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Collision Course – 4.16
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“My daughter wasn’t popping pills because her mother wanted her to be perfect, Darci,” countered Jo with a steely look.
“No, yours lost a leg,” shot back Darci.
“This isn’t the time,” countered Jo, with her jaw clenched.
“No, it isn’t,” admitted Darci. Seeing the pain in Jo’s eyes at the mention of her daughter.
Bette cleared her throat, “Dr. Cyr, when will we be able to take her home?” asked Bette.
“We’ll have to run a few more tests, and then we’ll be able to access the situation better,” said Darci, turning to resume her conversation with Jo, but her high school friend had disappeared. “Fuck,” groaned Darci, resisting the urge to slam the chart down on the small table next to the bed.
Alice had left the room right behind Jo, following the woman until she’d disappeared around a corner. Alice rounded the corner and found her gone. Alice looked around, turning, scratching her chin as she wondered where the hell she’d gone.
“What the…? Where did she go?” muttered Alice.
“Who are you looking for?” asked Julie, coming out of another room at the end of the hallway. She was holding a glass and a pitcher, giving Alice a sarcastic looking look.
“Ummm… you…,” stammered Alice, looking around again for Jo, but finding her gone. Then Alice realized that she was in the same wing that Dana’d been in. She shook her head and tried to clear her head, hearing Julie’s voice bringing her back to the moment.
“Sam’s in here, Jo got the handcuff’s off,” giggled Julie, a husky sexy giggle that was so unlike Dana that Alice had begun to forget that she looked virtually exactly like her. “Are you ok?”
Alice looked around again, realizing that she was ok, that things were better, even after losing Dana, “Yeah, I’m good! Thank god they got the handcuff’s off. I’ve got some news too…,” said Alice. Alice heard laughing from the room, and as she entered she saw Sam in one bed, and Rosita in the other. A bright grin spread over Alice’s face, then the darkness that she’d left in Bette and Tina’s room washed over her again.
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you continue to have me by the seat of my pants! Loving this. I actually liked how Bette and Tina pushed aside their differences and were able to be there for their daughter. Henry needs to suffer greatly. Thanks can’t wait for more!
Oh, god. That was just awful. I’m glad Jesse will live on in Angie, but that was heartbreaking. I had just spent a kind of a vicious minute there, hoping Jo was gonna just make Hank suffer, but screw him. I like the way you’re entwining the stories more with each chapter. Engrossing stuff, Janet. Cheers
Oh my goodness…why did I read this at work…very well written but dag…so sad…Henry is as good as dead.
this story is amazing please update soon. i think i’m addicted to this story
Damn, Girl . . . you got me cryin’ . . . And I’m gonna’ tell ya’ right now, that this tomboy don’t cry to easily especially after just ‘reading’ something . . . That’s a fucked up deal . . . Jesse havin’ to die and all . . . God, you should like write for the fuckin’ show ;-p ~tear falls~ . . . Okay, I’m kool, now, ANYWAYS, my girl, Shane, has like perfect timing . . . glad Sam took that hand . . . I wander what’s gonna’ become of Shane and Sam and Carmen . . . Baby-girl, you got me fuckin’ hooked and like the others that are out here, I need my fix, like NOW!!! LMFAO!!! Anyways, keep up the great work and update soon for me . . . and like always from me, Baby-girl, LYLAS ;-p . . . love ya’ . . . holla at me!!!!
I’m really sorry that you are feeling so bad. Hope you get better soon…Man, did shit hit the fan or what? A lot of times one can figure out the direction a story is taking, but never one of yours! That’s why I love reading anything that you write. Ok, just when I think Bette possibly might go for Jayden or even Sam or Rosita, she ends up getting close to Tina. As you would say “MERDE!” Thanks for posting when you were so sick. Next one soon…pleeeze?
Good God you are a drama queen!!! Drama, drama, drama!!! The thing is…I love your style of drama. Because of your writing abilities, I am on the edge of my seat every second while reading this. Oh, and your author’s comments to me…you are one of the few who can comfort me while still making me feel like I am on the edge of the cliff!! “…but at the end, I think you’ll remember why I’m a rogue…” Okay, I am definitely falling off that cliff!! Thanks JM!
WOW! I am speechless, thank goodness all I have to do is write my comments & not say them. Never in a million years would I have thought that Jesse would be a casualty in your story. Kudos, ya shocked me, you always take a route that no one would expect. Truly feel for Sam, losing Jesse & his bio mom. Can’t wait to see where your story takes her & the rest of the gang. Can Jo beat the crap out of Henry & get away w/ it & will she make him forget who kicked his ass. Super job. Great stuff.
Sweetheart, Everyone else has sung you praises. I’ll just thanks you,and post soon and feel better thanks bvh
OMG! Tears came to my eyes more than once. You’re a great storyteller. I can see everything happening in my head in such detail. Keep up the good work!
Oh Janet you broke my heart a littly…why did the kids get a raw deal :( Let Jo hang Henry’s Ts (no not Tina, the other Ts) to dry and Tina deserve her own version for being negligence. Glad Sam took it. A bang-up chapter JM.