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Closure – Chapter 2
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“Work has been busy. I’m doing fine. Take care. — A”
Dana could not count the hours she spent re-reading these small missives for any clue as to what was going on with Alice.
Other than those messages it was like Alice had dropped off the face of the Earth. The girls still met frequently at The Planet and couldn’t help but look up whenever the door would open — hoping to see Alice. Her conversations with her friends always contained some mention of the blond writer and whether anyone had heard from her.
The ironic thing is that if this had happened to anyone in their group except Alice, Alice would have been the first to track the person down and drag them back to the framily. She really was the heart of their group and a big part of the reason they were all friends in the first place. The group was just going through the motions without her. It was as if life was on hold.
She made endless plans on how to reach Alice. Dana also understood deep down that Alice would not be approachable until she was ready.
Dana desperately wanted to get back with Alice. She would be happy to start first as friends and then hopefully as more. This break-up made her realize the depth of her feelings. It crushed her to hear Alice was back with Gabby and that the affair went as it had on their previous hookups. Dana got very drunk that night she heard about Gabby cheating on Alice and the subsequent breakup. She did it to try to keep herself from finding Alice from under whatever rock she was hiding and then holding her and never letting go. Dana woke up to empty arms and a pounding headache.
Then one morning everything changed. Shane called and said they saw Alice and she would be attending a group get-together. Shane sounded odd on the phone but Dana gave it little thought. She was ecstatic and felt like she had a new lease on life. Dana was determined to do everything she could to take the right path this time. The path that led back home. The path that led to Alice.
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i have a feeling this is going to be a long bummpy road, but i am looking forward to it, because i know in the end we all love happy danish :). Great job, keep it up, pps.
MaGoose, I can totally relate to your nervousness. Just last night when I started reading “Posthumous Wisdom”, I found my heart pounding heavily all the way till the end of page 2 and I am just a reader. I can only imagine what you writers go through every time you submit a post. Back to the story, “”closure” is a dish best served warm,” clever! I love how you showed us D’s thoughts. I feel bad that A being all alone and lost her KCRW job. Maybe when she got her life back, there would be a better offer. One of the reasons I like A so much is “Alice would have been the first to track the person down and drag them back to the family.” She was everything one would want as a loyal and caring friend. I too hope D would find her way back to A soon. Can’t wait to read more. Great Job! Thanks!
I’m loving this story. I especially like how you wrote from Dana’s POV. She is my favorite character. I can’t wait to find out what’s going on with Alice. Post soon this is a great story.
I love Dana. but don’t make it too easy for her heheheh this is great. Hope to see you post soon :D
Get them back together! Please dear God! Keep the love alive.
Awsome post!!! Please continue, I like how you put in Dana’s point of view of the whole thing. Can’t wait for the next chapter!!!
great job..so sweet i feel a little sorry for dana in this chap hmm very interested for whats coming can’t wait :)
Magoose. It was so nice what you said about me. You one of my very avid readers, who’s comments are held in high regard. I love your story. I love DANISH. keep up the amazing work.