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    Crumbling Down

    Story written on December 1, 2005 by Birdie.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=57994
    Author Notes:

    Take a good hard look on the story and figure yourself what it is about. No I’m not gonna tell you lazy lez.
    hehe, just kiding I’ll give you just a clue it deals with Shane letting her walls down.
    Hope you enjoy it.
    Warning!!! This is a Jenny/Shane thing, don’t bother to read if you can’t stand the prospect.

     


     

      3) Endless confrontations

     

    Jenny sat reading the article she was currently writing on the background the clock ticked slowly. She looked up and stared longingly out of the window. The sun was cracking the pavement and the birds tweaked as they went flying trough the thick air. She tied her hair and stared back at her work, as she thought that at this pace she would never finish. She had just arrived but money for the rent was already due and she couldn’t take Shane offer to pay for her.

     

    She placed the book on the desk and rubbed her tired eyes, she had been up all night talking with Shane. Things are so weird between them two she doesn’t now what to do anymore. She is snapped out of her reverie as Shane announces herself by striding into the room caring a glass of water “Hey, I thought you could use some water. I swear this weather is gonna kill me. I don’t know how you manage to work”. “Apparently I don’t manage” says Jenny hitting her head repeatedly against the table damn Shane and her all so ***** ways startled she wonders where did that thought come from.

     

    Shane gets up abruptly saying “Look I was just trying to be nice”. Jenny answers rudely ‘Well I don’t have time to be nice right now. I have to write this. I need the money. Rent is due” Shane whines “I said I would cover you”. Jenny retorts “And I said I don’t want you to” sadly looking at her watch, she so liked things to run smooth with Shane. But it never seemed to work that way. She clarifies “Specially now that Moira it’s staying here”.

     

    This sentence throws of Shane’s balance “What do you mean staying?! She’s movin in? I thought she was lookin for a place.” Jenny rubes her temple expressing signs of resignation “Look I figured you don’t like her, but…” Shane shrugs “I have no problem with her”. Jenny raises an eyebrow at her comment. “I don’t!!! I just think you deserve better” says Shane defensively.  The sentence makes Jenny go into a rant “You don’t know what I deserve and even if you did what I deserve is not any of your business. And anyhow, where do YOU go around passing judgment on relationships little miss I sleep around cause I’m afraid to commit” Shane shakes her head looking hurt and gets out off the room swinging the door closed loudly.

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    1. Although I really can’t get over the fact that Shane and Carmen belong together, I do like this fic tho. It’s interesting and I’m anxious to see where this is going. Good work!

    4. This story was amazing. It was kind of negative but i loved it anyway. I really hope you continue this cause theres not many shane/jenny fics and this one was so good. I wanna know what happens to shane. Anyways good luck!!!

    5. I’m sorry, don’t take it personal, but I can’t get with the whole Shane wanting to be with Jenny. I just think that Shane and Carmen belong together. . . . .

    7. Well I guess I’ll make the difference;I liked it!I don’t know if Shane & Jenny will ever be an item,sleep together or something,but all the other things already exist;the broad smiles,the intense way the look each other,the tide hugs,the way they understand each other by just looking each other.And of course the fact that Shane would always be there for her.She is so relaxed,easy-going & she’s opening up because of Jenny,not Carmen.Carmen just happens to be the girl Shane’s with for now,happens to be around while Shane’s opening up.Carmen is just along for the ride,not driving,Jenny is.TaKe CaRe!

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