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Collision Course – 4.16
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“If it isn’t the Latin lover, Rosita Navarro herself,” announced Alice, keeping the sadness out of her voice.
“If it isn’t Alice, the…. Chart chick…,” smiled Rosita, the drugs that were pumping through her were really throwing her off. “You know, Carmen, I could just, go home…” said Rosita with a smile. “It’s just a bullet hole. And it don’t really hurt all that much…”
“You are staying right there! Is that clearly understood?” ordered Carmen. Alice smiled, as did Julie, who was again checking her BLACKBERRY. Sam looked better, a pint of blood was hung over her left shoulder
“So bossy,” laughed Rosita.
“Fucking eh, I’m bossy, next time I see my brother,” threatened Carmen.
“We’re not gonna see him again, at least not for a very long time,” said Rosita softly. Regret in her voice, because she’d tried to save Jesus from himself, but he’d been to far gone to listen to her reasoning.
“Jesus Christ, you went and got yourself shot? And you, what did you do?” asked Melanie from the door, hands on her hips, Brian and Lindsay behind her. Brian groaned, pushing passed Lindsay’s significant other.
“I got a bloody nose,” said Sam. “And a blood infection, from the bone marrow donation site. So, I’m septic, has a nice ring to it, don’t it?”
“Are you serious?” asked Brian, moving over to her side of the bed. “Hi Alice,” he added. Lindsay’s eyebrows shot up, usually Brian wasn’t so congeal to anyone, including a virtual stranger.
“Hi,” stammered Alice, swallowing audibly. There was just something about Brian Kinney that oozed sex and it sent Alice’s radar through the roof.
“He is rather hot, isn’t he?” whispered Julie to Alice, who nodded.
“He’s rather gay,” said Justin from right behind Alice and Julie.
“Figures,” groaned Julie, rolling her eyes, making Alice giggle.
Just then, Jayden entered the room with a very irate Jesse, and his grandfather, Richard, in tow. “You are in the hospital, and I get to find out from Aunt Jayden?” he asked in a rather serious tone of voice. Sam blushed, being chastised by her own son.
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you continue to have me by the seat of my pants! Loving this. I actually liked how Bette and Tina pushed aside their differences and were able to be there for their daughter. Henry needs to suffer greatly. Thanks can’t wait for more!
Oh, god. That was just awful. I’m glad Jesse will live on in Angie, but that was heartbreaking. I had just spent a kind of a vicious minute there, hoping Jo was gonna just make Hank suffer, but screw him. I like the way you’re entwining the stories more with each chapter. Engrossing stuff, Janet. Cheers
Oh my goodness…why did I read this at work…very well written but dag…so sad…Henry is as good as dead.
this story is amazing please update soon. i think i’m addicted to this story
Damn, Girl . . . you got me cryin’ . . . And I’m gonna’ tell ya’ right now, that this tomboy don’t cry to easily especially after just ‘reading’ something . . . That’s a fucked up deal . . . Jesse havin’ to die and all . . . God, you should like write for the fuckin’ show ;-p ~tear falls~ . . . Okay, I’m kool, now, ANYWAYS, my girl, Shane, has like perfect timing . . . glad Sam took that hand . . . I wander what’s gonna’ become of Shane and Sam and Carmen . . . Baby-girl, you got me fuckin’ hooked and like the others that are out here, I need my fix, like NOW!!! LMFAO!!! Anyways, keep up the great work and update soon for me . . . and like always from me, Baby-girl, LYLAS ;-p . . . love ya’ . . . holla at me!!!!
I’m really sorry that you are feeling so bad. Hope you get better soon…Man, did shit hit the fan or what? A lot of times one can figure out the direction a story is taking, but never one of yours! That’s why I love reading anything that you write. Ok, just when I think Bette possibly might go for Jayden or even Sam or Rosita, she ends up getting close to Tina. As you would say “MERDE!” Thanks for posting when you were so sick. Next one soon…pleeeze?
Good God you are a drama queen!!! Drama, drama, drama!!! The thing is…I love your style of drama. Because of your writing abilities, I am on the edge of my seat every second while reading this. Oh, and your author’s comments to me…you are one of the few who can comfort me while still making me feel like I am on the edge of the cliff!! “…but at the end, I think you’ll remember why I’m a rogue…” Okay, I am definitely falling off that cliff!! Thanks JM!
WOW! I am speechless, thank goodness all I have to do is write my comments & not say them. Never in a million years would I have thought that Jesse would be a casualty in your story. Kudos, ya shocked me, you always take a route that no one would expect. Truly feel for Sam, losing Jesse & his bio mom. Can’t wait to see where your story takes her & the rest of the gang. Can Jo beat the crap out of Henry & get away w/ it & will she make him forget who kicked his ass. Super job. Great stuff.
Sweetheart, Everyone else has sung you praises. I’ll just thanks you,and post soon and feel better thanks bvh
OMG! Tears came to my eyes more than once. You’re a great storyteller. I can see everything happening in my head in such detail. Keep up the good work!
Oh Janet you broke my heart a littly…why did the kids get a raw deal :( Let Jo hang Henry’s Ts (no not Tina, the other Ts) to dry and Tina deserve her own version for being negligence. Glad Sam took it. A bang-up chapter JM.