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Dana’s Choice Chapter 9
Dana wanted this night to be similar to the night of 3 years ago, so instead of letting herself into Alice’s apartment she wanted Alice to have to answer the door in a similar way to herself three years ago. Finely after about 5 minutes of buzzing Alice the intercom buzzed her back letting her know, Alice was finely responding to the intrusion. “What!” was all Alice answered into the speaker. Dana could tell by her voice that Alice had just woken up.
Dana had to smile at the anger in Alice’s voice, because if everything went as planed she hope tonight would be a very special night for both of them. “Al, it’s me, can I come up and talk.” Dana could hear the confusion in Alice voice as she spoke. “Is everything OK? Why didn’t you just let yourself in? Yea, Yea come on up.” Then the front door opened to Alice’s apartment complex as Alice buzzed Dana in.
Alice was pacing thinking what the ***** could be up that Dana would not let herself in. She had the door open to her apartment and was pacing in the hallway in front of it. She wondered if something had happen to Dana. Or maybe she was having second thoughts about them again. But Alice blew off the second thought knowing how great they had been doing. “What is taking her so long?” Alice spoke to herself.
While Alice was walking away from the door talking to herself, she didn’t notice Dana had walked up to the door. When she finely did turn around she let out a quick screech. “How long have you been standing there?” Dana laughed at Alice, she loved it when Alice got all hyper. “Al you knew I was on my way up.”
After smiling lovingly at Alice she held out her hand to reveal a small bouquet of wild flowers. Alice walked over taking the flowers. “Dane they’re going to kick you out of your condo if you keep stealing the flowers.” Then she reached over and kissed Dana. “Thanks.”
While Alice smelled the flower, she looked over and noticed that Dana was staring at her with that goofy look she gets on her face when she thinks something totally cute. Alice couldn’t stand it anymore. “What is my hair standing straight up?” Dana just smiled, the pulled Alice face to hers. “No, well yes you do have a little bed head thing going, but you wear bed head well. Alice have I ever told you how cute you are in glasses? You should wear them more often I love you in glasses you’re just so adorable.”
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(12 votes, average: 4.33 out of 5)
Deb, I’m swooning here and that hot pinic with a little smut – really really nice. Seriously if Alice doesn’t want Dana back, I take her without a single question. I love love this!
That was fantastic please post more soon i love your writing and love Alice and Dana 4ever
Really sweet……..liking this story very much.
Thank you so much! I was in much
need of a happy Danish fix today. Your
story has me in tears. It was so beautiful,
heartbreaking & romantic. And I’m beginning
to feel a bit like Alice at the end of the story.
Hey Deb, it’s betru2u. I hate having two different screen names. Just wanted to say how much I Love this story. I agree with Dana, the 4am kiss should be their anniversay. The moonlit picnic was so sweet an adorable and what followed was really, really hot!
Great chapter, I love the picnic, soo sweat. And after the the sweet came mmmmh, so hot. I love this story.
Awwwwwwwwwww! wow! i loved this one! Although Deb i love reading the stuff u write ur an amazing writer!