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Cure-all, Chapter 27
“Can you take the kids with you?” She asked hopeful.
“The kids?…” He exclaimed, “No miss, we can’t! It’s not in our diplomatic mission. Those children are Santaraguayan, and they depend on the country’s authorities.”
“Authorities?… What authorities?” Tina raised her voice, “You just said it, this is war for God’s sake! Are you going to leave them here, right in the middle of gunshots?”
“Miss, there is nothing we can do!… Now please, we need to go. Are you coming or not?” He said, hand on the door.
Tina looked at him. All this man wanted was to save his diplomatic ass, and he couldn’t care less about the fate of the children. Suddenly she felt sorry. Not for her, not for the children. No, she felt sorry for this man whose heart was cold enough to get into this car and leave them here without looking back.
Glaring at him, she shook her head, more her reaction to his heartless behavior than to illustrate her answer.
“No… I’m staying.” She declared decidedly.
She looked at James and with a sign of her head, invited him to grab the opportunity to leave. The young man approached her and nodded with a smile.
“Have a nice trip back home, Sir.” He said, still looking at the blonde, “Now, if you’ll excuse us, we have young children to take care of.”
Tina smiled. She had hoped, and somewhere deep inside, known that James wouldn’t leave her side. Still, she had wanted him to decide for himself.
She looked over at the boys. How could she have left them behind? How could she have gotten into this car and into a plane away from them?… Away from Bette…
Oh my God, Bette!
She held the door that the diplomat was about to close.
“Wait! Have you heard from Bette Porter? She was supposed to come to the Embassy this morning.”
“Who?” The attache asked, growing very nervous.
“Bette Porter… Professor Porter, from the CDC!” Tina repeated, irritated. God, this man was definitely an idiot.
“No, I haven’t seen her today. And I don’t know about her whereabouts. Anyway, the attacks started a few hours ago, so she’s probably already at the airport.” He said hurriedly, before getting into the car.
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(4 votes, average: 4.25 out of 5)
this is truly an amazing story! can’t wait for the next chapter. i am totally captivated! PPS!
this is truly one of the most amazing stories i have read! it it sucha thrilling tale.. please continue asap.
wow… you write like you were in this position before… i like that tina is not scared of these “Men”… i know you will keep her and bette safe… and james… PPS
I’m loving this story. Don’t keep us waiting too long for an update!
Hopefully Tina finds her way to Bette soon, but without bullet holes please! PPS
This story, or one like it, plays out somewhere every day and mostly without those of strong principles. We are truly blessed here in the USA
Wow I will wait with baited breath for the next post. Tina is playing with fire and there is nothing that will stop him from shooting her right where she stands. God Tina that I don’t know if I know how to be that brave. Great story k I love all the infectious disease tidbits.
don’t let anything happen to Tina please… wonderful chapter, pps!
wow very well written. I am sure this is as close as how it is in some of these countries.
oh come on… you can’t stop there… I love this story pleeeaaaase continue asap
Wow, that was fantastic. Can’t wait to see what happens next. PPS.
You write like you were in the war zone before. Love that our Tina is so very brave.When she is afraid she thinks of Bette, I been very ill, so help make me get better quicker and post very soon. thanks
OMG….how can you leave us like that. Please give us more soon.
Damn, Tina is brave or maybe not using her brain. Tina did something that most people will not do and that is to stand up and fight against the all out war. The sound of the trigger is not a good sign.
So you do have a thing for cliffies after all, huh ?… That’s just cruel !… LOL ! This chapter was absolutely ( fu..ing ) thrilling, K ! To me there are no other words to describe it. As for your characters… Well, I love this brave and incredibly strong Tina ( no matter how scared she must be inside ) and as crazy as this may sound I’m starting to fear even more for Bette than for Tina right now… I wonder what might have happened to her when she tried to get to the Embassy earlier… Especially since she was alone from what I gathered. She didn’t have a James or a Max Sweeney to “escort” her… Did I mention before how much I loved James, btw ? Fantastic chapter, Kword. Please don’t torture us too long, I can already tell the wait for next chapter is going to be excruciating.
This story is so realistic I have chills up and down my spine..Tina is really brave, God bless her
Bette where are you, come and resuce Tina!
WOW…go, Tina!!!
Puh…wow! Oxygen please! I was holding my breath almost the whole chapter! Amazing! Ant Tina is so strong and fearless…wow, wow, wow!!! Brilliant writing. Thanks for sharing your great talent with us. May I ask you a question? You don’t have to answer if it’s too personal. Were you in a war zone at some point in your life? I’m just curious because your writing seems so realistic.