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Closure – Chapter 12
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Dana gave each of the girls their assignment and a legal pad and pen. It would have been humorous if the situation wasn’t so serious. For their part, the gang was pleased to have something productive to do to help Alice. It gave them a way to channel their anger and guilt.
Bette and Tina were on the phone to various contacts they had. Bette was working the legal angle — and found herself very glad that she never burned bridges with Joyce Wischnia. Joyce was able to give her detailed information on the process to get the restraining order and the other legal options available to Alice.
Tina was talking to some domestic abuse counselors she knew to set up for Alice to get checked out by a doctor, speak to the police and find a therapist for on-going treatment.
Shane called Carmen and briefed her on the situation. Shane did not know much Spanish, but, guessed that the words she heard from Carmen should not be said in polite company. Their job was Jackie. Specifically, they were to use their various acquaintances to keep an eye on her. They wanted to make sure she stayed away from Alice and wanted to have as much advance notice of her movements as possible. They would also handle getting anything Alice needed from her apartment like her mail. Carmen would be sure to have one of her male relatives with her when she went over. Shane could take care of herself — she never forgot any of the lessons she learned on the streets. Both were hoping to have a chance to give Jackie a bit of payback.
Dana also asked Shane to get the locks on Alice’s apartment changed as soon as possible.
Dana called her manager and trainer to clear her schedule for the next two weeks. She did not want to let Alice out of her sight. It was as much for Alice’s security as it was for Dana’s sanity.
Frankly, Dana would gladly throw away her career to take care of Alice. She had enough money due to her father’s investments of her winnings and a small trust where they could live comfortably. However, she understood that Alice would feel guilty if she gave up tennis and this was all about helping Alice right now.
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Sorry I haven’t been commenting much lately, hun. I adore this story, and I absolutely love Protective! Dana and the rest of the group rallying around Alice. All the planning to keep her safe is great, I just hope she lets them protect her. This is great!
This is what I wanted, This way the gang want go to jail for murder. Jackie will be smart to stay away from Alice,but I don’t believe she is very smart. She love control and she thinks she has that over Alice thanks
Great to hear that you made it home ok. Poor MT, I think she is finally home too. I have a trip next month and I hope I won’t encounter any snow delay. Really glad to hear that you formulating more stories. I think one at a time is hard enough. I don’t know how the others do it. Pretty impressive. Back to this update. Oh, here comes the tennis racquet. “Dorky friend got so mature,” Hooray! I am very proud of D being all cool, calm and collected. Great plan with the gang’s help! B didn’t burn her bridges with JW. Haha ha. What an operation even including C’s cousin And Harrison’s butch friends. Now we have a small army. Would A use the pepper spray and taser? To be fair, I would rather see an one on one between D & Jackie without weapons. Mini being towed at Runyan Canyon, MaGoose, you really are very good with detail. Fantastic. I can’t wait to see how it would all work out. I do hope A would go along with the plan.
I don’t really see Alice going along with this idea very easily. Abuser’s tend to have a great amount of power over the abused. But I do have to commend the women. They showed strength and unity. This is probably the most impressive mission I have ever seen. It’s like when Tina was being stalked by the bitchy lady in season 1, when the girls had poker night, locked the doors, covered the windows, etc. I think you did a good job. They’re making Alice their priority. Jackie ain’t even worth thinking about at this point. The legal matters, police protection, relocation, and a discreet intervention. Now that all says “We love you and we’re not gonna let anything happen to you”.
Clapping well done hon,i really enjoy this story and ur writing it well.Thanks again and PPS
YAY ur back!! I love this stroy lots and lots! I still have that pole here! Ooooo i’d love to see what the girls would do at the intervention, they’re really good at the whole mission thing =) love it love it pps!!
-Hangs head in shame-, I knew I missed a lot when I was without my internet but only just realised that you had started posting a story. I’m so sorry I haven’t been around since the start, as a co-first story writer I know how scary the posting is. Anyway it’s been my loss not to have read this until now, I just read it all in one go and I love it. You are tackling a difficult situation so well. It’s nice to see Danish in such trustworthy hands, can’t wait to see if Dana is able to persuade Alice to stay away. Congratulations on such a great story, now I’ve found it I’m hear to stay!
Oh boy Alice will alice listen, if dana knows how to push’s alice’s buttons she can get her to listen and go from there if not it’s gonna be a long road. great update!
go team!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
so glad to read another update of this story!! pms
Why do the jerks always have my name?
Just stumbled onto your story and so glad that I did, awesome frickin writing…a fair fight is just that but physical, emotional/mental abuse is a whole nother ballgame,excerting control onto another person..well hell I want to smack the bitch down and she’s just a fictional character,you got some powerful writing going. Love how the family is circling the wagons, you go after one your going after all of them!