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Closure – Chapter 2
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She didn’t want to be out all night and wake up to a different woman every morning. She wanted the one person who completed her life. She wanted the person who cared about her no matter what her current ranking is. The person who always made sure to have some “organic crap” in her fridge when Dana would come by hungry after a practice. The woman who would spend hours on the couch watching tennis matches while Dana would prep for a big game. The lover who could bring her to heights of ecstasy that she did not know existed.
Dana didn’t have it in her to be a player and none of the women she met could hold a candle to her Alice.
Too late Dana realized that she not only broke Alice’s heart but her spirit as well. She knew better than almost anyone that Alice had abandonment issues. And Dana, the person — maybe the only person ever — to whom she trusted her heart, trampled all over it like so many people had in the past.
It gutted her when Alice ran out of The Planet after apologizing for her behavior. She wasn’t sure what to expect from that meeting. She certainly didn’t expect what happened. Dana had assumed there would be more embarrassments and outbursts. She did not expect to see Alice looking so, well, like Alice. And looking into her eyes was so comforting. She could see that Alice had made great strides to try to get past the demons that caused her to start the stalking and other odd behavior.
Dana went after Alice when she left. She had so many things she wanted to say now that it seemed like Alice would actually be able to hear them. Unfortunately, she was not at her apartment. Dana wanted to reach her at work, but, Alice had been fired from the radio station due to her erratic behavior. She still had her job at LA Magazine by the skin of her teeth. Unfortunately, she could do that from anywhere and anywhere but home seemed to be where she was.
Calls went un-returned. She did get an occasional e-mail that let her know Alice was still alive. She treasured these notes even though most were along the lines of:
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i have a feeling this is going to be a long bummpy road, but i am looking forward to it, because i know in the end we all love happy danish :). Great job, keep it up, pps.
MaGoose, I can totally relate to your nervousness. Just last night when I started reading “Posthumous Wisdom”, I found my heart pounding heavily all the way till the end of page 2 and I am just a reader. I can only imagine what you writers go through every time you submit a post. Back to the story, “”closure” is a dish best served warm,” clever! I love how you showed us D’s thoughts. I feel bad that A being all alone and lost her KCRW job. Maybe when she got her life back, there would be a better offer. One of the reasons I like A so much is “Alice would have been the first to track the person down and drag them back to the family.” She was everything one would want as a loyal and caring friend. I too hope D would find her way back to A soon. Can’t wait to read more. Great Job! Thanks!
I’m loving this story. I especially like how you wrote from Dana’s POV. She is my favorite character. I can’t wait to find out what’s going on with Alice. Post soon this is a great story.
I love Dana. but don’t make it too easy for her heheheh this is great. Hope to see you post soon :D
Get them back together! Please dear God! Keep the love alive.
Awsome post!!! Please continue, I like how you put in Dana’s point of view of the whole thing. Can’t wait for the next chapter!!!
great job..so sweet i feel a little sorry for dana in this chap hmm very interested for whats coming can’t wait :)
Magoose. It was so nice what you said about me. You one of my very avid readers, who’s comments are held in high regard. I love your story. I love DANISH. keep up the amazing work.