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Cruel Intentions – Introductions Part 1
“I’m Alice.” She introduced herself, smiling when Dana looked up and saw that Alice had noticed that Dana had been noticing her. Dana turned red again and was about to reply when she heard her name coming from the doorway.
“Hey Dane! Tee! I’m leaving early today. So you guys gotta ride with your brother.” Alice followed the two girls outside the classroom to join a cute, skinny blond kid, who looked very comfortable in his school uniform. “Hey, new girl.” The kid pointed out.
“Howie.” Dana scolded and turned back to Alice. “I’m sorry for him. I’m even sorrier to have to introduce you to my brother Howie. Howie this is Alice. Not ‘new girl’.”
“Ah. Don’t let Dane fool you into thinking that it’s an embarrassment to have me around. She actually loves it when I make her look like the good twin.” Alice smiled at Howie liking him immediately.
“You guys are twins?”
“Unfortunately.” Dana replied wryly.
“She’s just mad ’cause I’m the good-looking one.”
“I wouldn’t say that.” Alice said smiling at Dana who looked confused at Alice’s comment.
“Oh great. My sister’s making a new friend to torture me with.” Howie said toward Tina. “Anyway, I gotta jet. I already talked to Tim. I’ll see you at home Dane. I’ll probably see you at home too Tee. See ya around new girl.” He said to Alice as he ran off down the hall.
“Again I apologize for my brother.” Dana said as they walked down the hall together.
“I think he’s cute.” Alice smiled when Dana looked at her like she was crazy. “Don’t worry Dana, you’re definitely cuter.” Tina raised an eyebrow at them as she saw Dana turn red as Alice flirted with her.
“Hey we all have gym next.” Tina pointed out as she examined Alice’s schedule.
“Well, I’ll see you guys later. I’m going to meet Harrison on the tennis courts. I’ll see you after school Tee. It was good to meet you Alice.” Dana waved to her friends and walked away tripping on her own feet as she turned around. Dana’s cheeks burned and she didn’t even bother to look back.
Alice followed Tina into the locker room. “You shouldn’t hit on Dana.” Tina said to Alice as they walked in. Alice could tell that it wasn’t a warning and this got her curiosity. “Why?” She asked. Tina smiled. “Like I said before, her family is really strict. Dana wouldn’t know what to do with a girl hitting on her. Besides she’s straight.”
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(38 votes, average: 3.34 out of 5)
this if fucking awesome meth!!! luv it continue soon!
awesome story! love the concept, love the characters, love the writing. keep it up and dont leave us waiting too long!! :)
oh this is the best fanfic ive ever read!! hope you post soon :o) xx
LMAO this is fucking awesome and how really funny is it that alice is from napa, dude she could of been my neighbor LOL.
LOL, goood stuff, can’t wait for the next post!!!
Hey, where’s Mr. Piddles?
This is a great start on this story..LOVE IT…Thanks..
Keep going, its good. Cruel Intentions and Dangerous Liasons are actually both based on Shakespears “The Taming of the Shrew” Change the title, and maybe add a few more witty sarcastic quips please.
wow that was great please continue!!!!!
LOL this is great! Wonderful adapation of the cruel intentions, I kep cracking up at Dana the virgin.
ROTFLMO. This is a great take on my fav guilty pleasure.
I love this! this is hilarious! it has almost everyone! But where is Kit, and Carmen and Shane? Please continue. I love this story alot.
It’s the movie – yet new&improoved version..Great Sexci stry!..’Cruel Intentions’ is Hot – this is SCORCHING..I would definitely pay 2 watch this..Sum of these kids may be swt..But they not that Swt..Bad gurlz&Bad boiz – I like it..Dana – ideal candidate 4 perfect innocent virgin?..I dun think Dana&Tina r as swt&innocent as they play out?..& if Dane is straight(SO gay)&Al looses the bet, in the end it’s still a win-win situation..I expect sum crazy sexci scenarios in the future for these cats..Like is Shane in this?..MarinA&orCarmeN?..Jenny with Tim?..w.e you write..Thnk u, I’m looking forward 2 it..I love the way you write..Thnx 4 writing, dun stop..PLEASE mst Post so0N..
Hey, this is a great start. I wasn’t sure if the situation change would work but it does. You write the characters so well, I think the story would still be good even if the situation didn’t fit. Thank you.
great beginning! please post soon!
Great Start! Cruel Intentions is one of my favorite movies as well as the orginal it was adapted from (Dangerous Liasons). I was trying to figure you out the two main and I got it! :) Great job and can’t wait for the next installment
Hey crystalmeth this is great made me giggle the whole way through you’ve pinned everyone down really well – hope to see the next part soon
That’s one “fucking” amazing story you’ve got there. I love it. Pleas continue. I just hope that Alica doesn’t has to sleep with Helena. But if you follow the movie she wins. so that’s cool. Thank u for this great story, but that’s only so if everything goes perfect with Bette and Tina. Please post soon, love the story if i havent said it before
This story is so fucking good and funny, great start and all the characters in here is so funny and love the way it is. Ok post soon please, thanks!
Thisis really good. I enjoyed it a lot and if you don’t post somemore I think I might cry! Cruel Intentions is one of my favortie movies!
This is very funny, thanks for the idea. Helena, Helena everybody knows that Dana is Aice’s girl and viceversa, lol. Waiting for the next.
“Why not?” Bette asked. “The girl is hot even if she is a walking disaster.” LOL! you NAILED the characters!
i’m LOVING THIS!!! really looking forward to the next chapter (don’t forget about How Hard Can it Be? though!! )
i’m totally loving it…it’s a great twist on the movie. Where’s Shane? and Kit? and Carmen? and I don’t know but I have a pretty good feeling we’ll be seeing some of Lara later on. Keep it up….it’s fucking hilarious
ROTFLMAO this is great hope you continue and post soon!!
crystal – great job. i love it. i love how you’ve integrated so many characters. haven’t seen cruel intentions in forever – but its one of my favorites – not i need to go watch it. as always, you’re an amazing writer.
k. this is just way too fun. lol. i love it.