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Closure – Chapter 32
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“I understand, Dane. I sprung it on you.”
“No. I should have stayed. I’m here now, though, and I am not leaving. Just talk to me. I want to understand.” Alice took a deep breath and prepared for the worst. She took her hand back from Dana.
“Dane. I went to see her.” Dana looked shocked and concerned.
“I would have gone with you! Did she pressure you to make a deal? I swear, if she did, there will not be a hole deep enough for her to hide in…” Alice reached out and gently stroked Dana’s arm. This gave the desired effect of getting Dana to calm down. A little.
“No. She didn’t. Not at all.”
“Is it that you still want to be with her?” Dana said in a small voice.
“God, no, Dana. I really would be happy if I never saw her again for the rest of my life.”
Alice looked at Dana and saw the support in her eyes. Dana was waiting patiently for Alice to gather her thoughts. Alice took a deep breath and continued.
“I had to see her. I had to confront her. I had to do it on my own. I talked it through with my therapist. I needed to do this so I could move on. I went in that room and I told her. I told her that she had no control over me anymore. I was strong, Dane.” Alice looked at Dana to try to make her understand.
Alice walked into the visitor’s room at the county jail. She wasn’t quite sure what to expect, but, was surprised to see Jackie sitting at one of the tables. She thought they might talk through a glass window using phones or something. They were several other tables around with inmates talking to their visitors.
Jackie was slumped over a bit in her chair. She was dressed in the standard orange jumpsuit and idly tracing some graffiti that was carved into the table at some point. Alice thought she seemed…small.
Alice took a deep breath and steadied herself before walking forward.
Jackie looked up and her face registered surprise to see Alice. She wasn’t told who her visitor was and Alice would have been her last guess.
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Oh my goodness! That was exhausting for me, so i cant even imagine how it felt for Alice and Dana. Dana is so hot headed sometimes, i love her though…and Alice! Maybe one day our beloved Danish will learn to communicate but if they dont..well that’s fine too! You are doing such a wonderful job and i look forward to each and every post. Keep it Up because we all love you for it! THANK YOU!
so fuckin cute indeed. love it magoose, cant wait for more!
Hi MaGoose, great update again. I’m glad Dana went back to talk to Alice. (And that Jackie is getting the punishment she deserves in jail… I know.. I’m bad hehehe.)By the way the daisy comment reminded me a bit of “You’ve Got Mail” ;) Loved it, PPS??
Double WOW, so proud that alice as able to confront jackie.. that was very important step to take!! understand dana’s reaction… great update :)
Yessss, boy was i glad wen i saw and update for ur story lol. And wat a fantastic chapter!! Again u portrayed them perfectly. I can so see why Dana reacted like tht as well anyone tht cares for someone deeply probably would have done the same. Alice is so brave to have done that a completely the better person to do tht for Jackie. Also loved the comment about the Daises, simples things can always have a stronger impact and tht was so sweet tht she remembers things like tht :) Cant wait to see wat happens next pure genius lol x x
that was great and I can’t wait to see what will happen next pps I love it great update
wonderful – that’s all I can say
great great great!!!!! It takes a big person to do what Alice did..there’s a line from my other fav show…you don’t forgive someone because they deserve it but because they need it.
I’ll have you know that the only reason I haven’t written the biopsy results yet is because I don’t know what they are! Lol. I love this chapter, not that that’s saying much since I always do. I’m glad Alice managed to face one of her demons on her own. It’s a little sad knowing that Jackie’s in such a bad place, which I know makes no sense. Still, I hate seeing anyone suffer. I’m glad Dana finally realized she was being a jerk. Hopefully the two of them can keep growing. Thanks!
Hello MaGoose, that was just so very powerful… pfftt my comments cannot compare to the emotional journey that your writing is filled with. I can totally understand Dana’s reaction… it is so very human and so very much the love she holds for Alice that causes her to react in such a volatile fashion. Alice’s decision just shows you how much humanity she has… even after everything she cannot bare to have that kind of emotional devastation on her hands. The result far outweigh the potential bumps… this is freaking amazing… keep up the amazing job here… you are brilliant my friend… I’m loving this completely. Sincerely, JC
ok so I got shamefully behind on my reading…sorry! These last few chapters were fantastic. I particularly liked this last one. The fact that Dana messed up a little makes her human. The fact that she’s able to realise she was in the wrong and go back and try and fix it gives me hope that these two might actually be evolving enough in your story to have a good relationship some day…soon maybe?!!
Soooo…I get that Alice needed to confront Jackie on her own, but do you think our girls will ever learn to talk to each other BEFORE the inevitable misunderstanding? Well, if they did, they wouldn’t be our Danish, would they? It was good to see the family step in for them both this time…and to see them get it right themselves, eventually. Looking forward to the next step in their road to recovery and redemption. PPS!
WOOT. I so love you even more now. A nice long good update with crying sadness happiness. I love it. It makes me happy. Okay okay i know i have been lazy lately I am off tomorrow so tonight is going to be writeathon