop feelings for her, impossible as it may have seemed in such a short length of time.
As Bette was caught up in her own thoughts, Tina turned the door knob and stepped inside, grabbing the mocha-skinned hands to pull them inside with her. Tensing her arms, Bette remained on the front porch. She pulled Tina back outside to her and kissed her gently.
“I’m gonna go now.” Their lips we touching ever so lightly when she said this. Then she pulled back.
The look of disappointment was more than she could stand.
“Please, please don’t look at me like that. I want you so bad right now. It’s just not the right time. I want to know you first.”
The blonde nodded. She knew Bette was right, but her physical wants had been making the decisions for her all night.
“Have lunch with me tomorrow?” Bette asked.
The gorgeous smile returned. “Only if you drive.” She said with a wink.
Bette breathed a sigh of relief. “Absolutely. I had a wonderful time with you this evening. I will call you tomorrow, think about where you want to go for lunch, okay.”
“Okay, I will.” Tina took a step outside and kissed Bette’s lips one last time. “Goodnight.”
“Goodnight, Tina. Sweet dreams.”
Tina watched as Bette walked back to her car and drove away. She shook her head at her sexual frustration. Without a second thought, she retreated into her house in search of her fourth orgasm of the day.
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Silentreader says
wow…so hot….really hot… :-)
Tibette go to the right direction….I love it very much…
can’t wait to read the next chapter..
thank you for sharing ur story.. ^_^
meloveslu says
Thanks SR! New chapters on Sunday so stay tuned!
MeLL
Zhenya says
Thanks for the chapter!
Bette, Bette, why don’t you come in?:)
Ahh, and i forgot to tell something about references in past chapters – i just hate words “Spaghetti girl”. Maybe it’s because that originally they come from Jodi, but i just hate them
meloveslu says
I thought spaghetti girl was a rather clever line.
And Bette is kicking herself on the drive home for not coming in =)
Zhenya says
After that scene in TLW for me “spaghetti girl” is insult, like “carpet muncher” or “faggot”
Bibi28 says
Haha, poor Tina, seeking for her fourth orgasm that day ????, the poor girl must be almost dehydrated.
MeLL, it is a pleasure to read this story again!!!
meloveslu says
Thanks Bibi!
Yep, Tina was in for a marathon of O’s after her interactions with Bette. I don’t blame her one bit!
kiwipit says
Yeah, Bette, I had a wonderful time this evening, too :-) Thanks for this date … eeeh.. chapter, MeLL.
You capture the chemistry between T + B really excellently. Sizzling hot already.
Seeing how comfortable Tina is with teasing, innuendos, holding hands and kissing Bette, you’re definitely showing how Tina is Bettesexual.
You really know a lot about music, don’t you? Quite the aficionado, I’d say. :-)
The Easter egg..hmm… the name of the Yacht? Dream on by either Nazareth or Aerosmith?
Thanks for spending some of your lazy time for us by posting!
meloveslu says
Remember, it wasn’t a date, it was an obligatory repentance ;-)
And thanks so much for the warm words.
As I suspected, you found that Easter egg with no problems (Aerosmith)! And yes, like Tina, I am a huge music aficionado. My library is so eclectic. Every time I play a game called Song Quiz with my friends who have an Amazon Echo (Alexa), I always kick their ass because I know the most obscure titles and artists. I pride myself on my musical knowledge.
See ya Sunday!
MeLL
SassyGran says
Hi MeLL
Happy New Year – you just made it better with a new Post.
Thanks for the regular posts.
Loved this and look forward to more.
So love the Bette and Tina in this Story, more please.
SG
meloveslu says
Cheers SG!
Come back on Sunday!
SassyGran says
Sunday 6.30 am here in the UK – I’m waiting :-)
SG
Pie says
Hey MeLL. Finally caught up with your story. I very much love the updates from the original. Love the interaction between Bette and Tina and cant wait to read your next posts! Thanks!!
meloveslu says
Hi Pie! Glad you could join us for a little re-telling of this old tale. Hope you are well!!
Pie says
I’m good MeLL..Thanks!