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Closure – Chapter 25
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“I saw your note. I wanted to come and watch you play. But I didn’t know if you would want me there. And then the two thoughts just kept going around in my mind. I can’t even make a simple decision anymore.” Alice started the softly cry. “I mean… It seems some days like I am getting over all this shit and then something like this happens.”
Dana gathered Alice up so that she was sitting in Dana’s lap and held her as tight as she could. “Alice? You can and should do anything you want to.” Dana reached down and lifted Alice’s chin so she could see her eyes. “I know you are still struggling with that, but, please know that you don’t need to worry around me.” Dana took a deep breath. There was something she wanted to say and it seemed like a good time.
“I made a huge mistake in my life when I told you that you were smothering me.” Alice seemed ready to go and Dana gently stopped her. “After we broke up I had other people around me. There was Lara. There was a string of other women. And none of it felt right. None of it felt like home. You feel like home, Alice. You are the one person that I always want around me. I am just sorry that it took so much for me to realize it.”
Alice was a little stunned by Dana’s statement. But she saw the truth in those beautiful blue eyes.
When Dana saw that Alice heard and understood what she said, her heart started doing flip-flops. She slowly leaned in and gave Alice a kiss. It was the first real kiss since the party at Bette and Tina’s.
Dana started very slowly. She was ready to stop in an instant if Alice had any problems with it. The joy Dana felt when Alice parted her lips in invite in Dana’s tongue was indescribable.
They sat on the sofa kissing for what seemed like forever, but, was actually only a few minutes. For the most part, their hands stayed still at each others sides, resting lightly on the other woman’s hips. Dana was letting Alice set the pace and whatever pace that was would be fine. Alice finally broke off the kissing and curled herself into Dana’s lap with her head once again in Dana’s neck.
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Bahahahahaha oh that was sooooooooooooo hot and they KISSSEED! K-I-S-S-I-N-G! Great post =D =0=0=0=0 would you really use it? Awww i’d feel so special! *hugs herself* I’ve had to buy padlocks and barracade myself in a padded room at night o_O they’re coming…thanks for another great post, I’ve got to dash so only a quick comment. Thanks gigglebuddy ;)
“You feel like home, Alice.” – Awwwwww. And I just have to say, picturing you on a platform in a lady-suit with a hat, waving to your constituents and promising “DANAS FOR EVERYONE!” is cracking me up. Majorly. I’m giggling, and I don’t normally giggle. I adored this. Nice to know that Alice felt comfortable enough to do something like that at the end, after the setback I thought maybe she’d shy away from sex. I’m glad Dana is being so damn wonderful to her about everything.
You feel like Home. That said it all. Alice is well on her way. She is getting stronger in body and mentally/ Give her awhile and she will kick Jackies a&& herself. thanks
omg…. hilarious last scene!!! “Sure as hell you are.” why do I keep picturing Alice in Charlie’s Angels spoof. omg…. I’m glad Alice is making progress. That is a progress to admit what she’s doing. yeah :) omg. Alice and Dana both need some actions going between them. But it was sweet of Dana to ignore hearing Alice. haha I couldn’t have ;)
It’s so on now. That whole having to listen to Alice must have killed Dana. She should pay her back. It would be funny. I love the story Magoose. I can’t wait to see what you have in the works. I think Jackie needs to get tazered. That would work for me
You already have my vote Magoose. Will you hire me as campaign manager though? lol DANAS FOR EVERYONE!!!
It is normal to worry about getting somebody mad over even the smallest of things. It’d be normal even if Alice worried about clipping her toenails too loud. But these two women are in love and that should never change. I definitely didn’t expect Alice to have a *moan* dream near the end. Nice touch.
holy frig…incredibly sweet and incredibly HOT!! (heh don’t piss Shanesthe..is the mantra at work well except they don’t call me that, I should make them call me that it would amuse me :D oh and honest I didn’t know she was in the freezer when I locked it nor did I beam her with the frozen fish she must have fallen on it..2 methods down 3 to go)looking forward to next post!
First of all sorry for no commenting for a while been reli busy and only just started reading all these great stories again and just caught up with urs today. Oh and am i glad i have Al and Dana are so sweet and tentative together and Dana is so considerate of Alice it’s so romantic between the two. Thank god Jackie got a taster of what she deserves for doing what she’s done to Alice. This last chapter was a good one, i must say i reli did not see that last bit coming nice touch lol. Brilliant writing and brilliant story of course still hooked and loving it and cant wait for ur next post :). FANTASTIC PPS :) X X X
i felt bad for alice. it will take while before she is able to feel comfortable and confident with her own decisions. i think alice needs a like boo time visit,lol…:)
great chapter!!! those girls crack me up..i love this story :)
OH YIPPY SKIPPY!!! First kiss all over again! I cant wait to see how the progress, glad to see Dana getting brave and Alice not rejecting her. Loved it, Keep Jackie out of the picture unless she’s getting beat down! ;P THANK YOU!! PPS!!
Sorry I didn’t comment on your last chapter, which was great. Life kind of got in the way (I hate it when that happens :S). Seriously… I would have had to wait longer than 15 minutes before going in after hearing Alice like that ;) Looking forward to your next post :D.
I’ve never commented on this story, but I like the whole perspective of it. It’s refreshing. And yay, Dana and Alice kissed!! :D