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Chapter V – Yes, I’m Ready
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Shapeless sleeping shirt. With that sexy beast sleeping on my bed? Fuck it.
She tossed the sleeping shirt towards the laundry basket. Score!
She maneuvered her body around carefully, so that she could reach out for the red silk-robe hanging behind the bathroom door with her left hand.
After slipping the robe on she retrieved the single crutch that she’d used to get to the bathroom, and hobbled to the bed slowly. She wanted to get to the side of the bed that Jade was closest to so that she could lay down as close to her as possible.
She got to that side, but, as she tried to carefully lie down, she lost her balance and ended up falling directly on Jade’s chest.
“Oommmpphh!” Jade groaned, as she unconsciously wrapped her arms around Rian, and they bounced on the bed.
“I’m sorry … I’m so sorry, honey,” Rian whispered, in a slight panic now that the plan she’d formed while studying herself in the mirror was out the window. Well … not a full plan, really. The body-checking and red robe had inspired her to see what would happen with more kissing, more touching.
“Um…are you okay, baby?” the soft question broke Rian out of her thoughts.
“I’m okay,” Rian answered quietly, a slow smile spreading across her face, thinking already about getting her plan back in gear. How can I not kiss those lips? Especially when she’s so vulnerable, and sleepy, and … yummy would be a good description.
Rian could feel comforting warmth transfer from Jade’s body to hers as it seeped through her silk robe. Jade was in her usual sleeping outfit: a ribbed, sleeveless tank top that had risen halfway up to her lower ribcage and snug-fitting boyshorts. It exposed most of her skin, and the sage-patchouli scent of her body butter wafted up to Rian’s nostrils. Jade was slipping into her deep sleep, again, and, Rian sought to take advantage of the loosened hold of those strong arms around her. Rian adjusted her position on top of Jade, using her arms and hands to move around. Jade suddenly bent her knee up, and this jostled Rian up, so that they were now face to face, nose to nose. Lips to lips.
Feeling something had changed, Jade was trying to open her eyes, and in her half-conscious state, with the “executive function” of her brain still foggy, her hands began to roam haphazardly over Rian’s back. She moaned when she felt the silky robe. “Unnhhh, Rian.”
Rian caressed Jade’s face, and passed her lips over Jade’s, barely grazing it.
“Do you want to kiss me?” she whispered, and then passed her lips over Jade’s again, moving in the opposite direction.
“Y-y-e-ssss,”Jade answered in her semi-conscious state. Her hands suddenly slipped through the large openings of the sleeves of the red silk kimono Rian was wearing. She slowly caressed the soft skin she was encountering. Goosebumps sprang up wherever she touched Rian.
She was waking slowly, and gave in to temptation, undone by the soft lips repeatedly brushing hers. There was nothing in the world quite like Rian’s lips, no kiss like her kiss. It was different kissing Rian, even if she wasn’t fully awake, yet, to enjoy it.
Describing the experience was impossible – she was all things wonderful. Her silky, smooth skin and the natural pleasant-smelling scent of lavender, blossom, linden, peaches and mango that wafted out of her were intoxicating. Her lips were soft and sweet, warm and delicious – there was no way not to react to them. She whimpered often during the kiss; and the sound of it was incredibly erotic. She liked to stroke my nape, run her fingertips on my now-bare scalp. It felt like kissing an angel; it felt like touching the infinite, and coming into contact with something indescribably, purely, wholly … good. And incredibly sexy.
“You know … underneath this robe, I’m naked.”
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Thanks skydancer, I laughed and I cried and I enjoyed all 37 great pages :-)
I feel a re=read coming on right from Let it Happen Chapter 1!
Look forward to the next post.
Glad to read RIAN is ok for the trauma she has and will endure.JADE redeemed herself rather quickly after all this is the woman she loves.Sure does a body good to know that tonight there is a chance of severe climaxs with a few scattered ”’i love yous” and the rolling thunder of two women in love coming together for the first time.Can”t wait for the post on this one.thanks
So glad they found one another again. Sweet , thanks
I love this story, thanks for posting, can`t wait for more pps
I’ve been re-reading all your stories in an effort to pin down exactly what draws me to your writing. First, you have ability to vividly paint a scene by addressing all of your reader’s senses. Sentences like “Fabienne’s heels were rapping out a staccato-like rhythm as the couple traversed the black-and-white tiled floor of the famed corridor.”, feed my sense of sight and sound that virtually put me right in the scene with the characters. Or passages like “Her silky, smooth skin and the natural pleasant-smelling scent of lavender, blossom, linden, peaches and mango that wafted out of her were intoxicating. Her lips were soft and sweet, warm and delicious…” heighten my sense of touch, taste and smell that I can feel the deep emotions of the characters right along with them.
Second, you write characters in such a way that you can’t help but root for them. Each main character, whether it be Bette, Tina, Diane, Jules, Harley, Jade or Rian, is flawed and broken at some level and must go on an emotional journey of self-discovery to find true happiness. As a writer, you give your reader an instant connection to the character by weaving in their inner thoughts, feelings, hopes and fears. As a reader, I feel an affinity toward the character’s struggle because I feel like I actually know her and can a part of me in her.
In pouring over all your works, I particularly like how you maintain a consistent timeline across all the characters and stories, and how many characters and storylines bleed over into each other. You have a well-developed talent in not only writing style that puts me right in the scene, but also in character development that makes me feel like I’m experiencing the moment right along with them. I certainly hope you continue to grace us with your talent and post stories here for years to come.
I tip my hat to Skydancer, you are a rare talent.
????. I. Can’t. Even.
Thank you doesn’t seem enough.
thanks Rian live.
the scene the Jade discovers Rian in the restaurant, our!
was awesome, all emotions of hade mixed between joy and
anger, and at the end to find out what really happened, was
sensational.
And now there’s no reason to live a big love.
You are fantastic!
The entire constellation.