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Collision Course 4.77
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Jo was trying to process everything that Spencer was seeing, but couldn’t, she was like a bloodhound but with the trail of a human’s energy field. Spencer had explained to Jo, weeks before, that each human had colors around them, an aura, and that each was different. People who were in love, or proclaimed to be in love, their colors matched, they were in synch. As Spencer had told her mother, destiny was a bitch, and there was no changing it. Spencer, I’m losing you, it’s flickering…
Spencer heard a light bulb pop in the room, but she ignored it, not caring if she drained the whole neighborhood of it’s electricity, powering the small blue stone in her hand, wanting to find Angelica. Mom, there… you see it, it looks like Tina’s signature, but different, redder…
Spencer, I don’t know what Tina’s aura looks like, but I’m taking your word for it… it’s an old print shop… just as Jo thought the last thought, Spencer broke the connection violently, hearing Bette and Tina yelling in the other room, Spencer was sure she’d just made the stove explore. “Sorry!” called out Spencer, getting up, almost falling because she didn’t have her leg on. Swearing silently, jamming her stub into the leg, Bette throwing open the door and Spencer swallowed hard, “I think we found her…And I’ll replace whatever I blew out there…”
“Oh god, Spencer,” said Bette, grabbing her into a hug, and the TV in the corner sparked, “What the hell!”
“I’m a little volatile at the moment,” said Spencer sheepishly. “I’m sure they’ll….”
The phone rang, Tina dashed for it, snatching it up, it was Emma, “Tell Spencer to bring you here, we’ll have Angelica soon, and call Shane…”
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“You selfish motherfucker!” yelled Shane into the phone, as Gabe tried to reason with her. It wasn’t working; Shane was far beyond hormonal at this point.
“You’ve got plenty of money, Shane, I’m your father and I deserve it. Listen, if you want Shay back…,” began the man who’d fathered her.
“I want him back! You tell me where you are, and I’m going to get him, whatever you want,” said Shane. The FBI agent that was listening in was waving his hand, telling her to keep him on the line. But Shane didn’t care, all she wanted was her brother back, she wanted her family back. She wasn’t losing him.
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And you don’t think THIS is real fiction?!!!! You may think of this as practice, but I enjoy every word of your story, real fiction of not. So hurry up, I want to read some more! ;)
yes, you are killing me with your slow, torturous twists… but it is such an enjoyable demise! As for your practice, it certainly does make perfect. Can’t wait for your next post. I’ve got my seatbelt tightened for the bumpy ride!!
I’ve been checking every day this week for your update after your cruel and unusual cliffhanger last week. Was worth the wait! This story is great. That frikking frakking Gab is a piece of work. Can’t wait for next chapter’s “huge turn”. Thanks for writing! :D
I can never post right after reading coz I need to rest!!!!! It’s remarkable that you have better stuff than this that you save for your other fiction.Hmmm…Matching auras for those in love or who PROCLAIM (another hmmmm)to be in love? Angie could hear Jo and Spencer? That wasn’t Angie last adventure? Where the heck are you heading? You should consider rating your chapters to prepare the readers–something like–“TT” (lots of twists and turns), “TN” (the plot is so dense and so many chatacters appear that you should take notes), “DM” (death and mayhem ensue), and “ASS” (you have to be an IDIOT to think you know where this chapter is heading).As I read, I can feel the relentless tug of destiny and I think I should start feeling sorry for these flies caught in your web.
Gabe so needed taken down… Jo ROCKS!!! I do wish she’d forgive Bette though. I guess in time? But it’s been pretty much underlined that they aren’t ever going to be together again, so that’s that. I’ll let it go and move on, like Bette. I wonder about Angelica though… what was up with that? Girl got powers? Wedding bells… for whom? Noooooo, I don’t want for Quin to go back down that road… I hope she stops at the one. I really do. Loved it as always, JM. And Spumoni’s rating system… that was classic. Thanks for the post! Next one is soon-ish, yes? Cheers
Quinn fell off the wagon, why? Pretty please let her fall be temporary, JM. more Jo ’till…(Huh)? Since its plot oriented I won’t bitch. Shane should get her cut looked at. Gotta love how Angie was oblivious to the whole kidnapping thing, & her waving to cars passing bye was too cute. My favorite line though came surprisingly from Tina when she tells Bette, “You’re always going to have me, stop being melodramatic.”
Yes my Dear this is another WOW. If you write any better,my poor old heart couldn’t stand it. Angie is so smart. Jo is my hero. Bette knows it time to start living her life again. Lets talk about Quin,that is a No No. She will find the right woman,it just wasn’t Tina. Oh,before I go to bed Gabe is so low the sewer runs over him. The sorry sucker. Thanks have a nice Sunday thanks bvh
Great update. It’s got it all…action, suspense, romance, and little of the otherworldly, too. You rock!
This is the ONLY story I read that Bette isn’t with Tina. I do hope Jo and Bette can have a happy ending.
that was great can’t wait to see what will happen next please post soon
If this isn’t real fiction, then I don’t know what is. Like Bette, I too wonder where this leaves them all. So what’s up with Angie and her supernatural talents? So who will Bette move on to?