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Cure-all, Chapter 27
Yeah right, Tina thought. She didn’t believe for a nanosecond that Bette could have left the lazaretto. Especially now. She had probably rushed back there when the shooting had begun. Tina felt both relieved and scared to know the brunette still in the country. Relieved that they were at least still close to each other. Scared because she knew that she and Kit were completely on their own over there, and probably more at risk than ever.
After the last diplomatic car had disappeared through the gate, Tina and James hustled the children inside the embassy. They closed the main door and looked at one another. That’s when Tina realized that she could have asked the attache to take Max with them.
“Are you kidding?” The young man exclaimed, “I would have been arrested before reaching the airport. And everyone else with me. Some people in town knew that I was going to the orphanage… And with a video camera. I bet my head that the army now wants to get hold of it.”
“Well, we could have at least given them the film.” Tina deplored.
“No way! I won’t separate from it… But don’t worry, I have contacts. And as soon it gets dark, I’ll sneak out.” Max assured with confidence.
James called them to the window.
“Come and have a look. There’s some commotion outside. Those army guys don’t look very friendly.” He said sarcastically, “And I’m not sure they have only good intentions.”
A military truck and two jeeps had just stopped at the gate. Soldiers were getting out, gathering, and talking as they looked towards the embassy.
“I’ll go and see what they want.” James said, checking his gun.
“Wait!” Tina held him back, “I’ll go…”
“Tina…” James started.
“James, no offence but what exactly are you going to tell them? Cause these guys don’t look like they’ll take any shit…” The blonde said sternly, “I have an idea. It’s risky, but it can work.”
The young man looked at her with a frown. He didn’t like it… He really didn’t. But the look on his boss’ face was so intense and determined that he knew it would be useless to argue.
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(4 votes, average: 4.25 out of 5)
this is truly an amazing story! can’t wait for the next chapter. i am totally captivated! PPS!
this is truly one of the most amazing stories i have read! it it sucha thrilling tale.. please continue asap.
wow… you write like you were in this position before… i like that tina is not scared of these “Men”… i know you will keep her and bette safe… and james… PPS
I’m loving this story. Don’t keep us waiting too long for an update!
Hopefully Tina finds her way to Bette soon, but without bullet holes please! PPS
This story, or one like it, plays out somewhere every day and mostly without those of strong principles. We are truly blessed here in the USA
Wow I will wait with baited breath for the next post. Tina is playing with fire and there is nothing that will stop him from shooting her right where she stands. God Tina that I don’t know if I know how to be that brave. Great story k I love all the infectious disease tidbits.
don’t let anything happen to Tina please… wonderful chapter, pps!
wow very well written. I am sure this is as close as how it is in some of these countries.
oh come on… you can’t stop there… I love this story pleeeaaaase continue asap
Wow, that was fantastic. Can’t wait to see what happens next. PPS.
You write like you were in the war zone before. Love that our Tina is so very brave.When she is afraid she thinks of Bette, I been very ill, so help make me get better quicker and post very soon. thanks
OMG….how can you leave us like that. Please give us more soon.
Damn, Tina is brave or maybe not using her brain. Tina did something that most people will not do and that is to stand up and fight against the all out war. The sound of the trigger is not a good sign.
So you do have a thing for cliffies after all, huh ?… That’s just cruel !… LOL ! This chapter was absolutely ( fu..ing ) thrilling, K ! To me there are no other words to describe it. As for your characters… Well, I love this brave and incredibly strong Tina ( no matter how scared she must be inside ) and as crazy as this may sound I’m starting to fear even more for Bette than for Tina right now… I wonder what might have happened to her when she tried to get to the Embassy earlier… Especially since she was alone from what I gathered. She didn’t have a James or a Max Sweeney to “escort” her… Did I mention before how much I loved James, btw ? Fantastic chapter, Kword. Please don’t torture us too long, I can already tell the wait for next chapter is going to be excruciating.
This story is so realistic I have chills up and down my spine..Tina is really brave, God bless her
Bette where are you, come and resuce Tina!
WOW…go, Tina!!!
Puh…wow! Oxygen please! I was holding my breath almost the whole chapter! Amazing! Ant Tina is so strong and fearless…wow, wow, wow!!! Brilliant writing. Thanks for sharing your great talent with us. May I ask you a question? You don’t have to answer if it’s too personal. Were you in a war zone at some point in your life? I’m just curious because your writing seems so realistic.