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Countdown #13 – Touch Tones S07
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Then…
”Ugh. Wait a minute, Baby. This really hurts.” She drops down on one knee.
”Oh God, Bette!” Tina lunges at the table, and I have just enough time to grab my ribeye off my plate before Tina zings it into Janet’s forehead.
Conk!
”You’ve always been crazy. You’ve always been such a liar!” Tina screams as she throws platters and dishes and ketchup bottles at her sister. Everything’s flying through the air, when overhead I see a wine bottle in Janet’s hand heading straight down for Tina.
”Look out!” I shout, and Bette springs up, and grabs Janet’s arm, holding it in mid air.
Nose to nose, they strain against each other. With my steak knife sticking out of Bette’s guts, she forces Janet’s hand back and back, looking like any minute she’s going to snap the woman’s wrist, and Tina, finally seeing only salt and pepper shakers left to throw, kicks Janet’s in the back of the knee.
And down Janet goes.
A cheer erupts!
Sinking into a chair, Bette shoots the crowd a thumbs-up, and with a grimace looks down at the stream of blood leaking out of her abdomen.
”I’m starting to understand you gals a whole lot better.” Sue Ellen looks at us with true appreciation.
With Tina hovering, Miss Laredo cleans Bette’s wound with whiskey.
”Ouch! Ouch! Give me some of that to drink if you’re going to do that to me.”
”Where’d Janet go?” I ask Tina, but she seems to have forgotten her lifelong foe completely. She strokes Bette’s face, and whispers to her. But I can hear things people say a mile away.
”You’re coming out of this with a scar, Bette, on that hard stomach of yours, you’re so vain about.”
Miss Laredo, with a sweet wink to Bette. ”You’d be a tough one to cut through, Honey.”
Tina rolls her eyes, as she hands Bette a whiskey for her pain.
By now, a small crowd has gathered, and Miss Laredo offers her friends a peek at Bette’s enviable abs. ”Meet Bette, Ladies, and her soon to be wife, Tina.”
Bette shoots Tina a sly smile. ”Miss Laredo, can you stitch Tina’s name on me, like a tattoo?”
Tina threads her fingers through Bette’s. ”You need to quit telling everybody what to do. When we’re alone, I’ll talk to you about this.”
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Bette, one tough woman! Writing Tina’s name in stitches, i would love to see that!
To sad Janet didn’t get the kick in the ass she so deserved. I hope that she will be somebodies bitch in jail.
Loved the pictures!
Thanks for the update!
I’m thinking of a new story for my L Word inspired, Touch Tones, Season 7 storyline and Tina’s masturbation scene came to mind, “Date With Myself” ( https://lesfan.com/?p=85432 ) is a sexy story of Tina finding herself bored and lonely during the time she was away from Bette.
Following it is a very, very wonderful story, too, about Bette imagining her revenge on Jenny for writing such a revealing book about her and Tina. It’s a dark, but comical place Bette goes to as she climbs a tree and contemplates how to silence Jenny. That story is titled, “The Thirteenth Floor”, and is here on LesFan – https://lesfan.com/?p=85458.
Thank you so much for the updates, I cant wait for more . pps
TINA knew her sister was living in DALLAS but never thought or just did not want to see her that ALICE who has this perverted sense of not letting go of BETTE would find said sister and present her to them.Can you say smackdown,stabbing and plate throwing oh yeah the famous chokehold that ended real quick.Everyone has a horror story and thinking your mother is dead when she’s not,being molested by a sibling or losing your leg (how?)makes the pain in your head and heart pound but for BETTE/TINA its the pain in the loins that need and gets their immediate attention and with glowing results.pps thanks
Loving this quirky story. Thanks
Via Twitter to me from Lillian277=
Missed your talented writing besides the LWord ladies…lips of asbestos; such brilliant descriptive form…you’re back!! Brilliant writing on the boisterously disorderly frontier town brawl between Janet, Bette, & Tina. Everything’s perfect!
ssGogo – via email to me –
Hilarious! You have outdone yourself this time. This 3-part arc had me laughing throughout, but part 3 was absolutely, positively hysterical. Your writing just keeps getting better and better. Loved, loved, loved it!
Via email to me – CVU –
What a raucous scene?! I don’t know if I gonna laugh or what?
The scene is too unbelievable?! Of all places that Tina can meet her sister again.
It had to be on that bar? What are the odds? And not to mention the bloody encounter
between Bette and Janet, that almost end up in tragedy!
Way to go Blackbird!
Wow ! a lot of emotion in this chapter.
The entire constellation ..
Via email to me from Shaggy – Yep girl…this is really flowing…I remember somewhere that Tina HAD been w/ another woman—her sister.But she never told Bette,right?
That Cowboy STEAK restuarant/bar was perfecto…even the dang BLOODY steak gave me visuals!!!BUT the confrontation was “ghetto classic”lol!
Bette chokin Janet v& Tina kickin her BEHIND the knees made me think of my PuertoRican friend Liz, puttin grease on her face to fight a girl in NYC back in da day!!! Whoa da day! I’m really feeling it..the love scene esp nice&capturing,spicy. Sue Ellen keeps reminding me of DALLAS(old tv show)…until she took that boot off…ALICE’s reaction was a HOOT girl!!! You possess an expansive vision of experience & you know HOW to put it on paper—or in cyberspace. Some of your lines are just soooo GOT CHA&unexpected!THAT’S what makes em even MORE witty..you’re quick,very fluid…SoUNDS like you’ve travelled a lot
Wth is wrong with Tina’s sister? Stabbing someone is not a real sane thing do?!
What is problem anyway?! When she did that thing to Tina, did she gone insane for while?
MY GOD! TO DO THAT TO YOUR OWN SISTER. MUCH WORSE, TO YOUR YOUNGER SISTER!
Absolutely Great BB – so pleased to have your talented writing back :)
Look forward to reading more of your inventive wonderful stories soon :)