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Collision Course – 4.16
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“Well, in about two hours you are off to Maine, I didn’t wanna worry you, little man,” smiled Sam. Jesse bounced up onto the bed, hugging his mom hard.
“Mom, you can be sooo silly sometimes,” kissing her cheek. Sam hugged him close, nodding.
“Yeah, but I like protecting you,” whispered Sam.
“I’m old enough to not gotta be protected,” said Jesse seriously. The room laughed, “I saw Bette down the hall,” he added.
“What is going on over there? I saw Tina as well,” asked Lindsay.
Alice bit her lip, took a deep breath and said in a soft voice, “Angelica’s got some liver damage, and might even need a transplant.”
“Jesus,” sighed Mel, remembering how she’d felt when they’d found out about Gus being sick.
“Bri, can you get me a wheelchair?” asked Sam. Brian shook his head no, “Ok, please?”
“No, you’re sick, and if I heard the doc right, you have to stay in bed. So in bed, you are staying,” he announced. Justin snickered at his big brother antics.
“Fine… Alice…,” smiled Sam sweetly.
“I’ll go get one…,” said Alice, moving to the door.
“Carmen, go with her, I wanna go see them too,” said Rosita quickly.
“Yeah, you know, you punched me, Carmen, I owe you,” said Sam threateningly.
“I’m sure I’ll pay for it in a pound of flesh,” said Carmen dramatically.
“At least she didn’t handcuff you,” said Julie, her fingers a blur at the Blackberry, looking up. “Alice did that,” she added.
“Yeah… someone..,” began Sam, giving Brian a sweet look, and he licked his lips, sucking in his bottom one and waiting. “.. left some handcuffs at my house?”
“That’s where those went…,” whispered Lindsay, blushing fiercely.
Jo walked into the building where Henry worked, casting a look at the guard and walking past him. He didn’t give her one look, Jo smiled.
Her eyes blazing with anger, she stepped into the elevator, letting the door close and tapping the button for the fourth floor gently. A quick moment later, she stepped from the enclosed space, finding Henry’s office easily.
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you continue to have me by the seat of my pants! Loving this. I actually liked how Bette and Tina pushed aside their differences and were able to be there for their daughter. Henry needs to suffer greatly. Thanks can’t wait for more!
Oh, god. That was just awful. I’m glad Jesse will live on in Angie, but that was heartbreaking. I had just spent a kind of a vicious minute there, hoping Jo was gonna just make Hank suffer, but screw him. I like the way you’re entwining the stories more with each chapter. Engrossing stuff, Janet. Cheers
Oh my goodness…why did I read this at work…very well written but dag…so sad…Henry is as good as dead.
this story is amazing please update soon. i think i’m addicted to this story
Damn, Girl . . . you got me cryin’ . . . And I’m gonna’ tell ya’ right now, that this tomboy don’t cry to easily especially after just ‘reading’ something . . . That’s a fucked up deal . . . Jesse havin’ to die and all . . . God, you should like write for the fuckin’ show ;-p ~tear falls~ . . . Okay, I’m kool, now, ANYWAYS, my girl, Shane, has like perfect timing . . . glad Sam took that hand . . . I wander what’s gonna’ become of Shane and Sam and Carmen . . . Baby-girl, you got me fuckin’ hooked and like the others that are out here, I need my fix, like NOW!!! LMFAO!!! Anyways, keep up the great work and update soon for me . . . and like always from me, Baby-girl, LYLAS ;-p . . . love ya’ . . . holla at me!!!!
I’m really sorry that you are feeling so bad. Hope you get better soon…Man, did shit hit the fan or what? A lot of times one can figure out the direction a story is taking, but never one of yours! That’s why I love reading anything that you write. Ok, just when I think Bette possibly might go for Jayden or even Sam or Rosita, she ends up getting close to Tina. As you would say “MERDE!” Thanks for posting when you were so sick. Next one soon…pleeeze?
Good God you are a drama queen!!! Drama, drama, drama!!! The thing is…I love your style of drama. Because of your writing abilities, I am on the edge of my seat every second while reading this. Oh, and your author’s comments to me…you are one of the few who can comfort me while still making me feel like I am on the edge of the cliff!! “…but at the end, I think you’ll remember why I’m a rogue…” Okay, I am definitely falling off that cliff!! Thanks JM!
WOW! I am speechless, thank goodness all I have to do is write my comments & not say them. Never in a million years would I have thought that Jesse would be a casualty in your story. Kudos, ya shocked me, you always take a route that no one would expect. Truly feel for Sam, losing Jesse & his bio mom. Can’t wait to see where your story takes her & the rest of the gang. Can Jo beat the crap out of Henry & get away w/ it & will she make him forget who kicked his ass. Super job. Great stuff.
Sweetheart, Everyone else has sung you praises. I’ll just thanks you,and post soon and feel better thanks bvh
OMG! Tears came to my eyes more than once. You’re a great storyteller. I can see everything happening in my head in such detail. Keep up the good work!
Oh Janet you broke my heart a littly…why did the kids get a raw deal :( Let Jo hang Henry’s Ts (no not Tina, the other Ts) to dry and Tina deserve her own version for being negligence. Glad Sam took it. A bang-up chapter JM.