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Collision Course 4.77
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Sitting in silence on either end of the couch, Bette reached out, touching Tina’s hand, “Is it going to be ok?” asked Bette with trepidation. “Because I don’t remember ever being so scared in my life.”
“I’m praying, I haven’t prayed in years, but I’m praying…,” said Tina her eyes closed, concentrating on that prayer. Her body was far more relaxed than Bette’s, perhaps Tina instinctively knew as a mother that Angelica was ok.
“Please let her be ok, she’s all I have left,” said Bette, the sobs racking her body and Tina moved over to her, wrapping her arms around Bette.
“She’s not the only thing you have left,” said Tina, pulling Bette into her arms, holding her close. “You’re always going to have me, stop being melodramatic.”
Bette didn’t say anything; she just mimicked Tina, and began to pray.
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Jo was sitting in the back of the helicopter, Emma pointing to the headset, but Jo pointed at her temple, We don’t need those.
Emma grabbed the headset and threw it at Jo, thinking at her, I don’t like looking like I’m talking to myself, nodding and shit, they already think I’m crazy calling you in. Now shut up and put the fucking headset on! Emma had already done a spell on the pilots that they wouldn’t remember anything that transpired on the flight, so Jo didn’t know what her problem was.
Jo grimaced, eyes wide, when had Emma gotten so bossy? Putting the headphones on with exaggeration, and keying the mic, “Happy now?”
“Think this is going to work?” asked Emma. Making sure that it was on a two way conversation and that the pilots couldn’t hear her. Even if they’d been jinxed into forgetting this, things had a way of creeping back to someone who’d been put under a spell.
“Yup, if I can trail her signature, hopefully her eyesight is like mine, but better” said Jo into the mic, staring down at the city under her. Feeling a hot blast in the back of her brain, grabbing at her neck, tearing off the sunglasses, feeling Emma move to her side, Jo wrenched open her eyes to see just how her daughter saw. Colors exploded before her eyes, the whole world was now a techno colored spectra, and Jo gasped.
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And you don’t think THIS is real fiction?!!!! You may think of this as practice, but I enjoy every word of your story, real fiction of not. So hurry up, I want to read some more! ;)
yes, you are killing me with your slow, torturous twists… but it is such an enjoyable demise! As for your practice, it certainly does make perfect. Can’t wait for your next post. I’ve got my seatbelt tightened for the bumpy ride!!
I’ve been checking every day this week for your update after your cruel and unusual cliffhanger last week. Was worth the wait! This story is great. That frikking frakking Gab is a piece of work. Can’t wait for next chapter’s “huge turn”. Thanks for writing! :D
I can never post right after reading coz I need to rest!!!!! It’s remarkable that you have better stuff than this that you save for your other fiction.Hmmm…Matching auras for those in love or who PROCLAIM (another hmmmm)to be in love? Angie could hear Jo and Spencer? That wasn’t Angie last adventure? Where the heck are you heading? You should consider rating your chapters to prepare the readers–something like–“TT” (lots of twists and turns), “TN” (the plot is so dense and so many chatacters appear that you should take notes), “DM” (death and mayhem ensue), and “ASS” (you have to be an IDIOT to think you know where this chapter is heading).As I read, I can feel the relentless tug of destiny and I think I should start feeling sorry for these flies caught in your web.
Gabe so needed taken down… Jo ROCKS!!! I do wish she’d forgive Bette though. I guess in time? But it’s been pretty much underlined that they aren’t ever going to be together again, so that’s that. I’ll let it go and move on, like Bette. I wonder about Angelica though… what was up with that? Girl got powers? Wedding bells… for whom? Noooooo, I don’t want for Quin to go back down that road… I hope she stops at the one. I really do. Loved it as always, JM. And Spumoni’s rating system… that was classic. Thanks for the post! Next one is soon-ish, yes? Cheers
Quinn fell off the wagon, why? Pretty please let her fall be temporary, JM. more Jo ’till…(Huh)? Since its plot oriented I won’t bitch. Shane should get her cut looked at. Gotta love how Angie was oblivious to the whole kidnapping thing, & her waving to cars passing bye was too cute. My favorite line though came surprisingly from Tina when she tells Bette, “You’re always going to have me, stop being melodramatic.”
Yes my Dear this is another WOW. If you write any better,my poor old heart couldn’t stand it. Angie is so smart. Jo is my hero. Bette knows it time to start living her life again. Lets talk about Quin,that is a No No. She will find the right woman,it just wasn’t Tina. Oh,before I go to bed Gabe is so low the sewer runs over him. The sorry sucker. Thanks have a nice Sunday thanks bvh
Great update. It’s got it all…action, suspense, romance, and little of the otherworldly, too. You rock!
This is the ONLY story I read that Bette isn’t with Tina. I do hope Jo and Bette can have a happy ending.
that was great can’t wait to see what will happen next please post soon
If this isn’t real fiction, then I don’t know what is. Like Bette, I too wonder where this leaves them all. So what’s up with Angie and her supernatural talents? So who will Bette move on to?