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Collision Course 4.51 – Foreshadowing
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“I’m Jack Bauer with CTU…,” began Jack, frazzled by the very fast woman who obviously was more than met the eye. Taking her in, looking down, seeing that the woman had lost a leg, more than likely, in the current war.
“The terrorist unit?” asked Rosita. “This was an attack?” asked Rosita forgetting about the gun pointing at her.
“It was, and inside that building are two agents that might very well help me find the people who did it, so I want in there as much as you do,” said Jack in his rapid fire speech.
A dark gaze from Rosita, locking with Jack’s eyes, “Jo Wheaton, well, let’s fucking see what we can do…”
Letting go of Jack, Ro turned and headed back towards what was left of The Planet, emergency vehicles were finally arriving. Jack thought for a moment, wondering how Rosita Navarro knew Jo Wheaton, then his phone vibrating in his pocket, flipping it open, “Bauer.”
“Jack, we have Emma Scott on the line, we are going to patch you through to her,” said Chloe. Jack waited impatiently, following Rosita Navarro towards her destination, and was wondering what she was doing, exactly. Then he realized she was looking for the door of the plane, and not the building. Smart girl, she was already forming a plan of action.
“Jack?” said Emma into the phone, on the other side of the wreckage, watching as Quin hammered away at the hull of the fallen plane.
“Agent Scott? Where are you?” he asked quickly, switching the phone hands, his gun in his right.
“Yes, and calling me Emma is fine, we are trapped…,” began Emma, more yelling from behind her, another section of The Planet had collapsed, and Jo was using a leg to weaken the metal so that Quin could slam into something less formidable.
“Emma, is Agent Wheaton with you?”
“She is, and a few others, was this the Directive?” asked Emma watching Jo’s anger get the best of her, knowing that if they’d been alone, Jo would have been able to use her powers to help them out of this situation. But, if what Jo said was true, she was without any of her powers, including the ones she’d been born with. Performing something as magical as moving thing with ones mind in front of spectators, was a whole other story, even if Jo could have done it, it would have been ill advised.
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JP – What frakking award are you talking about girl? I think Jo’s gotten to you somehow… award… Ok girl… LOL
Would like to say something about the awards but I afraid the sex faries will leave me. Dont let Jo lose her powers and Jack fron 24 wasnt the hero in this the ladies were. Love the minor danages to the gang,Shane will think about this for a long time to come. What happen to the people on the plane?? I know you are busy thanks for posting. thanks bvh
Good stuff! I like how you meld and twist so many storylines. Looking forward to the next installment.
I know..I know..you don’t want the award. Well, to damn bad! Deal with it Ms. JM, you are f*#king good, and deserve it. So, smile, say thank you and then post the next chapter!!! LOL Hugs J…really, congratulations. You know how much I wanted you to win. :)
Love how you wrote the past vs. the present/future events. Gotta admit when you bring Amy into the mix, I get a tad bit confused as to which lady Jo should be with. Alice, please keep your mouth shut, for once? Lovin’ it!
WooHOO!!!!!! JACK BAUER OF CTU!!! HAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHA great job!! LOVED IT! i took my hands away long enough to read. So now of course Al is going to talk to Jo about what happened. and poor Jo with a broken leg and all. Very cool update!!! LOVED IT!!!
Great chap. You wrote that extremely well. I dont like Amy, i hope she doesnt cause any problems for my fave couple. So Jo is human again huh? Thanks for the update, PPS.
YES! I’ve been hoping for a chapter for what’s felt like an interminably long time… Thanks for posting… Now then, about the chapter: Ha! for once Jack wasn’t the hero! I really want Al to be able to keep her mouth shut. She can NOT blab about Jo… And on that note, I don’t want Jo’s powers to be diminished, or completely gone. Hey, what about the other people on the plane, they alright? And what’s the gang going to do without the Planet? I guess they could use Twilight as the new hangout… Great chapter, Janet, and many congratulations on the award!
whatever the fucking award is… give it to the lady!! u deserve it! all of it!!! OMG! what an episode… intense man, just totally intense… every moment it’s BAM!,WOW!,BOOM!,KAPOW!,YOWZA!… ETC! amazing janet. simply amazing… i really do wish i have your talent in writing and ideas… PPS!
Also, I am not as stupid as I look sometimes, – I meant accolade’s
OMG – JM, I am soooo sorry about the award. It will be okay, you may get many interview requests and when it comes to the book, I say hold out for the bidding war… F tina. (F = forget, it just looked naughtier the other way)——————————Could Shanes lips get any sexier? Bette & Tina, Amy & Jo turn to each other at a time of crises? We all know what a tease your are. Run Rosita Run!Seriously congrats on the award you deserve all the aculades you can receive.
Well thanks for the history lesson there J, though your answer wasn’t as fun as the one I got from my mate (“they” speak French cause they thought they were so cool that they needed to lower their cool levels cause the cool mixed with the snow weather coldness would have made for and uninhabitable arctic environment, so they picked the most assy language in the world to speak… he had a bad incident with the french) I have a feeling yours might hinge on accuracy. Was watching 24 this evening, have you ever considered what a Jack Bower dwarf would be like, most kick ass little package ever. Pistol whipping bad ass midget….with a really deep voice. Any way props to the award, which means you write good. And props to the whole not turning you characters into corpses thing. Have a nice day :-)
Oh and whats the story with the dude and the chick written by the guy? is it Zorro? Zorro is awsome :-p
thanks for your story JM. i really like it and glad you added another poem. i usually don’t leave comments but i do read the stories.most of my comments sound stupid.