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“But…,” began Tina but Jo was running off to her car before she could say anything else. “What will Spencer do?” asked Tina to Bette.
“I have no idea…,” said Bette with a thoughtful look in her eyes. “But let’s just listen to her, Shane… are you ok?” asked Bette, hugging Shane gently.
“Yeah, man, I’m fine, Gabe’s not gonna hurt ‘em. He’s just a greedy SOB,” stated Shane grumpily. Her father had left Shay, then had come back to hold him random, that was the gene pool that she’d come from. How insane was that?
“Let’s get a cab and I’m taking you home,” stated Lara to Shane her tone now ordering and not as gently as before. Lara was realizing that Shane was the ‘tough love’ type of girl.
“You got a flight to catch,” reminded Shane with a regretful smirk on her face. They were moving away from Paige, Bette and Tina. Shane’s voice was soft, her head was throbbing, but her heart was what hurt the most right now.
Lara put her hands on her hips, giving Shane a chiding look, “Are you kidding me?” yelled Lara.
“No,” replied Shane in a small voice, her eyes narrowing and wondering why Lara looked very insulted.
“Yeah, well, come on, Paige can we drop you off?” asked Lara, turning to look at the Amazonian woman who was hugging herself, staring at the spot where the SUV had been parked less than an hour before.
“That’s all right, I’ve got it from here,” said Helena, sweeping in gallantly, stopping to kiss Shane’s cheek, but ignoring the head wound. “I’m sorry it took me so long, I was in a meeting, have they found them yet?”
“No, but they have a lead, we should go home and wait, they will contact us,” stated Tina remembering what Jo had said to them. “Come on, let’s go.”
They all moved away from the crime scene, Bette threw a look back at the spot that Emma had touched, not at all reassured that Emma, with all her powers, hadn’t seen anything. Was Angelica lost to them?
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And you don’t think THIS is real fiction?!!!! You may think of this as practice, but I enjoy every word of your story, real fiction of not. So hurry up, I want to read some more! ;)
yes, you are killing me with your slow, torturous twists… but it is such an enjoyable demise! As for your practice, it certainly does make perfect. Can’t wait for your next post. I’ve got my seatbelt tightened for the bumpy ride!!
I’ve been checking every day this week for your update after your cruel and unusual cliffhanger last week. Was worth the wait! This story is great. That frikking frakking Gab is a piece of work. Can’t wait for next chapter’s “huge turn”. Thanks for writing! :D
I can never post right after reading coz I need to rest!!!!! It’s remarkable that you have better stuff than this that you save for your other fiction.Hmmm…Matching auras for those in love or who PROCLAIM (another hmmmm)to be in love? Angie could hear Jo and Spencer? That wasn’t Angie last adventure? Where the heck are you heading? You should consider rating your chapters to prepare the readers–something like–“TT” (lots of twists and turns), “TN” (the plot is so dense and so many chatacters appear that you should take notes), “DM” (death and mayhem ensue), and “ASS” (you have to be an IDIOT to think you know where this chapter is heading).As I read, I can feel the relentless tug of destiny and I think I should start feeling sorry for these flies caught in your web.
Gabe so needed taken down… Jo ROCKS!!! I do wish she’d forgive Bette though. I guess in time? But it’s been pretty much underlined that they aren’t ever going to be together again, so that’s that. I’ll let it go and move on, like Bette. I wonder about Angelica though… what was up with that? Girl got powers? Wedding bells… for whom? Noooooo, I don’t want for Quin to go back down that road… I hope she stops at the one. I really do. Loved it as always, JM. And Spumoni’s rating system… that was classic. Thanks for the post! Next one is soon-ish, yes? Cheers
Quinn fell off the wagon, why? Pretty please let her fall be temporary, JM. more Jo ’till…(Huh)? Since its plot oriented I won’t bitch. Shane should get her cut looked at. Gotta love how Angie was oblivious to the whole kidnapping thing, & her waving to cars passing bye was too cute. My favorite line though came surprisingly from Tina when she tells Bette, “You’re always going to have me, stop being melodramatic.”
Yes my Dear this is another WOW. If you write any better,my poor old heart couldn’t stand it. Angie is so smart. Jo is my hero. Bette knows it time to start living her life again. Lets talk about Quin,that is a No No. She will find the right woman,it just wasn’t Tina. Oh,before I go to bed Gabe is so low the sewer runs over him. The sorry sucker. Thanks have a nice Sunday thanks bvh
Great update. It’s got it all…action, suspense, romance, and little of the otherworldly, too. You rock!
This is the ONLY story I read that Bette isn’t with Tina. I do hope Jo and Bette can have a happy ending.
that was great can’t wait to see what will happen next please post soon
If this isn’t real fiction, then I don’t know what is. Like Bette, I too wonder where this leaves them all. So what’s up with Angie and her supernatural talents? So who will Bette move on to?