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Chapter31.
Please Mill, I need you now. I gasped, lifting my head up to watch Millie.
I didn’t know why I wanted to watch, it wasn’t a very good idea because it was the sexiest thing I had seen in my entire life. Which did not help to keep a sense of control over my body.
As Millies hand reached my very heated centre she moved up my body to find my lips again with her own. I kissed her, practically devouring her as mouth our tongues strove for dominance and we pulled at one another’s lips.
I found myself craving to touch more of Millie, with her face next to mine and her eyes so ready to express the one emotion I would never tire of seeing on her beautiful face. I kissed her again, journeying my tongue to her ear as my hand held the back of her head and the other disappeared. As Millies fingers traced the outline of my wet lips, my own hand went on a journey to discover something similar.
The realisation on Millies face that I wasn’t going to be the only one to get that, much needed and constantly craved for feeling of immense pleasure and incredible release, showed in the form of a wan smile, just curling the sides of her mouth up. As we held each others eyes, our bodies still rocking together, our hands poised and ready.
Millie brought her lips down to mine and at the same time our fingers sank deep into each others very wet, open and willing bodies. We moaned in unison, both tensing as our fingers pulled out, only to sink back in again. As our hands kept up this rhythm and so did our tongues, the combination of penetrations was shaking our very souls. I didn’t know how much longer I could hold on for, my body was on too much of a high to be able to distinguish between nearly near the edge and very much falling over the edge. I mustve have been alternating between the two.
It was when Millie tugged my bottom lip into her mouth and pulled it with her teeth whilst uttering the words:
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(49 votes, average: 3.96 out of 5)
Seahurst has the best comment so I’m with her all the way. This is a five Loohing forward to boyh in LA together. thanks so much
aka ?. I was looking 4 a cont. of the shane and tab story.
this is worth more than 5 bloody stars! i’ve fallen in love with this story and your writing! please continue and post soon!
Hey Kat, I’m just catching up….Another superbly written chapter….You never cease to amaze me with your writing…..5 stars all the way:)
Diddo to what Seahurst said. And I know I have said it before, but I am going to say it so much more clearly now. The idea of the rating system seems not accurate to me in the least, because you always bring your reads such well written prose, and interesting, full characters. If this a four, then anything I’ve ever written is like a two or three. Sorry for the rant, but your story is so 20 stars.
This line….. “It wasn’t a perfect world and neither Millie nor I was perfect, so we would have to rely on the perfection of our love to over rule the imperfection of our mediocre minds…” was wonderful. This is a five all the way!! Thank you.
OMG u posted this really quickly, thank you!!!! im with Seahurst, that line was like…wow! Not looking fwd to Millie leaving… but looking fwd to Trixie going to LA *wink wink*