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Closure – Chapter 32
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Dana got showered and dressed. On the way to Alice, she stopped and a bouquet of daises of different colors. Shane chuckled when she saw them. “Geez, Dane, I could have loaned you some money so you could get roses.”
Dana looked at Shane and smiled “Alice loves daisies. She told me once several years ago that you can’t look at a daisy and not smile.”
They finally got to Bette and Tina’s. Shane went up and knocked and the door was answered by Bette. She stepped to the side to let the women in.
“Where is she?” Dana asked when she did not see Alice in the living room.
“She went to bed early. She is in the spare bedroom.” Dana took off immediately.
Shane gave Bette a look. Bette responded with “Drink?”
“Fuck. I thought you would never ask.” Bette, Shane and Tina all got drinks and settled into the living room. They were carefully listening for any problems from the spare room.
Dana knocked softly on the guest room door and went through in her head what she was going to say. It went something along the lines of “I am the biggest idiot in the world. Please forgive me. I’ll do anything to make it up to you.”
“Come in.” Alice said from behind the door. Alice was turned away from the door and standing in one of the corners of the room when Dana opened it. From her hunched posture, Dana could tell she had been crying.
“Al, honey, it’s me.” Dana could see Alice straighten up and knew she was trying to prepare herself for the worst.
“Alice I am so sorry for leaving like I did. I should have stayed to hear you out. I am here now, though. Will you please talk to me? Please?”
The writer turned around and Dana almost felt like she had been kicked in the stomach when she saw how broken Alice looked. She tossed the bouquet on the bed and moved over to wrap Alice in a hug. She was delighted when Alice allowed herself to be held closely. Dana could have stayed holding Alice forever, but, she knew they both needed to talk.
“Baby? Let’s sit down and talk, OK?” Dana maneuvered Alice to the bed and they sat down on the edge. Dana reached over and held Alice’s hand in both hers. “I am here, honey, and I am ready to listen. I’m sorry I wasn’t earlier.”
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Oh my goodness! That was exhausting for me, so i cant even imagine how it felt for Alice and Dana. Dana is so hot headed sometimes, i love her though…and Alice! Maybe one day our beloved Danish will learn to communicate but if they dont..well that’s fine too! You are doing such a wonderful job and i look forward to each and every post. Keep it Up because we all love you for it! THANK YOU!
so fuckin cute indeed. love it magoose, cant wait for more!
Hi MaGoose, great update again. I’m glad Dana went back to talk to Alice. (And that Jackie is getting the punishment she deserves in jail… I know.. I’m bad hehehe.)By the way the daisy comment reminded me a bit of “You’ve Got Mail” ;) Loved it, PPS??
Double WOW, so proud that alice as able to confront jackie.. that was very important step to take!! understand dana’s reaction… great update :)
Yessss, boy was i glad wen i saw and update for ur story lol. And wat a fantastic chapter!! Again u portrayed them perfectly. I can so see why Dana reacted like tht as well anyone tht cares for someone deeply probably would have done the same. Alice is so brave to have done that a completely the better person to do tht for Jackie. Also loved the comment about the Daises, simples things can always have a stronger impact and tht was so sweet tht she remembers things like tht :) Cant wait to see wat happens next pure genius lol x x
that was great and I can’t wait to see what will happen next pps I love it great update
wonderful – that’s all I can say
great great great!!!!! It takes a big person to do what Alice did..there’s a line from my other fav show…you don’t forgive someone because they deserve it but because they need it.
I’ll have you know that the only reason I haven’t written the biopsy results yet is because I don’t know what they are! Lol. I love this chapter, not that that’s saying much since I always do. I’m glad Alice managed to face one of her demons on her own. It’s a little sad knowing that Jackie’s in such a bad place, which I know makes no sense. Still, I hate seeing anyone suffer. I’m glad Dana finally realized she was being a jerk. Hopefully the two of them can keep growing. Thanks!
Hello MaGoose, that was just so very powerful… pfftt my comments cannot compare to the emotional journey that your writing is filled with. I can totally understand Dana’s reaction… it is so very human and so very much the love she holds for Alice that causes her to react in such a volatile fashion. Alice’s decision just shows you how much humanity she has… even after everything she cannot bare to have that kind of emotional devastation on her hands. The result far outweigh the potential bumps… this is freaking amazing… keep up the amazing job here… you are brilliant my friend… I’m loving this completely. Sincerely, JC
ok so I got shamefully behind on my reading…sorry! These last few chapters were fantastic. I particularly liked this last one. The fact that Dana messed up a little makes her human. The fact that she’s able to realise she was in the wrong and go back and try and fix it gives me hope that these two might actually be evolving enough in your story to have a good relationship some day…soon maybe?!!
Soooo…I get that Alice needed to confront Jackie on her own, but do you think our girls will ever learn to talk to each other BEFORE the inevitable misunderstanding? Well, if they did, they wouldn’t be our Danish, would they? It was good to see the family step in for them both this time…and to see them get it right themselves, eventually. Looking forward to the next step in their road to recovery and redemption. PPS!
WOOT. I so love you even more now. A nice long good update with crying sadness happiness. I love it. It makes me happy. Okay okay i know i have been lazy lately I am off tomorrow so tonight is going to be writeathon