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Closure – Chapter 24
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They drove out to a big mall that had one of those our hour eyeglass places. Alice, Dana and Shane spent a hysterical half-hour with each of them trying on more and more ridiculous glasses. They finally settled down and picked out a nice pair for Alice. She had her prescription in her wallet and completed all the paperwork with one of the store workers. The girls decided to walk around the mall a little.
Dana forgot all about being a famous tennis professional and Shane did not give a thought to her cool “player” status. They became big goofs, each trying to out-do the other to hear Alice laugh. And laugh she did. She honestly could not remember when they last had a day like this. It had been too long.
They stopped in a book store and Alice was looking at magazines. Any one she showed the slightest interest in was immediately picked up by Dana to purchase. They heard Shane from one row over say “Al? You have got to see this!”
Dana and Alice went around the rack to find Shane looking at the sports magazines. They were treated to Shane holding up the just-published monthly issue of Women in Sports — featuring a cover girl-type shot of the one-and-only Dana Fairbanks. Shane cocked her head and changed her expression to try and match how Dana looked on the cover.
Dana immediately started blushing and put down the stack of magazines she had to try to get the magazine away from Shane. While she was doing that, Alice reached over and grabbed another copy from the rack and snuck it into the ever growing pile of reading materials.
Dana got the magazine from Shane and put is back in the rack. “Quit goofing around, Shane. It’s time to go pick up the glasses.” She reached out to hold Alice’s hand and they went to the check-out.
The group made their way back to the glasses store. Alice was thrilled with the new pair and Dana secretly felt that she had never had a sexier pair of spectacles. What *was* it with her and Alice’s glasses?
There was a box by the door to donate old glasses. Dana felt incredibly proud of Alice when she unceremoniously dropped her old “Jackie” glasses in the bin. They walked out of the shop and into the beautiful day.
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dana is finally communicating very openly i might add. glad the girls were able to alice a nice afternnon at the mall, girl time is always fun!
AWWW! I’m glad they are finally getting back into the swing of things. I missed the funny, sarcastic Alice but she’s coming back and I forsee…okay i’m not yoda but I cant wait to see how Dana and Alice prgress and finally take care of Jackie! Thanks so much for another FaNtAStiC post!!! PPS!!
I have been a silent reader of this story! I like it! I really like how you are handling Alice’s recovery! Can’t wait for the scene where they “re-connect”! Oh and for some reason I keep picturing Jackie Warner as Jackie! Keep up the good work!
Hello MaGoose, that was so very sweet sometimes it is nice when we can fall back into the routines of our pasts… they can bring out so much within us… sometimes we let our lives get to far ahead of us and we tend to forget those things that made life a little more comfortable… I love the dynamics that Shane, Dana and Alice have together, beautifully captured. Sincerely, JC
Aww, that was adorable. The AlShaDane glasses buying day sounds like so much fun! And I’m with Dana, there’s just something about Alice in her glasses. I don’t know what it is, but it’s very, very good. Thanks for the reassurance that things are gonna work out with the hosebitch, lol. I threw that baguette in the shed should Dana need it.
Shopping with the girls and goofing with articles. It can’t get any better than this. It’s good to see Alice smiling.
I am sooooo sorry that I haven’t been able to comment on the past few chapters, because they have really been great. And this was one even better. I love the fact that Dana’s not running away from conflict and that she’s totally devoted to Alice. And the kisses on the forehead are sweet and everything, but how many more must we endure before the real action begins???? :)
Ah here comes the rebirth of the Alice we know and love…YAY! What a fun day out you wrote for them all. So good too that Dana isn’t letting anything fester, honest open communication is going to get these girls where they need to go!
MaGoose, what a terrific chapter! Love all the little things that you brought our attention to, such as “the comforter, her hair had a mind of its own, gathering her courage, Dana carefully thought” & so on. It felt as if I was watching an episode in my head. Really well done. I see that A still did not have all her confidence but things were looking up. Just the simple fact that she gave away her Jackie’s glasses indicated her subconscious of letting go. Really now, “what *was* it with her and Alice’s glasses? I wear glasses too and everyone just call me 4 eyes and never receive any compliment. Totally love the 3 musketeers at the mall. I am very impressed by D being so forthcoming with her feelings for A. I too hope that you will bring them together soon. The last part was very sweet. But I can see A might still need some more time to heal her wounded soul. Oh btw, can I order a copy of that sport magazine too? I also felt at ease that your shed is ready and I trust that with you, HF, and everyone else will give D a hand if necessary. I can’t wait till I return to participate again in commenting with everyone. Thank you.
WOOT> GO DANA. I love her. I want my very own. “sigh” But anyway. I love the story as usual magoose keep up the amazing work. YOUR MY HERO
Love the communication between alice and Daana. Glad to see the fun the girls had together.. The glasses that Alice threw away,what if Jackie goes o get new glasses and sees them. The glasses was very important in this chapter to me. thanks
Awesome chap, so glad to see the three of them relaxed and having a good time.fyi yes we profile in Canada but really 3000+ miles away, I’m in no data base and never said I’ll kill her (eh paper trail being left here)ninja stealth darlin…ooh and what you learn from nursing school and Faith the V.P.S, there’s more then sharp and pointy…the 5 basics to torture, plus if some dumb ass can’t get outa a walkin freezer,so not my fault! :)
See, this Dana’s so good everybody wants one for their own lol Thanks for the chap Magoose, love it as usual. :)
Awwwwwww I heart AlShaDane! Great post, Al was so sweet getting all upset and then it was about her and awwww! I know we must have some weird wavelength experience going on =D ooo yes i need big heavy tools, maybe some powerful weed killer, oh and a cage to keep them in once they’ve been subdued…if you have any tranquilizer darts lying about that would be a big help these socks are unpredictable predators who are not safe unless heavily medicated. No thank YOUUU for the giggles =D be vigilant – the socks are on the move. PPS!