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Choosing part1
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“Because of this,” she said. And then she planted a kiss on my lips… a rough kiss, but a good kiss… she was breathing hard, trying so hard to not let go. Then the kiss got slower, deeper. The kiss was perfect, even though it tasted like tears. She was crying again. When we parted I didn’t want to open my eyes. When I did, Shane’s were still closed. She opens her eyes after a minute, and Nikky starts laughing.
“Then she’s the real deal … for me.” I quickly turned around and went to sit in the corner. Nikky moves closer to Shane.
“So… you’re Shane. You’re the one who wants to take my girl away from me huh?”
“I hate to break it to you, but she’s never truly been your girl… she was mine long before you ever existed” Nikky looked pissed… they both did.
“…Would you two just shut the fuck up…?”
“No Carmen… We aren’t going to. How can you do this huh? You promised to love me until death… and now you’re gonna leave me because of her??”
“I didn’t say I was going to leave you, because I don’t want to…okay, look. This is how we are gonna do it…”
“Oh so you make the plans now,”
“Nikky, shut the FUCK up. Okay?? I need time… time away from both of you, because I can’t choose… I just can’t. Not now… Shane, when can you go home?”
“Uh, in about a week…”
“Ok… A week it is then… we are going to be apart for a week and then… then I will make a choice. I’ll call one of you and explain… explain why I didn’t choose you. If I don’t call you that day, it means I choose you. And we’ll meet at the field on Johnson’s street on the mountains.”
“The one we bought?” Shane asked
“We? as in YOU TWO? Carmen?! You said you wanted us to live there!”
“Wait, what?” Shane said confused.
“SHUT UP. That’s it… a week from now.”
“And don’t we get to talk? You heard the speech this bitch told you… don’t I get to say something baby?”
“Nikky you have… trust me. We’ve lived together for 2 years… and unlike Shane you’ve always told me how you felt… you were never afraid to say how you really feel and that’s what I love about you baby…” I got closer to her and touched he face “But I’m not gonna make this decision based on what any of you have just said. I’m going with the heart on this one…”
“But you choose me minutes ago before she said something” she said crying.
“Yeah, I chose you, but when I got out didn’t know why I did… you see If I do choose you Nikky… I want to be able so say why… so please understand this and let me go.” She stepped aside and I left the small hospital room.
People think the ‘right thing’ equals happiness… that the ‘right thing’ equals life… that right equals right. But now I think different… ‘Right’ doesn’t mean happy or sad, or life or death.
The ‘right ’ means… nothing.
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DAMN!!! WAT A COME BACK!!! ~sitz & calmz down~ lol… Okay, as you can see I’m supa psyched dat you back to grace us wit da sequel… I think my puppy pout dat I gave you at da otha forum must’ve worked ~cocky smile~ I still got it, lol…. Man, my gurl Carmen haz a lot to think about…. well not really cuz my gurl Shane iz DA ONE 4 sho… Whelp, I hope you bout to update again cuz I already needz my fix lyke A.S.A.P. Lyke alwayz from me, Baby-gurl, LYLAS :p Stank, da’ one and only, chicka :D Holla at me if ya need anything, babez ;-) I’m out…