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Closure – Chapter 25
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“Can I tell you something, Dane, and have you not be mad at me?” Alice said quietly.
“Anything, Alice. Even if I don’t like what you say, I won’t be mad at you.”
“You really need to take a shower.”
Dana burst out laughing so hard that she almost dumped Alice off her lap and onto the floor.
Later that night, Dana was shutting down the house and stopped by Alice’s door to do one of her nightly checks. She was surprised at the noise she heard from Alice’s room. It was a sound she hadn’t heard in a long time.
“MMMMmmmmmmm…” Could be heard through the door. Was that what she thought it was? The last time Dana heard that noise, she was in between Alice’s legs and giving her a good tongue fucking.
“Oh, yes…” It was quiet but unmistakable. Dana got a firm image in her mind of Alice, with one hand between her legs and the other working her nipples.
“Ahhhhhhh…” She was getting close. Dana knew all the signs…er…noises. She started breathing heavily and felt her body responding to the moans she heard and the visions in her head. Her back was against the wall and she slipped her hand into her underwear and started rubbing her clit in time to Alice’s moans.
She was breathing hard and made a soft moan of her own. “Quiet, Fairbanks, quiet…” Dana mentally berated herself. She heard Alice reach her peak just as she crashed into her own orgasm. She managed to stay on her feet for most of it but found her legs giving out and she sank to the floor outside Alice’s door.
The girls were breathing in sync as their bodies slowly came back under control. Dana sat outside the door for about 15 minutes until she felt she could look and act normally.
She stood up and knocked lightly on Alice’s door. She heard the covers shift and then Alice said “You can come in, Dane.”
Dana walked in and couldn’t help but smile when she saw the satisfied, relaxed look on Alice’s face.
“I’m going to bed. You need anything?” She asked solicitously.
“No, Dane, I’m good.” You sure as hell are, thought Dana.
“Alright. Sleep well.”
“You, too, Dane. Goodnight.”
“Goodnight, Al.”
Both women slept very well that night.
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Bahahahahaha oh that was sooooooooooooo hot and they KISSSEED! K-I-S-S-I-N-G! Great post =D =0=0=0=0 would you really use it? Awww i’d feel so special! *hugs herself* I’ve had to buy padlocks and barracade myself in a padded room at night o_O they’re coming…thanks for another great post, I’ve got to dash so only a quick comment. Thanks gigglebuddy ;)
“You feel like home, Alice.” – Awwwwww. And I just have to say, picturing you on a platform in a lady-suit with a hat, waving to your constituents and promising “DANAS FOR EVERYONE!” is cracking me up. Majorly. I’m giggling, and I don’t normally giggle. I adored this. Nice to know that Alice felt comfortable enough to do something like that at the end, after the setback I thought maybe she’d shy away from sex. I’m glad Dana is being so damn wonderful to her about everything.
You feel like Home. That said it all. Alice is well on her way. She is getting stronger in body and mentally/ Give her awhile and she will kick Jackies a&& herself. thanks
omg…. hilarious last scene!!! “Sure as hell you are.” why do I keep picturing Alice in Charlie’s Angels spoof. omg…. I’m glad Alice is making progress. That is a progress to admit what she’s doing. yeah :) omg. Alice and Dana both need some actions going between them. But it was sweet of Dana to ignore hearing Alice. haha I couldn’t have ;)
It’s so on now. That whole having to listen to Alice must have killed Dana. She should pay her back. It would be funny. I love the story Magoose. I can’t wait to see what you have in the works. I think Jackie needs to get tazered. That would work for me
You already have my vote Magoose. Will you hire me as campaign manager though? lol DANAS FOR EVERYONE!!!
It is normal to worry about getting somebody mad over even the smallest of things. It’d be normal even if Alice worried about clipping her toenails too loud. But these two women are in love and that should never change. I definitely didn’t expect Alice to have a *moan* dream near the end. Nice touch.
holy frig…incredibly sweet and incredibly HOT!! (heh don’t piss Shanesthe..is the mantra at work well except they don’t call me that, I should make them call me that it would amuse me :D oh and honest I didn’t know she was in the freezer when I locked it nor did I beam her with the frozen fish she must have fallen on it..2 methods down 3 to go)looking forward to next post!
First of all sorry for no commenting for a while been reli busy and only just started reading all these great stories again and just caught up with urs today. Oh and am i glad i have Al and Dana are so sweet and tentative together and Dana is so considerate of Alice it’s so romantic between the two. Thank god Jackie got a taster of what she deserves for doing what she’s done to Alice. This last chapter was a good one, i must say i reli did not see that last bit coming nice touch lol. Brilliant writing and brilliant story of course still hooked and loving it and cant wait for ur next post :). FANTASTIC PPS :) X X X
i felt bad for alice. it will take while before she is able to feel comfortable and confident with her own decisions. i think alice needs a like boo time visit,lol…:)
great chapter!!! those girls crack me up..i love this story :)
OH YIPPY SKIPPY!!! First kiss all over again! I cant wait to see how the progress, glad to see Dana getting brave and Alice not rejecting her. Loved it, Keep Jackie out of the picture unless she’s getting beat down! ;P THANK YOU!! PPS!!
Sorry I didn’t comment on your last chapter, which was great. Life kind of got in the way (I hate it when that happens :S). Seriously… I would have had to wait longer than 15 minutes before going in after hearing Alice like that ;) Looking forward to your next post :D.
I’ve never commented on this story, but I like the whole perspective of it. It’s refreshing. And yay, Dana and Alice kissed!! :D