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    Choosing part1

     

    Perfect. Bravo. Standing Ovation. Why don’t I give in? Trust her, kiss her, love her, and fuck her… why don’t I do it?

     

    You know what? I DON’T FUCKING KNOW. She is everything – my everything. Her words are from her soul… her words… her words capture my heart… her words penetrate though me, leaving me speechless.

     

    “Keep going…” I manage to say. She smiles with tears in her eyes.

     

    “I want to get married for real this time Carmen. I want to see you walk down the aisle in that gorgeous dress. I want to live with you in the house that we bought 5 years ago… I want to have kids with you… Kids CARMEN… I want to love you forever … I want you to be my everything… because we have waited for too long. I’ve waited too long to say all this, and now I feel like this is the only chance I’ve got left with you. I’ll keep on talking if I have to because I don’t want to spend a day without seeing your face… without feeling you. It’s weird because this doesn’t feel real anymore… every time I see you I feel like I’m dreaming. This doesn’t feel real at all. And I’m just waiting until it does…”

     

    “Real. Like you, I … I don’t even know what’s real anymore…”

     

    “Me and you are real…” she said standing up.

     

    “Shane” I moved towards her but she stays standing still.

     

    “NO. Carmen… this,” she takes both my hands and puts one of them against her heart and the other against mine “This is real. We knew it the first time… we laid eyes on each other” I smile a tear finally falls from my eyes. “We were waiting until the real deal comes along remember?… Well, it did Carmen. We ARE the real deal. You and me… this, this is how it’s supposed to be.”

     

    “How do you know who the real deal is?” We both look back to the door and there stands Nikky.

     

    “How exactly do you know that?” I looked back at Shane, who was looking at Nikky. I say nothing and turn around to sit on one of the seats in the corner wanting to disappear from all this… this can’t be real. But Shane didn’t let go of my hands and turned me around to face her again

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    1. DAMN!!! WAT A COME BACK!!! ~sitz & calmz down~ lol… Okay, as you can see I’m supa psyched dat you back to grace us wit da sequel… I think my puppy pout dat I gave you at da otha forum must’ve worked ~cocky smile~ I still got it, lol…. Man, my gurl Carmen haz a lot to think about…. well not really cuz my gurl Shane iz DA ONE 4 sho… Whelp, I hope you bout to update again cuz I already needz my fix lyke A.S.A.P. Lyke alwayz from me, Baby-gurl, LYLAS :p Stank, da’ one and only, chicka :D Holla at me if ya need anything, babez ;-) I’m out…

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