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Dana’s Choice Chapter 9
Alice could feel her face start to flush. “Adorable, I was going for *****.” Dana quickly kissed Alice’s lips. “You don’t have to go for *****, you are *****.”
Finely it hit Alice it was after 2:30 in the morning, and she and Dana were standing there flirting with each other. “Dana, why are you here in the middle of the night? I seem to remember asking you if you wanted to have dinner tonight and you telling me you had plans, so what brings you here now?”
Dana kissed Alice’s forehead then looked her straight in the eyes. “I want to have a date tonight, I have a picnic in the car, I want us to go up to the hills and watch the city lights. Just you, me, and the stars. Come on Al go get ready and lets have a picnic.”
Alice motioned for Dana to go have a set in the living room while she got ready to go out for their middle of the night, spur of the moment picnic date. “You know Dana, everyone thinks I’m the crazy one in this relationship.”
JOGGING TRAIL JUST OUTSIDE HOLLYWOOD
Dana had found this spot one day while she was jogging, it was off the jogging trail up a small hill. But it was flat, and isolated plus it had a great view of the city. She would find herself her when she needed to be alone to think. First, she would run the a few miles around the tract, then she would hike up her to be alone to sort out her thoughts. The last time she was up here thinking, she thought it was a great spot for a picnic, and she hoped to one day show it to Alice.
Alice and Dana had been to this trail many times. This was the trail that they had made the crazy pact about rules of attraction, which of course didn’t last because for what ever reason, the continually found themselves alone. Plus when alone they couldn’t keep their hands off each other. This was also the trail Alice and Dana would walk and later jog, while Dana was recovering from her knee injury. Like tonight Dana always thought, this trail had a special meaning to them as a couple. It was their special spot together to walk, or jog and talk.
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(12 votes, average: 4.33 out of 5)
Deb, I’m swooning here and that hot pinic with a little smut – really really nice. Seriously if Alice doesn’t want Dana back, I take her without a single question. I love love this!
That was fantastic please post more soon i love your writing and love Alice and Dana 4ever
Really sweet……..liking this story very much.
Thank you so much! I was in much
need of a happy Danish fix today. Your
story has me in tears. It was so beautiful,
heartbreaking & romantic. And I’m beginning
to feel a bit like Alice at the end of the story.
Hey Deb, it’s betru2u. I hate having two different screen names. Just wanted to say how much I Love this story. I agree with Dana, the 4am kiss should be their anniversay. The moonlit picnic was so sweet an adorable and what followed was really, really hot!
Great chapter, I love the picnic, soo sweat. And after the the sweet came mmmmh, so hot. I love this story.
Awwwwwwwwwww! wow! i loved this one! Although Deb i love reading the stuff u write ur an amazing writer!