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“Fuck it,” said Quin as she sunk two balls into opposite pockets, walking over to the glass and taking a sip. It burned her throat, but it didn’t matter, if she was going to be bad at something, might as well enjoy it or not remember it.
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“Hey,” said Spencer as the door of Tina’s house opened to let her in. “Gonna make this quick, my mom’s waiting, can I see Angie’s room?”
“Umm, yeah…,” stammered Tina waving to the hallway and Spencer limped down it. “What exactly does your mother have planned? Not that I don’t trust you guys, but… this may be Angelica’s life on the line…”
“Infrared tracking, via… we… me… I don’t know if this is gonna work, but it’s a shot, right?” asked Spencer, her blue grey eyes pleading with Tina to give her a chance to help.
“I don’t understand,” said Bette who was coming from the kitchen, her mouth full of chocolate cake, Tina gave her a look of reproach, “I’m eating away my pain.”
Spencer tried not to laugh, “I see that. Look here’s the deal-e-o, I don’t see like you guys do, I see… colors, and aura’s and… well, you know like the infrared shit that people use, red for heat blue for cold?” asked Spencer, now at the threshold of Angelica’s room.
“Yes,” said Tina and Bette in unison.
“Ok, well I see like that, but a little different, each person has a unique signature, if my mom can tap into my power, we can synch and find Angie’s trail….,” stated Spencer. “We think… this is all a little theoretical, like… guess work….”
“By all means… whatever you think might work…,” said Tina waving her hand to the room. “Do you want to be alone?” asked Tina, swallowing away the tears of hope.
“Yeah, that might be good,” stated Spencer. “Guys, my mom’s gonna find ‘em,” she stated. “I’ve never seen her not find someone she was looking for, and trust me, she did a lot of looking when I was a kid.”
Neither Bette or Tina said anything, letting the teenager go into the room and do whatever magic they were doing, and Tina sat on the chair heavily. There were officer’s outside the house, but they hadn’t come in. They’d set up shop at Shane’s, people had tapped the phones, and were waiting for Gabe to make his demands, if they would ever come.
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And you don’t think THIS is real fiction?!!!! You may think of this as practice, but I enjoy every word of your story, real fiction of not. So hurry up, I want to read some more! ;)
yes, you are killing me with your slow, torturous twists… but it is such an enjoyable demise! As for your practice, it certainly does make perfect. Can’t wait for your next post. I’ve got my seatbelt tightened for the bumpy ride!!
I’ve been checking every day this week for your update after your cruel and unusual cliffhanger last week. Was worth the wait! This story is great. That frikking frakking Gab is a piece of work. Can’t wait for next chapter’s “huge turn”. Thanks for writing! :D
I can never post right after reading coz I need to rest!!!!! It’s remarkable that you have better stuff than this that you save for your other fiction.Hmmm…Matching auras for those in love or who PROCLAIM (another hmmmm)to be in love? Angie could hear Jo and Spencer? That wasn’t Angie last adventure? Where the heck are you heading? You should consider rating your chapters to prepare the readers–something like–“TT” (lots of twists and turns), “TN” (the plot is so dense and so many chatacters appear that you should take notes), “DM” (death and mayhem ensue), and “ASS” (you have to be an IDIOT to think you know where this chapter is heading).As I read, I can feel the relentless tug of destiny and I think I should start feeling sorry for these flies caught in your web.
Gabe so needed taken down… Jo ROCKS!!! I do wish she’d forgive Bette though. I guess in time? But it’s been pretty much underlined that they aren’t ever going to be together again, so that’s that. I’ll let it go and move on, like Bette. I wonder about Angelica though… what was up with that? Girl got powers? Wedding bells… for whom? Noooooo, I don’t want for Quin to go back down that road… I hope she stops at the one. I really do. Loved it as always, JM. And Spumoni’s rating system… that was classic. Thanks for the post! Next one is soon-ish, yes? Cheers
Quinn fell off the wagon, why? Pretty please let her fall be temporary, JM. more Jo ’till…(Huh)? Since its plot oriented I won’t bitch. Shane should get her cut looked at. Gotta love how Angie was oblivious to the whole kidnapping thing, & her waving to cars passing bye was too cute. My favorite line though came surprisingly from Tina when she tells Bette, “You’re always going to have me, stop being melodramatic.”
Yes my Dear this is another WOW. If you write any better,my poor old heart couldn’t stand it. Angie is so smart. Jo is my hero. Bette knows it time to start living her life again. Lets talk about Quin,that is a No No. She will find the right woman,it just wasn’t Tina. Oh,before I go to bed Gabe is so low the sewer runs over him. The sorry sucker. Thanks have a nice Sunday thanks bvh
Great update. It’s got it all…action, suspense, romance, and little of the otherworldly, too. You rock!
This is the ONLY story I read that Bette isn’t with Tina. I do hope Jo and Bette can have a happy ending.
that was great can’t wait to see what will happen next please post soon
If this isn’t real fiction, then I don’t know what is. Like Bette, I too wonder where this leaves them all. So what’s up with Angie and her supernatural talents? So who will Bette move on to?