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Countdown #13 – Touch Tones S07
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Now, we have the whole restaurant’s attention.
The reddish mark of Janet’s handprint appears on Tina’s face, and back again, I step between them. ”Look, just apologize to her, and get the fuck out of here, or else.”
Sue Ellen claps her hands together. ”Sounds like a dare, to me!”
”You! Keep your unclean hands off me.” Janet swats my finger away, but I point it right back into her face.
”But I insist. I said apologize to Tina. Now, do it!”
Tina tries to move me aside. ”Bette, I can handle this.”
”Well, your girlfriend, I guess is who this is? She ought to thank me.” Janet stabs her finger right under my nose. ”You should thank me!”
Alice looks at Shane. ”I have no idea what’s going on.”
I supply them my answer, ”This pretender is getting off her high holy horse, and apologizing. That’s what’s happening!”
Enraged Janet screams at me. ”Okay! Here’s the Truth! She liked it! So, now you know! Is that what you wanted to hear?”
The Million Dollar Cowboy Bar – Alice
And fast as you can say, ”You just pissed off the wrong person.” Bette’s hands are around Janet’s neck, and she’s squeezing the fucking life out of her.
”You crazy, miserable piece of human shit!” Bette hisses, as she clutches Janet by her throat.
”Bette! Stop it!” Tina shouts, ”I’ll beat up my own sister, if I want to.”
Bette shakes her head, ”No!” as Janet flails and gurgles. ”I’m not fucking letting her go, until she says she’s sorry.”
”Hey! You gals need to take this outside!” Miss Laredo calls from the bar. Then, to her friends, ”Come on!”
Shane sends her mother a warning look. ”Mom, don’t bet against my friends.”
”Wouldn’t dream of it! Hand over your billfold, sweetheart, I’m betting whatever you’ve got, on the tall one.”
And then, just as quick, Bette lets out an, ”Ooof!”
And my steak knife is sticking out of Bette’s stomach!
”God!” Tina cries at her sister, ”What’d you just do?”
Miss Laredo shouts that she’s a nurse, and Bette staggers backwards in pain. Tina’s hands close around hers to stop Bette from pulling out the knife. ”Don’t! You’ll bleed to death!”
Bette goes for her steak knife on the table. ”Goddammit! This shit just got serious.”
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Bette, one tough woman! Writing Tina’s name in stitches, i would love to see that!
To sad Janet didn’t get the kick in the ass she so deserved. I hope that she will be somebodies bitch in jail.
Loved the pictures!
Thanks for the update!
I’m thinking of a new story for my L Word inspired, Touch Tones, Season 7 storyline and Tina’s masturbation scene came to mind, “Date With Myself” ( https://lesfan.com/?p=85432 ) is a sexy story of Tina finding herself bored and lonely during the time she was away from Bette.
Following it is a very, very wonderful story, too, about Bette imagining her revenge on Jenny for writing such a revealing book about her and Tina. It’s a dark, but comical place Bette goes to as she climbs a tree and contemplates how to silence Jenny. That story is titled, “The Thirteenth Floor”, and is here on LesFan – https://lesfan.com/?p=85458.
Thank you so much for the updates, I cant wait for more . pps
TINA knew her sister was living in DALLAS but never thought or just did not want to see her that ALICE who has this perverted sense of not letting go of BETTE would find said sister and present her to them.Can you say smackdown,stabbing and plate throwing oh yeah the famous chokehold that ended real quick.Everyone has a horror story and thinking your mother is dead when she’s not,being molested by a sibling or losing your leg (how?)makes the pain in your head and heart pound but for BETTE/TINA its the pain in the loins that need and gets their immediate attention and with glowing results.pps thanks
Loving this quirky story. Thanks
Via Twitter to me from Lillian277=
Missed your talented writing besides the LWord ladies…lips of asbestos; such brilliant descriptive form…you’re back!! Brilliant writing on the boisterously disorderly frontier town brawl between Janet, Bette, & Tina. Everything’s perfect!
ssGogo – via email to me –
Hilarious! You have outdone yourself this time. This 3-part arc had me laughing throughout, but part 3 was absolutely, positively hysterical. Your writing just keeps getting better and better. Loved, loved, loved it!
Via email to me – CVU –
What a raucous scene?! I don’t know if I gonna laugh or what?
The scene is too unbelievable?! Of all places that Tina can meet her sister again.
It had to be on that bar? What are the odds? And not to mention the bloody encounter
between Bette and Janet, that almost end up in tragedy!
Way to go Blackbird!
Wow ! a lot of emotion in this chapter.
The entire constellation ..
Via email to me from Shaggy – Yep girl…this is really flowing…I remember somewhere that Tina HAD been w/ another woman—her sister.But she never told Bette,right?
That Cowboy STEAK restuarant/bar was perfecto…even the dang BLOODY steak gave me visuals!!!BUT the confrontation was “ghetto classic”lol!
Bette chokin Janet v& Tina kickin her BEHIND the knees made me think of my PuertoRican friend Liz, puttin grease on her face to fight a girl in NYC back in da day!!! Whoa da day! I’m really feeling it..the love scene esp nice&capturing,spicy. Sue Ellen keeps reminding me of DALLAS(old tv show)…until she took that boot off…ALICE’s reaction was a HOOT girl!!! You possess an expansive vision of experience & you know HOW to put it on paper—or in cyberspace. Some of your lines are just soooo GOT CHA&unexpected!THAT’S what makes em even MORE witty..you’re quick,very fluid…SoUNDS like you’ve travelled a lot
Wth is wrong with Tina’s sister? Stabbing someone is not a real sane thing do?!
What is problem anyway?! When she did that thing to Tina, did she gone insane for while?
MY GOD! TO DO THAT TO YOUR OWN SISTER. MUCH WORSE, TO YOUR YOUNGER SISTER!
Absolutely Great BB – so pleased to have your talented writing back :)
Look forward to reading more of your inventive wonderful stories soon :)