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Collision Course – 4.16
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“I didn’t, because I spoke to Jo before…” said Darci with a rueful grunt, “..she assured me that you never would beat your child. After accessing the situation, and further tests, I feel rather sure that you aren’t the culprits.”
“But Henry may be,” said Jo softly. “I know you might not want to hear this…”
“He would never hurt Angelica!” blared Tina, wagging a finger at Jo. Tina had only know this woman for half a day, and already she was judging her. Tina was angry at herself for trusting her.
“Two arrests for battery, and a restraining order against him from his ex wife who dropped it after he spent a year in anger management…” said Jo quietly. “I had Julie run a quick background on him. I just got the news on my Blackberry. Julie works quickly.”
“That’s why we didn’t call DHS, at least, not yet,” said Darci. “You have something more to think about, Angelica’s liver is failing. She’s jaundice, but you didn’t notice because of her skin color. I’ve put her on the transplant list…”
“Transplant list? Is she that bad? Oh my god, my baby…” cried Tina softly, moving to the bed, pushing back her angel’s hair. A battering of emotions pummeled her, sending her swaying back, and Bette was there, holding her gently.
“At the moment, she’s stable. But there are long lists of people waiting for viable livers, and they are far and few in between. I placed her on the list as quick as I could,” said Darci.
“And I’ll take care of Henry,” said Jo in a dark steadfast voice.
“This is no time to go vigilantly,” stated Darci hotly.
“What did you think I was doing for 15 years, Darci? Playing dominos? You’re doing what you love because I’m a vigilantly. I took fate into my hands, so bite me, Haim, I’m going to do what I do,” said Jo, taking her amber colored sunglasses and slipping them on. “Trust me, he’ll be taken care of, Tina.”
“Now I know why Spencer doesn’t want anything to do with you,” muttered Darci.
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you continue to have me by the seat of my pants! Loving this. I actually liked how Bette and Tina pushed aside their differences and were able to be there for their daughter. Henry needs to suffer greatly. Thanks can’t wait for more!
Oh, god. That was just awful. I’m glad Jesse will live on in Angie, but that was heartbreaking. I had just spent a kind of a vicious minute there, hoping Jo was gonna just make Hank suffer, but screw him. I like the way you’re entwining the stories more with each chapter. Engrossing stuff, Janet. Cheers
Oh my goodness…why did I read this at work…very well written but dag…so sad…Henry is as good as dead.
this story is amazing please update soon. i think i’m addicted to this story
Damn, Girl . . . you got me cryin’ . . . And I’m gonna’ tell ya’ right now, that this tomboy don’t cry to easily especially after just ‘reading’ something . . . That’s a fucked up deal . . . Jesse havin’ to die and all . . . God, you should like write for the fuckin’ show ;-p ~tear falls~ . . . Okay, I’m kool, now, ANYWAYS, my girl, Shane, has like perfect timing . . . glad Sam took that hand . . . I wander what’s gonna’ become of Shane and Sam and Carmen . . . Baby-girl, you got me fuckin’ hooked and like the others that are out here, I need my fix, like NOW!!! LMFAO!!! Anyways, keep up the great work and update soon for me . . . and like always from me, Baby-girl, LYLAS ;-p . . . love ya’ . . . holla at me!!!!
I’m really sorry that you are feeling so bad. Hope you get better soon…Man, did shit hit the fan or what? A lot of times one can figure out the direction a story is taking, but never one of yours! That’s why I love reading anything that you write. Ok, just when I think Bette possibly might go for Jayden or even Sam or Rosita, she ends up getting close to Tina. As you would say “MERDE!” Thanks for posting when you were so sick. Next one soon…pleeeze?
Good God you are a drama queen!!! Drama, drama, drama!!! The thing is…I love your style of drama. Because of your writing abilities, I am on the edge of my seat every second while reading this. Oh, and your author’s comments to me…you are one of the few who can comfort me while still making me feel like I am on the edge of the cliff!! “…but at the end, I think you’ll remember why I’m a rogue…” Okay, I am definitely falling off that cliff!! Thanks JM!
WOW! I am speechless, thank goodness all I have to do is write my comments & not say them. Never in a million years would I have thought that Jesse would be a casualty in your story. Kudos, ya shocked me, you always take a route that no one would expect. Truly feel for Sam, losing Jesse & his bio mom. Can’t wait to see where your story takes her & the rest of the gang. Can Jo beat the crap out of Henry & get away w/ it & will she make him forget who kicked his ass. Super job. Great stuff.
Sweetheart, Everyone else has sung you praises. I’ll just thanks you,and post soon and feel better thanks bvh
OMG! Tears came to my eyes more than once. You’re a great storyteller. I can see everything happening in my head in such detail. Keep up the good work!
Oh Janet you broke my heart a littly…why did the kids get a raw deal :( Let Jo hang Henry’s Ts (no not Tina, the other Ts) to dry and Tina deserve her own version for being negligence. Glad Sam took it. A bang-up chapter JM.