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Closure – Chapter 12
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Bette softly said “Not if I get to her first” as Tina tried to get her to calm down by rubbing her arm. All Tina could think about was that she wanted a piece of whatever was left of the bitch after Dana, Bette and Shane were done with her.
“I know what you guys are feeling and what you are thinking. I’ve had the same thoughts all night. If Jackie showed up here right now, I would do my best to knock her head off with a tennis racket.” The girls gave grim smiles.
“But right now Alice is hurt. She is broken.” Dana voice faltered as she thought once again of all the pain Alice had endured. She gathered her resolve and continued strongly “We need to focus our energy on her. Jackie isn’t going anywhere, but, we have a limited amount of time to help Alice to make sure she doesn’t go back to that bitch or something worse.”
The girls heard the wisdom in Dana’s speech and wondered when their dorky friend got so mature.
Once everyone had a chance to settle down Dana laid out her plans. As much as Dana wanted to tear Jackie apart with her bare hands, she realized that it might be better to try to do this the legal way first. Dana wanted to get Alice to a doctor and make sure she was OK. She also thought it was important to get all her injuries documented. After that, she wanted the police involved to get a restraining order in place and try to get Jackie arrested for domestic abuse. Alice also needed a safe place to live where Jackie could not find her.
Dana had done a lot of thinking about this situation. Her initial, gut feeling was to grab Alice and run as far away as possible. She knew that was not the best option. She wanted Alice to get her life back, to live without fear and to not feel like a victim. She wanted Alice to get back the control that Jackie had taken from her. Alice would lose even more than had already been taken from her if she had to leave the only home she ever knew.
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Sorry I haven’t been commenting much lately, hun. I adore this story, and I absolutely love Protective! Dana and the rest of the group rallying around Alice. All the planning to keep her safe is great, I just hope she lets them protect her. This is great!
This is what I wanted, This way the gang want go to jail for murder. Jackie will be smart to stay away from Alice,but I don’t believe she is very smart. She love control and she thinks she has that over Alice thanks
Great to hear that you made it home ok. Poor MT, I think she is finally home too. I have a trip next month and I hope I won’t encounter any snow delay. Really glad to hear that you formulating more stories. I think one at a time is hard enough. I don’t know how the others do it. Pretty impressive. Back to this update. Oh, here comes the tennis racquet. “Dorky friend got so mature,” Hooray! I am very proud of D being all cool, calm and collected. Great plan with the gang’s help! B didn’t burn her bridges with JW. Haha ha. What an operation even including C’s cousin And Harrison’s butch friends. Now we have a small army. Would A use the pepper spray and taser? To be fair, I would rather see an one on one between D & Jackie without weapons. Mini being towed at Runyan Canyon, MaGoose, you really are very good with detail. Fantastic. I can’t wait to see how it would all work out. I do hope A would go along with the plan.
I don’t really see Alice going along with this idea very easily. Abuser’s tend to have a great amount of power over the abused. But I do have to commend the women. They showed strength and unity. This is probably the most impressive mission I have ever seen. It’s like when Tina was being stalked by the bitchy lady in season 1, when the girls had poker night, locked the doors, covered the windows, etc. I think you did a good job. They’re making Alice their priority. Jackie ain’t even worth thinking about at this point. The legal matters, police protection, relocation, and a discreet intervention. Now that all says “We love you and we’re not gonna let anything happen to you”.
Clapping well done hon,i really enjoy this story and ur writing it well.Thanks again and PPS
YAY ur back!! I love this stroy lots and lots! I still have that pole here! Ooooo i’d love to see what the girls would do at the intervention, they’re really good at the whole mission thing =) love it love it pps!!
-Hangs head in shame-, I knew I missed a lot when I was without my internet but only just realised that you had started posting a story. I’m so sorry I haven’t been around since the start, as a co-first story writer I know how scary the posting is. Anyway it’s been my loss not to have read this until now, I just read it all in one go and I love it. You are tackling a difficult situation so well. It’s nice to see Danish in such trustworthy hands, can’t wait to see if Dana is able to persuade Alice to stay away. Congratulations on such a great story, now I’ve found it I’m hear to stay!
Oh boy Alice will alice listen, if dana knows how to push’s alice’s buttons she can get her to listen and go from there if not it’s gonna be a long road. great update!
go team!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
so glad to read another update of this story!! pms
Why do the jerks always have my name?
Just stumbled onto your story and so glad that I did, awesome frickin writing…a fair fight is just that but physical, emotional/mental abuse is a whole nother ballgame,excerting control onto another person..well hell I want to smack the bitch down and she’s just a fictional character,you got some powerful writing going. Love how the family is circling the wagons, you go after one your going after all of them!