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Crumbling Down
She stands up from the bed staring at the door as tears swell up in her eyes. Melting instantly the hard exterior that I had put up. It was my self-proclaimed job to make her feel better when she was hurtin’, not add to her misery. I felt guilty for making her look so breakable. So I stood up and pulled her close to me hugging her and that’s when it happened. I don’t know if it was the smell of her hair or the fact that she was suddenly so close, so very close to me or if it was the tickle of her breath in my ear. “I’m sorry”
“So we’re okay then?” She asked me with a small smile.
I turn to herso close our lips almost touching. And I just nod ’cause I can’t muster any words. And thenthen she kisses me pressing her lips against mine softly. After a few minutes passed and I found that I was still standin’ in the exact spot where she had left me. I felt cold, the room felt big and icy, without her next to me, and my heart ached tightly on my chest which I find kinda unusual. And it is only then then I realized I had let my walls down again. I had completely and utterly fallen for Jenny. And once you let down your walls, you leave yourself open for attack. And you’re bound to get hurt.
4) Liquor is always fun
The music throbbed through the walls of the Planet, lights flashed in sync with the deep bass drumming beat. Shane leans against a pillar watching the dance floor felling the vibration of the music going through her body. Carmen creeps up swinging her hips to the rhythm and handles her a beer. Shane runs her hand over her belt pulling her closer and Carmen wraps her arms around the taller girl neck before trailing them down her sides.
“Get a room” shouts Alice . Shane chuckles lookin to the direction of the table where her friends are sittin then she pulls her girlfriend closer and kisses her passionately. She takes one more look at her laughing friends and winks at them. Carmen doesn’t look bemused at her actions so she leaves the distracted girl heading off into the crowd.
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(21 votes, average: 3.29 out of 5)
Although I really can’t get over the fact that Shane and Carmen belong together, I do like this fic tho. It’s interesting and I’m anxious to see where this is going. Good work!
I don´t know…..this story is so damn negative…don´t tkae it hard but I don´t really like it.
yeah, I know. It supose to be negative tough. It’s not meant for everyone to like. Thanks for leaving you opinion I appreciate it a lot.
This story was amazing. It was kind of negative but i loved it anyway. I really hope you continue this cause theres not many shane/jenny fics and this one was so good. I wanna know what happens to shane. Anyways good luck!!!
I’m sorry, don’t take it personal, but I can’t get with the whole Shane wanting to be with Jenny. I just think that Shane and Carmen belong together. . . . .
*I meant tight hugs,not tide… *blushes*
Well I guess I’ll make the difference;I liked it!I don’t know if Shane & Jenny will ever be an item,sleep together or something,but all the other things already exist;the broad smiles,the intense way the look each other,the tide hugs,the way they understand each other by just looking each other.And of course the fact that Shane would always be there for her.She is so relaxed,easy-going & she’s opening up because of Jenny,not Carmen.Carmen just happens to be the girl Shane’s with for now,happens to be around while Shane’s opening up.Carmen is just along for the ride,not driving,Jenny is.TaKe CaRe!