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Cruel Intentions – Introductions Part 1
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“Yeah, I now her. But Tee, we’re not exactly what you would call friends. In fact they pretty much hate me.”
“Why?” Alice eavesdropped guessing that Tee was short for Tina. She stifled a giggle as the dark haired girl caught her bag on her desk and her books dropped out of it.
“It’s a long story, ask your brother.” The brunette said as she situated her things on her desk.
“Well, she was beautiful. And mysterious, and amazing. I think I’m in love.” Alice smiled at the cute blonde.
“Just be careful Tee. They’re not exactly the nicest people in the world.” Tina and her friend both stopped talking and looked up when the teacher called for everyone’s attention, telling them to turn to some page in their textbooks. Alice looked around trying to decide if she wanted to call attention to herself enough to ask for a book. Luckily though she was saved from having to interrupt the class by the brown haired girl sitting next to her. The girl scooted her desk closer to Al’s so that they could share her book.
“Thank you.” Alice said after the class was over.
“You’re welcome. You must be the new girl.” Dana said. “I meanI’m sorryI didn’t mean to call you that. I wasn’t trying to be rude or anything. I just, I-” Alice smiled finding the girls embarrassment irresistibly cute.
“Don’t mind her. She’s from a very upper-class, posh, very rich, republican planet where it’s rude to call you ‘the new girl’. Even though that’s what you are.” Her friend smiled and held out her hand. “I’m Tina. And the sorry excuse for a high school student next to me is my friend Dana.” Tina held out her hand and Alice let her gaze fall back on Dana, who upon closer inspection was not as skinny as she had first thought her to be. She was thin, but as Alice sized her up she noticed the slight bulges of her muscles as she moved and tensed in embarrassment. And as she looked down checking out said muscles, she noticed the perfect set of tanned legs that ran into a perfect ***** to a slim waist. All in all, Alice had to say that even though she had initially not noticed, this girl was a total hottie. And if she wasn’t mistaken, Dana, in all of her present hotness, was checking her out as well.
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this if fucking awesome meth!!! luv it continue soon!
awesome story! love the concept, love the characters, love the writing. keep it up and dont leave us waiting too long!! :)
oh this is the best fanfic ive ever read!! hope you post soon :o) xx
LMAO this is fucking awesome and how really funny is it that alice is from napa, dude she could of been my neighbor LOL.
LOL, goood stuff, can’t wait for the next post!!!
Hey, where’s Mr. Piddles?
This is a great start on this story..LOVE IT…Thanks..
Keep going, its good. Cruel Intentions and Dangerous Liasons are actually both based on Shakespears “The Taming of the Shrew” Change the title, and maybe add a few more witty sarcastic quips please.
wow that was great please continue!!!!!
LOL this is great! Wonderful adapation of the cruel intentions, I kep cracking up at Dana the virgin.
ROTFLMO. This is a great take on my fav guilty pleasure.
I love this! this is hilarious! it has almost everyone! But where is Kit, and Carmen and Shane? Please continue. I love this story alot.
It’s the movie – yet new&improoved version..Great Sexci stry!..’Cruel Intentions’ is Hot – this is SCORCHING..I would definitely pay 2 watch this..Sum of these kids may be swt..But they not that Swt..Bad gurlz&Bad boiz – I like it..Dana – ideal candidate 4 perfect innocent virgin?..I dun think Dana&Tina r as swt&innocent as they play out?..& if Dane is straight(SO gay)&Al looses the bet, in the end it’s still a win-win situation..I expect sum crazy sexci scenarios in the future for these cats..Like is Shane in this?..MarinA&orCarmeN?..Jenny with Tim?..w.e you write..Thnk u, I’m looking forward 2 it..I love the way you write..Thnx 4 writing, dun stop..PLEASE mst Post so0N..
Hey, this is a great start. I wasn’t sure if the situation change would work but it does. You write the characters so well, I think the story would still be good even if the situation didn’t fit. Thank you.
great beginning! please post soon!
Great Start! Cruel Intentions is one of my favorite movies as well as the orginal it was adapted from (Dangerous Liasons). I was trying to figure you out the two main and I got it! :) Great job and can’t wait for the next installment
Hey crystalmeth this is great made me giggle the whole way through you’ve pinned everyone down really well – hope to see the next part soon
That’s one “fucking” amazing story you’ve got there. I love it. Pleas continue. I just hope that Alica doesn’t has to sleep with Helena. But if you follow the movie she wins. so that’s cool. Thank u for this great story, but that’s only so if everything goes perfect with Bette and Tina. Please post soon, love the story if i havent said it before
This story is so fucking good and funny, great start and all the characters in here is so funny and love the way it is. Ok post soon please, thanks!
Thisis really good. I enjoyed it a lot and if you don’t post somemore I think I might cry! Cruel Intentions is one of my favortie movies!
This is very funny, thanks for the idea. Helena, Helena everybody knows that Dana is Aice’s girl and viceversa, lol. Waiting for the next.
“Why not?” Bette asked. “The girl is hot even if she is a walking disaster.” LOL! you NAILED the characters!
i’m LOVING THIS!!! really looking forward to the next chapter (don’t forget about How Hard Can it Be? though!! )
i’m totally loving it…it’s a great twist on the movie. Where’s Shane? and Kit? and Carmen? and I don’t know but I have a pretty good feeling we’ll be seeing some of Lara later on. Keep it up….it’s fucking hilarious
ROTFLMAO this is great hope you continue and post soon!!
crystal – great job. i love it. i love how you’ve integrated so many characters. haven’t seen cruel intentions in forever – but its one of my favorites – not i need to go watch it. as always, you’re an amazing writer.
k. this is just way too fun. lol. i love it.