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Chapter 40 – Do You Wanna Come In?
She’s going to kill me. I’m seriously going to have to throw myself overboard to cool off, Bette thought.
She dipped her head and rested her lips on Tina’s shoulder. The sexual tension was palpable, but neither of them was willing to overtly confront it since they were both completely sober.
Before they knew it, the yacht had returned to the dock and the DJ was wishing everyone a good evening. Peeling themselves from the other, they made eye contact and saw the exact same thing the other wanted.
“I think we’re getting kicked off the boat,” Bette whispered.
It made Tina giggle. They gathered their belongings and disembarked.
They walked back to the car in silence that was made comfortable once Tina grabbed Bette’s hands and laced their fingers together. I am so into her, it’s not even funny, the A&R rep thought to herself.
Bette pulled out the keys and offered them to Tina. Tina knew that if she wasn’t distracted with some sort of activity like driving on the way home, that she wouldn’t have been able to keep her hands off of Bette. She happily accepted the keys and drove them back to her house.
The drive didn’t take quite as long since traffic was sparse. Bette occupied her time punching through the SiriusXM stations for songs approved by her driver. It was a little after 10 pm when they finally pulled into the driveway. They both exited and Bette walked Tina up to her door.
Once it was unlocked, Tina turned to face the woman she had been lusting for all day. “I had a great time with you, Bette.” She said truthfully.
“Does that mean I’m on my way to forgiveness?” Bette asked with a playful smile.
Tina nodded. “You’re on the right track.” She gave the car keys back. “The car is amazing. I may have to go down to the dealership and take a look at a few. It helps that it’s totally hot and sexy.”
“I think you’re totally hot and sexy.” Bette blurted without filtering her thoughts. A look of fear overtook her face as soon as the words slipped out.
Tina was floored by Bette’s honesty but used the brunette’s uncomfortable demeanor to her advantage. “You also think I’m incredibly gorgeous.” She smiled.
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Silentreader says
wow…so hot….really hot… :-)
Tibette go to the right direction….I love it very much…
can’t wait to read the next chapter..
thank you for sharing ur story.. ^_^
meloveslu says
Thanks SR! New chapters on Sunday so stay tuned!
MeLL
Zhenya says
Thanks for the chapter!
Bette, Bette, why don’t you come in?:)
Ahh, and i forgot to tell something about references in past chapters – i just hate words “Spaghetti girl”. Maybe it’s because that originally they come from Jodi, but i just hate them
meloveslu says
I thought spaghetti girl was a rather clever line.
And Bette is kicking herself on the drive home for not coming in =)
Zhenya says
After that scene in TLW for me “spaghetti girl” is insult, like “carpet muncher” or “faggot”
Bibi28 says
Haha, poor Tina, seeking for her fourth orgasm that day ????, the poor girl must be almost dehydrated.
MeLL, it is a pleasure to read this story again!!!
meloveslu says
Thanks Bibi!
Yep, Tina was in for a marathon of O’s after her interactions with Bette. I don’t blame her one bit!
kiwipit says
Yeah, Bette, I had a wonderful time this evening, too :-) Thanks for this date … eeeh.. chapter, MeLL.
You capture the chemistry between T + B really excellently. Sizzling hot already.
Seeing how comfortable Tina is with teasing, innuendos, holding hands and kissing Bette, you’re definitely showing how Tina is Bettesexual.
You really know a lot about music, don’t you? Quite the aficionado, I’d say. :-)
The Easter egg..hmm… the name of the Yacht? Dream on by either Nazareth or Aerosmith?
Thanks for spending some of your lazy time for us by posting!
meloveslu says
Remember, it wasn’t a date, it was an obligatory repentance ;-)
And thanks so much for the warm words.
As I suspected, you found that Easter egg with no problems (Aerosmith)! And yes, like Tina, I am a huge music aficionado. My library is so eclectic. Every time I play a game called Song Quiz with my friends who have an Amazon Echo (Alexa), I always kick their ass because I know the most obscure titles and artists. I pride myself on my musical knowledge.
See ya Sunday!
MeLL
SassyGran says
Hi MeLL
Happy New Year – you just made it better with a new Post.
Thanks for the regular posts.
Loved this and look forward to more.
So love the Bette and Tina in this Story, more please.
SG
meloveslu says
Cheers SG!
Come back on Sunday!
SassyGran says
Sunday 6.30 am here in the UK – I’m waiting :-)
SG
Pie says
Hey MeLL. Finally caught up with your story. I very much love the updates from the original. Love the interaction between Bette and Tina and cant wait to read your next posts! Thanks!!
meloveslu says
Hi Pie! Glad you could join us for a little re-telling of this old tale. Hope you are well!!
Pie says
I’m good MeLL..Thanks!