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Collision Course 4.77
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“I’m here because this is Angelica and Shay, don’t read into it,” snapped Jo not wanting Bette to think this was their way to a happy reunion. “You’re best bet is to go home and wait…”
“I know who it was,” said Shane, pushing her way towards Tina and Bette, her head bandaged, Lara walking with her. Obviously Lara had been trying to restrain her from going anywhere but the hospital, but Shane was a very persistent woman.
“The EMT told you to stay put,” chided Lara, wanting to get a cab and get Shane home to wait, but Shane had seen Jo and Emma and she knew that they were the ones that needed this information.
“It was my dad,” said Shane stiffly. “I think it was, I heard him say something to Shay before he got in the truck, what is he doing back here?”
“Money,” said Jo quickly, her mind working on a strategy now, if Gabe wanted money, he’d be making contact. “That’s the only thing that’s changed, Shane you need to get home, he’ll call. I’m sure of it.”
“What do we do? He’s got Angelica,” stated Tina, the tears finally falling from her eyes, wanting to be strong, but this was too much. This was her child, that one that she’d always desperately wanted and no one was going to take that away from her.
“Go home; get to your houses, quick. He might contact all of you, but let us do what we do best,” stated Emma turning to walk away. Emma always found it hard to deal with families; the facts and crime scenes were always easier.
“Thank you,” said Bette, not to Emma, but to Jo. It meant a lot to Bette that Jo was here, mainly that Jo might not hate Bette as much as she’d led her to believe. The sight of her also reminded Bette that Jo was never going to forgive her, or love her in that way again, because, to Jo, Bette’s betrayal had cut far too deep to ever heal.
Jo nodded, turning the hat and pulling it down, “I’m sending Spencer to your place, Tina, go there, I have a plan.”
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And you don’t think THIS is real fiction?!!!! You may think of this as practice, but I enjoy every word of your story, real fiction of not. So hurry up, I want to read some more! ;)
yes, you are killing me with your slow, torturous twists… but it is such an enjoyable demise! As for your practice, it certainly does make perfect. Can’t wait for your next post. I’ve got my seatbelt tightened for the bumpy ride!!
I’ve been checking every day this week for your update after your cruel and unusual cliffhanger last week. Was worth the wait! This story is great. That frikking frakking Gab is a piece of work. Can’t wait for next chapter’s “huge turn”. Thanks for writing! :D
I can never post right after reading coz I need to rest!!!!! It’s remarkable that you have better stuff than this that you save for your other fiction.Hmmm…Matching auras for those in love or who PROCLAIM (another hmmmm)to be in love? Angie could hear Jo and Spencer? That wasn’t Angie last adventure? Where the heck are you heading? You should consider rating your chapters to prepare the readers–something like–“TT” (lots of twists and turns), “TN” (the plot is so dense and so many chatacters appear that you should take notes), “DM” (death and mayhem ensue), and “ASS” (you have to be an IDIOT to think you know where this chapter is heading).As I read, I can feel the relentless tug of destiny and I think I should start feeling sorry for these flies caught in your web.
Gabe so needed taken down… Jo ROCKS!!! I do wish she’d forgive Bette though. I guess in time? But it’s been pretty much underlined that they aren’t ever going to be together again, so that’s that. I’ll let it go and move on, like Bette. I wonder about Angelica though… what was up with that? Girl got powers? Wedding bells… for whom? Noooooo, I don’t want for Quin to go back down that road… I hope she stops at the one. I really do. Loved it as always, JM. And Spumoni’s rating system… that was classic. Thanks for the post! Next one is soon-ish, yes? Cheers
Quinn fell off the wagon, why? Pretty please let her fall be temporary, JM. more Jo ’till…(Huh)? Since its plot oriented I won’t bitch. Shane should get her cut looked at. Gotta love how Angie was oblivious to the whole kidnapping thing, & her waving to cars passing bye was too cute. My favorite line though came surprisingly from Tina when she tells Bette, “You’re always going to have me, stop being melodramatic.”
Yes my Dear this is another WOW. If you write any better,my poor old heart couldn’t stand it. Angie is so smart. Jo is my hero. Bette knows it time to start living her life again. Lets talk about Quin,that is a No No. She will find the right woman,it just wasn’t Tina. Oh,before I go to bed Gabe is so low the sewer runs over him. The sorry sucker. Thanks have a nice Sunday thanks bvh
Great update. It’s got it all…action, suspense, romance, and little of the otherworldly, too. You rock!
This is the ONLY story I read that Bette isn’t with Tina. I do hope Jo and Bette can have a happy ending.
that was great can’t wait to see what will happen next please post soon
If this isn’t real fiction, then I don’t know what is. Like Bette, I too wonder where this leaves them all. So what’s up with Angie and her supernatural talents? So who will Bette move on to?