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Cruel Intentions – Introductions Part 1
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“Back off Tim.” He said violently. “I’m gonna beat the ***** *****.” And with those words Craig pulled his fist back without any more warning and punched Harrison in the jaw. Harrison fell to the ground and Craig and his friends turned to walk away. Craig snickered as he shook his head and muttered the word fudge packer. Alice stepped forward to see if he was ok, but someone put a hand on her arm to stop her.
“Wait. Watch this.” Helena said with an amused smile.
“*****.” Harrison said as he stood up and spit out a mouthful of blood. Harrison wiped his mouth and tackled Craig. The boys rolled around for a second and Harrison finally ended up on top of Craig. Alice watched as Harrison landed punch after punch to the guys face before getting up and leaving him on the ground. As an afterthought Harrison turned back toward Craig, who was rolling on the ground holding a hand over his bloody face. “NOT ALL ***** ARE PUSSIES, YOU STUPID *****!” He leaned in and yelled as everyone started to point out that there were teachers coming. “Make sure and tell them that you got your cute little ***** kicked by a fudge packer.” Harrison said before running off in the direction of his friends, knowing that this would piss him off even more.
“Hey, are you guys ok?” Harrison asked Tonya and her friend.
Tonya nodded. “Melissa?” She said turning toward her girlfriend. She nodded and Tonya turned back to Harrison. “Thanks Harrison.”
“Yeah, no problem.” He said as he stalked off.
Alice watched him go thrown and shaken by what had just happened. Her initial thoughts on Harrison were completely shattered as the guy walked away from her. “Well, I’m going to get going in search of my next class. I’ll see you guys later. It was nice meeting you Tonya.” She added as she turned and walked back into the building in search of her math class.
Alice took a seat in the back row of the classroom, not seeing any familiar faces in this class. A couple seconds later a blonde girl and her friend came in and set their things down on the other side of Alice. The skinny brunette sat to Alice’s left and the hippy-looking blonde sat next to her. “So you do know her?” The blonde asked.
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this if fucking awesome meth!!! luv it continue soon!
awesome story! love the concept, love the characters, love the writing. keep it up and dont leave us waiting too long!! :)
oh this is the best fanfic ive ever read!! hope you post soon :o) xx
LMAO this is fucking awesome and how really funny is it that alice is from napa, dude she could of been my neighbor LOL.
LOL, goood stuff, can’t wait for the next post!!!
Hey, where’s Mr. Piddles?
This is a great start on this story..LOVE IT…Thanks..
Keep going, its good. Cruel Intentions and Dangerous Liasons are actually both based on Shakespears “The Taming of the Shrew” Change the title, and maybe add a few more witty sarcastic quips please.
wow that was great please continue!!!!!
LOL this is great! Wonderful adapation of the cruel intentions, I kep cracking up at Dana the virgin.
ROTFLMO. This is a great take on my fav guilty pleasure.
I love this! this is hilarious! it has almost everyone! But where is Kit, and Carmen and Shane? Please continue. I love this story alot.
It’s the movie – yet new&improoved version..Great Sexci stry!..’Cruel Intentions’ is Hot – this is SCORCHING..I would definitely pay 2 watch this..Sum of these kids may be swt..But they not that Swt..Bad gurlz&Bad boiz – I like it..Dana – ideal candidate 4 perfect innocent virgin?..I dun think Dana&Tina r as swt&innocent as they play out?..& if Dane is straight(SO gay)&Al looses the bet, in the end it’s still a win-win situation..I expect sum crazy sexci scenarios in the future for these cats..Like is Shane in this?..MarinA&orCarmeN?..Jenny with Tim?..w.e you write..Thnk u, I’m looking forward 2 it..I love the way you write..Thnx 4 writing, dun stop..PLEASE mst Post so0N..
Hey, this is a great start. I wasn’t sure if the situation change would work but it does. You write the characters so well, I think the story would still be good even if the situation didn’t fit. Thank you.
great beginning! please post soon!
Great Start! Cruel Intentions is one of my favorite movies as well as the orginal it was adapted from (Dangerous Liasons). I was trying to figure you out the two main and I got it! :) Great job and can’t wait for the next installment
Hey crystalmeth this is great made me giggle the whole way through you’ve pinned everyone down really well – hope to see the next part soon
That’s one “fucking” amazing story you’ve got there. I love it. Pleas continue. I just hope that Alica doesn’t has to sleep with Helena. But if you follow the movie she wins. so that’s cool. Thank u for this great story, but that’s only so if everything goes perfect with Bette and Tina. Please post soon, love the story if i havent said it before
This story is so fucking good and funny, great start and all the characters in here is so funny and love the way it is. Ok post soon please, thanks!
Thisis really good. I enjoyed it a lot and if you don’t post somemore I think I might cry! Cruel Intentions is one of my favortie movies!
This is very funny, thanks for the idea. Helena, Helena everybody knows that Dana is Aice’s girl and viceversa, lol. Waiting for the next.
“Why not?” Bette asked. “The girl is hot even if she is a walking disaster.” LOL! you NAILED the characters!
i’m LOVING THIS!!! really looking forward to the next chapter (don’t forget about How Hard Can it Be? though!! )
i’m totally loving it…it’s a great twist on the movie. Where’s Shane? and Kit? and Carmen? and I don’t know but I have a pretty good feeling we’ll be seeing some of Lara later on. Keep it up….it’s fucking hilarious
ROTFLMAO this is great hope you continue and post soon!!
crystal – great job. i love it. i love how you’ve integrated so many characters. haven’t seen cruel intentions in forever – but its one of my favorites – not i need to go watch it. as always, you’re an amazing writer.
k. this is just way too fun. lol. i love it.