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Frozen Beginnings – Chapter Two
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“Are you too proud to ask for help?” The mocking voice resumed behind her.
Tina shot her darkest glare towards the brunette who seemed to enjoy seeing her discomfort and slight awkward stance, perched as she was on one leg and hanging as if her life depended on it on the armrest of the sofa.
Before Tina had time to reply, Bette had wrapped her arms around her waist and was supporting her in effect taking most of her weight from her one remaining good leg. It was the closest they had been so far, and Tina couldn’t help but noticed how beautiful her host was. Flawless olive skin, full lips with a perfectly drawn cupid bow, dark eyes framed by long silky eyelashes which right now showed gentleness she would not have suspected in a million years.
“Thank you.” She whispered before she felt herself be lifted entirely off the ground as if she weighed nothing at all.
A little sigh escaped Tina’s lips as she realised how perfectly she fitted into Bette’s arms. The brunette was startlingly strong despite her slender frame. The bulges in the arms of her sleeves, as Bette carried her, betrayed a striking musculature not too bulky but definitely toned. Tina could also feel how the muscles in her host’s shoulders moved under the fabric of her shirt as she wrapped her hand around the back of the brunette to anchor herself securely as she was taken up the stairs. Tina wasn’t sure whether it was the result of living in the open air but a lifetime of physical activities such as skiing and wood cutting would definitely contribute to a powerful physique. Most surprising of all though was how fresh Bette smelt; a mixture of soap, shampoo and fabric softener. It was subtle but captivating all at the same time, a far cry from the fragranced, powdered and painted ladies the blonde was accustomed to in her daily entourage.
“I only have one bathroom.” Bette informed as she pushed a door with her foot and stepped inside the room before lifting Tina down on the chair near the bathtub. “So you’d better leave it in the state you found it as I have no intention of cleaning up after you.”
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1st! I WIN! I WIN! I WIN!!!!!
You are amazing Kins40! Thank you!!!
you forgot to tell everyone that you left your comment before reading! :0p
hey, that’s supposed to be our little secret!
Looking good. Its relly nice to read your new tory. Thx
I like this story pps
That was great! I am very intrigued how this story wil develop.
Tina must not assume things by how someone looks. She is one spoiled rich girl.
But i believe she will learn that.
And Bette, you surely made her sound like a hard woman, but with a caring side.
Love this story and i am glad you are back!
Great – interest retained – next post please!
Love Bette! ‘Something missing in that request’!! Tina’s in trouble!
Kins,
There is a piece of code you sometimes have to put into the story in the TEXT editing window. You can find that in the upper right part of your editing window next to a tab titled, Visual. Click on Text and you’ll see the codes WordPress uses to make your story appear in its format. I’ll put the little piece of code below this paragraph and hope that WordPress doesn’t make it disappear because that is what this little string does – it makes blank spaces. WordPress may “see” it and make this little bit of simple coding magic vanish. You’ll want to use this code for your stories so they are more readable in appearance.
The code should appear here:
If it’s not above this line then WP disappeared it from this comment box’s text. To find it to use take a story you’re editing and tap the spacebar several times to lift your text, then click the TEXT editing window and you’ll see the code to use. It’s where you’ve inserted the blank spaces.
Sometimes using the space bar between paragraphs and dialogue bites works and sometimes it doesn’t. But this ALWAYS works.
Blackbird
Loved it. Very curious about what Bette said to Tina’s father as well as what she does for a living. Thanks
I absolutely love your style. I feel like a fly on the wall observing Tina’s new surroundings for the first time with her. I can even smell the beeswax & lavender, and I love it!
It’s really great to have you back, Kins. I have a feeling this story will be as epic as all of your other masterpieces. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Regards,
Labrys
Ok so what does Bette really do for a.living? How do she know Tinas father? Why is she so rude to Tina? Questions questions….oh how I love stories like this and it keeps you anticipating, excited, and intrigued at the same time…nice chapter
Loved it! I think Bette is a very rich lady and she has business with Tina Dad. She might just work for him and she owns that cabin. Tina will learn the true meaning of being a simple person and not judging other by there looks. PPS
ok, so now I will leave my real comment. Thanks for blowing my cover!
It was awesome, as usual and you know how much I appreciate the heads up. ;) You’re still my #1.
great update, I really liked this chapter. whether the story’s title refers to Bette’s heart? what a Tina Kennard can be thawed? :P
so early in the story, I have so many questions, but I’m sure that you’ll be slow to answer them all. I have been so enjoying the beginning of this story, I’m sure that by the end, I’m hooked.
I’m looking forward to the next chapter.
Very nice. I will definitely keep reading. It’s been a very long time since I’ve been here and had to reset my password like 20 times just so I can comment. Don’t worry, I wrote down my password I’ll remember. I have even write a story or two, but first I need to finish the others.
Anyway Kins, you’re awesome as always.
Mmmm would really like to know the occupation of one Bette Porter.Definatley not a cabin maid.Some kind of executive probably.Anyway we will find out at some point.Pleased I got the occupant of the cabin right anyway and it was Bette to the rescue.Poor little rich girl Tina will be brought down to size I imagine.2 weeks on their own together.Time for feelings to grow.Love will be in the air as well.Instead of snow.Definately a winner with me.Great second chapter dear friend .Look forward to the next amazing chapter Kins..Cxx
An amazing and intriguing story so far..look forward to the next update!
I loved it. Thank you for posting !
Love it
I am so very glad to see your new story! I cannot wait for more!!
Wow you’re coming back in style.
Only today could conclude both parties
his new story and I confess that I was already
very pleased with what I read.
Loving this little game bette and tina.
Love all your stories.
Ten Stars !!!