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Closure – Chapter 12
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Dana also wasn’t quite sure where things stood with Alice. Were they even friends right now? She knew she wanted that and more. She needed the writer in her life in the same way she needed air to breathe. Those thoughts had to be put on hold for now. She had to rebuild their friendship and help Alice heal before she did anything but dream of more.
She then called Harrison. Not surprisingly, he had some very butch friends and promised to help Dana with anything she needed. The first thing Dana asked was for him to get her some pepper spray and a taser. She figured that she could take Jackie in a fair fight, but, realized correctly that Jackie does not fight fair. Harrison said he would make some calls and get them as soon as possible. Harrison loved Alice and was devastated when she and Dana broke up. He is a true romantic at heart and would do anything he could for his girls.
Dana called the security company for the condo complex and requested extra diligence on watching her unit — just in case Jackie decided to come by.
Dana had turned off Alice’s cell phone last night. She did not want any interruptions from Jackie right now. Let the cunt talk to voicemail. The next item on her list was to get Alice added to her cell phone account and get her a new, unlisted number.
The girls talked and knew that Alice could not stay at her apartment or any of their homes. They needed to find her a place that Jackie did not know about. As luck would have it, Dana had been looking around for new investments and thought about rental properties. She called her realtor and was able to rent one of the houses she was considering for purchase. It was perfect. It had three beds, two-and-a-half baths and was in a gated community with a private beach. It was newly renovated and fully furnished, had a Jacuzzi and was right near the tennis court in the complex. It would be perfect. Dana had the contracts faxed over immediately and rented it for a month with an option for additional time.
Dana and Bette quickly put together a list of items they would need for the house which included toiletries, linens and food. Bette and Tina would get the shopping done later that day. Dana called her trainer back to get her to rent some basic exercise equipment and arrange for it to be delivered to the house.
Shane and Carmen planned to pick up the mini and drive it to the rental. They did not want to move it until they had somewhere to bring it where it would not be seen by Jackie. Runyan Canyon was safe for now, but, none of them wanted it to get towed.
It was about an hour later when the calls died down and the girls were briefing each other on their progress. Dana was amazed at the amount they were able to get done. Everything was falling into place. Dana realized that you can never underestimate the power of lesbians on a mission. They heard the shower turn on signaling that Alice was awake.
Now came the hard part.
She knew that how they approached Alice would be crucial. None of the planning they did would work if they couldn’t get Alice to agree. The girls decided that Dana would talk to Alice upstairs. If she agreed to stay away from Jackie, Dana would text Shane and they would all quietly leave. If not, the girls felt they had no choice but to perform an actual intervention. There was no way they would let Alice go back to Jackie.
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Sorry I haven’t been commenting much lately, hun. I adore this story, and I absolutely love Protective! Dana and the rest of the group rallying around Alice. All the planning to keep her safe is great, I just hope she lets them protect her. This is great!
This is what I wanted, This way the gang want go to jail for murder. Jackie will be smart to stay away from Alice,but I don’t believe she is very smart. She love control and she thinks she has that over Alice thanks
Great to hear that you made it home ok. Poor MT, I think she is finally home too. I have a trip next month and I hope I won’t encounter any snow delay. Really glad to hear that you formulating more stories. I think one at a time is hard enough. I don’t know how the others do it. Pretty impressive. Back to this update. Oh, here comes the tennis racquet. “Dorky friend got so mature,” Hooray! I am very proud of D being all cool, calm and collected. Great plan with the gang’s help! B didn’t burn her bridges with JW. Haha ha. What an operation even including C’s cousin And Harrison’s butch friends. Now we have a small army. Would A use the pepper spray and taser? To be fair, I would rather see an one on one between D & Jackie without weapons. Mini being towed at Runyan Canyon, MaGoose, you really are very good with detail. Fantastic. I can’t wait to see how it would all work out. I do hope A would go along with the plan.
I don’t really see Alice going along with this idea very easily. Abuser’s tend to have a great amount of power over the abused. But I do have to commend the women. They showed strength and unity. This is probably the most impressive mission I have ever seen. It’s like when Tina was being stalked by the bitchy lady in season 1, when the girls had poker night, locked the doors, covered the windows, etc. I think you did a good job. They’re making Alice their priority. Jackie ain’t even worth thinking about at this point. The legal matters, police protection, relocation, and a discreet intervention. Now that all says “We love you and we’re not gonna let anything happen to you”.
Clapping well done hon,i really enjoy this story and ur writing it well.Thanks again and PPS
YAY ur back!! I love this stroy lots and lots! I still have that pole here! Ooooo i’d love to see what the girls would do at the intervention, they’re really good at the whole mission thing =) love it love it pps!!
-Hangs head in shame-, I knew I missed a lot when I was without my internet but only just realised that you had started posting a story. I’m so sorry I haven’t been around since the start, as a co-first story writer I know how scary the posting is. Anyway it’s been my loss not to have read this until now, I just read it all in one go and I love it. You are tackling a difficult situation so well. It’s nice to see Danish in such trustworthy hands, can’t wait to see if Dana is able to persuade Alice to stay away. Congratulations on such a great story, now I’ve found it I’m hear to stay!
Oh boy Alice will alice listen, if dana knows how to push’s alice’s buttons she can get her to listen and go from there if not it’s gonna be a long road. great update!
go team!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
so glad to read another update of this story!! pms
Why do the jerks always have my name?
Just stumbled onto your story and so glad that I did, awesome frickin writing…a fair fight is just that but physical, emotional/mental abuse is a whole nother ballgame,excerting control onto another person..well hell I want to smack the bitch down and she’s just a fictional character,you got some powerful writing going. Love how the family is circling the wagons, you go after one your going after all of them!