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Collision Course 4.51 – Foreshadowing
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“We are relatively sure it is. Emma, I have a very determined woman trying to get to you, through the plane section, I’m going to see what I can do from out here, in the mean time, I’m going to put you back on with Chloe, and she’ll bring you up to speed on what is going on. Once we’ve extricated you, we’ll go back to CTU and profile…..”
“Understood,” said Emma. Chloe instantly coming back on the line as Jack ran over to the EMS personnel and began to direct the rescue efforts.
Six Days Later….
“Yes, the formidable Jack Bauer was on the scene,” said Alice, her producer now behind Alice, arms crossed, unmoving. “With our very own Quin handling the ax and a few of us now brandishing, of all things, the legs of chairs and tables to try and get through the hull of the plane. We were at least trying to get out of this chaotic situation.”
Six Days Earlier….
Amy closed her eyes, her back against a seat, left hand extended in front of her, slowly working one of the wedged seats away from the emergency hatch on the left side of the plane. The plane had been severely contorted, twisted from the explosion. Amy could only assume it had been an explosion, all she knew was that something had hit or exploded on the left side of the plane.
Her instinct had been to wrap herself up in a protective bubble, then her conscious had taken over, and she’d forced her telekinetic powers to envelope the whole plane. Moments before they’d crashed to the earth, something, or someone, had tapped into her power, cutting her strength in half, impairing her ability to help set the plane down must more lightly.
The instant they’d made contact with the earth, a carry on bag had clocked Amy, and the moment she’d fallen unconscious, the shield she’d been using to protect the plane, had dissipated.
Now, using those same powers, Amy was slowly moving debris, trying not to attract attention to her, or to what she was doing. Seeing a small hole coming from closer to the cockpit of the plane, someone from that side was hacking their way in from the outside.
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JP – What frakking award are you talking about girl? I think Jo’s gotten to you somehow… award… Ok girl… LOL
Would like to say something about the awards but I afraid the sex faries will leave me. Dont let Jo lose her powers and Jack fron 24 wasnt the hero in this the ladies were. Love the minor danages to the gang,Shane will think about this for a long time to come. What happen to the people on the plane?? I know you are busy thanks for posting. thanks bvh
Good stuff! I like how you meld and twist so many storylines. Looking forward to the next installment.
I know..I know..you don’t want the award. Well, to damn bad! Deal with it Ms. JM, you are f*#king good, and deserve it. So, smile, say thank you and then post the next chapter!!! LOL Hugs J…really, congratulations. You know how much I wanted you to win. :)
Love how you wrote the past vs. the present/future events. Gotta admit when you bring Amy into the mix, I get a tad bit confused as to which lady Jo should be with. Alice, please keep your mouth shut, for once? Lovin’ it!
WooHOO!!!!!! JACK BAUER OF CTU!!! HAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHA great job!! LOVED IT! i took my hands away long enough to read. So now of course Al is going to talk to Jo about what happened. and poor Jo with a broken leg and all. Very cool update!!! LOVED IT!!!
Great chap. You wrote that extremely well. I dont like Amy, i hope she doesnt cause any problems for my fave couple. So Jo is human again huh? Thanks for the update, PPS.
YES! I’ve been hoping for a chapter for what’s felt like an interminably long time… Thanks for posting… Now then, about the chapter: Ha! for once Jack wasn’t the hero! I really want Al to be able to keep her mouth shut. She can NOT blab about Jo… And on that note, I don’t want Jo’s powers to be diminished, or completely gone. Hey, what about the other people on the plane, they alright? And what’s the gang going to do without the Planet? I guess they could use Twilight as the new hangout… Great chapter, Janet, and many congratulations on the award!
whatever the fucking award is… give it to the lady!! u deserve it! all of it!!! OMG! what an episode… intense man, just totally intense… every moment it’s BAM!,WOW!,BOOM!,KAPOW!,YOWZA!… ETC! amazing janet. simply amazing… i really do wish i have your talent in writing and ideas… PPS!
Also, I am not as stupid as I look sometimes, – I meant accolade’s
OMG – JM, I am soooo sorry about the award. It will be okay, you may get many interview requests and when it comes to the book, I say hold out for the bidding war… F tina. (F = forget, it just looked naughtier the other way)——————————Could Shanes lips get any sexier? Bette & Tina, Amy & Jo turn to each other at a time of crises? We all know what a tease your are. Run Rosita Run!Seriously congrats on the award you deserve all the aculades you can receive.
Well thanks for the history lesson there J, though your answer wasn’t as fun as the one I got from my mate (“they” speak French cause they thought they were so cool that they needed to lower their cool levels cause the cool mixed with the snow weather coldness would have made for and uninhabitable arctic environment, so they picked the most assy language in the world to speak… he had a bad incident with the french) I have a feeling yours might hinge on accuracy. Was watching 24 this evening, have you ever considered what a Jack Bower dwarf would be like, most kick ass little package ever. Pistol whipping bad ass midget….with a really deep voice. Any way props to the award, which means you write good. And props to the whole not turning you characters into corpses thing. Have a nice day :-)
Oh and whats the story with the dude and the chick written by the guy? is it Zorro? Zorro is awsome :-p
thanks for your story JM. i really like it and glad you added another poem. i usually don’t leave comments but i do read the stories.most of my comments sound stupid.