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Chapter 73 – We Have Yet to Get Messy
“Oh, you think we’re done?” Bette said, raised eyebrow in full effect.
A throaty chuckle was Tina’s response. It was enough to get Bette moving as she grabbed her girlfriend who screamed in surprise again. Picking her up and tossing Tina on her back on the bed towards the headboard, Bette slid a knee under the blonde’s left leg while her other leg topped Tina’s right.
Lowering herself, she saw the understanding in Tina’s eyes. Once their dripping hot centers met in a sloppy kiss of arousal, they both groaned, enjoying the feel of their most erogenous body parts coming together.
Bette rocked into Tina, slowly at first, basking in this shared sexual moment of the utmost intimacy. Tina responded as she bucked her hips up and into Bette. Their breaths were shallow and they kept a steady rhythm so that they could look deeply into each other’s eyes.
They shared a loving smile and Tina reached up to place some damp curls behind Bette’s ear. Bette closed her eyes at the sensual touch of her girlfriend. She leaned down and kissed Tina with everything she had as she continued to thrust rhythmically into her.
Tina flipped them during the kiss so she could control the pace. She adjusted herself so that the stimulation was directly on both of their clits now and started propelling herself into and all over Bette, feeling the sticky fluid mixture between them.
They both felt the sensation which was nothing short of phenomenal. Bette’s hands kept themselves busy with Tina’s breasts as they bounced with every thrust. The brunette thought she had never seen anything more beautiful.
The moans in the room and the knocking of the headboard against the wall told any other hotel guests within earshot that the room was on fire with sex. And the fire burned between both Bette and Tina’s legs. At the same time. One big finale was reached by the sweaty, hard bodies atop the messy bedspread.
Tina lurched over Bette and Bette pulled her close, holding her tightly to her body. They felt one another’s spasms and quivers from their respective releases. No words were necessary as their bodies had done all the talking for them. Sleep claimed them both in no time as they lied, Tina still on top of Bette, sweaty and sated for the moment.
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Therese_Belivet says
Ok, now I’m feeling bad : just when I posted a pretty threatening comment on your former chapter… here appears the next ! Call it a wave of magic wand – sorry, MeLL !! ;-)
Hmm… I think it’s wise to drink some ice tea before to read this inevitably hotter-than-quicklime chapter… Coming back soon ! ;-)
meloveslu says
I accept all comments. Including threats ????
Jane says
One word-WOWWWWWWWWWWWWW!
meloveslu says
Not sure that’s a word, but I’ll take it!
Finn422 says
OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
meloveslu says
Yeah, they probably screamed that out loud too. lol
SassyGran says
Phew!!!!!!!!!!
meloveslu says
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proteonomics says
Hey MeLL:
OMG, that was goood!!! Now I have to go to work and I haven’t sleep reading and rereading this chapter, I’m going to talk nuts today.
Thanks for the chapter.
P
meloveslu says
Hopefully you got through the day with no problems lol ????????????
Zhenya says
I think i need to check my blood pressure)
meloveslu says
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BnTinmyhead says
Ok so I just finished reading this at work………….lol..great Chapter loved the reconnection..thank you.
meloveslu says
Aww, thanks BnT! But I’ve warned you about reading this stuff at work! lol
BnTinmyhead says
Yes you have! but you will fined I don’t listen well lol
Bibi28 says
Wow, phew, wow again, i am speechless!!!
Of to take a cold ????
kiwipit says
What a balm for my soul (or heart-balm?)! Well, more like intellectual comfort food for me after a pritty shitty day at work. And after enduring a really bad theatre play. I’m on my second glas of red wine already to forget about the day (Californian Merlot btw… the holidays in CA eliminated my prejudice against US wine). But only reading your postings made me forget about all that :-)
Sizzling hot, my dear! I’m not known to have heart conditions but I might start having them after reading this. I raise my glas (literally) to your writing skills. What can I say…I need a cold shower. Or I simply go to bed feeling….well…… ;-p
Thanks so much for updating, MeLL. Much appreciated!
cheers and good night, I take my drunken self to bed now….
meloveslu says
Cheers!
You can’t say I didn’t warn you before you endeavored to read this chappy.
Hopefully you didn’t have a long restless night after reading ????
kiwipit says
In the end I guess it was quite healthy for my blood circulation ;-) And I did sleep very well – probably thanks to the wine – and I had sweet dreams. So I’m well rested and totally prepared for more action. Bring it on! Lol
Therese_Belivet says
You know, what amazed me, beyond the so obvious burning passion (…I pretty think all our pc’s screens are melting right now !), is that you never stop to brilliantly keep at boiling point just through a deep and really meaningful exchange of looks and smiles… This so eloquent silent dialogue will always be, for me, the most powerfully erotic part of our beloved two’s passionate love.
It reminds me the most beautiful look of pure and deep love I ever saw : on Bette’s face, during the famous elevator scene (S5 ep.9), when she looks upwards Tina,
What a delightful chapter to read few hours before the second part of my dental surgery (ouch !!) : it warms my so sensitive heart :-)
I wish you a great enjoyable week, MeLL, and all my thanks for your wonderful story !!
meloveslu says
Thank you for the compliments, T_B. You are a sweetheart.