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Dance With Us 16
Tina (wondering what the hell Helena and Papi were doing besides the obvious): High boredom level.
Danyael (watching the table of friends): Bette looks like she’s going to blow a gasket or something. She’s not one for sitting still is she?
Tina (shaking her head): Not usually, no.
Michaela (looking up as Dylan put a plate of cookies on the table): Thank you.
Dylan (smiling): From the cute tot…
Tina (laughing): She got to you too?
Dylan (nodding): You can say that again. I can only imagine the trouble I’m going to get into when Wilson and Jung-Ying stay with us.
Tina (introducing): Dylan Moorland, this is Michaela Kennard Croft and her wife Danyael Kennard Croft.
Danyael (shaking her hand): Nice to meet you.
Michaela (smiling): Yes and who are Wilson and Jung Ying?
Tina (motioning in Helena’s direction): Helena’s son and daughter from a previous relationship.
Michaela (wondering): And they’re not here?
Dylan (not really wanting to talk about it): No. They’re with Helena’s ex in New York. (Seeing their puzzled looks) it’s a long, complicated story.
Tina (reaching for her hand): And they’ll be here next month…
Dylan (nodding): That’s what we were told. Excuse me, (wondering what Helena and Papi were doing now.)
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Helena (pouring shots): It’s one in the afternoon. Give everyone a shot and maybe Bette will calm down.
Papi (teasing): If the shot had Trazadone, Morphine, Valium, Librium…
Kit (watching Helena): Bette’s going to strangle you two.
Papi (grinning evilly): I’m surprised she hasn’t already. Hey if we set them on fire like they did in that movie…
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(46 votes, average: 3.46 out of 5)
wow…its been too long and hopefully the next update will come asap..i love this story..i imagine it must take a lot work to come up with all the banter between all the characters..i was wondering how long it would take before one of the gang found out…wonder how Alice will handle it and once she finds out the truth?? Please update again soon.
Oh so happy you are back with this. I have been checking all the time and when I saw that you posted!!!!!! So excited, love it, please keep going.
woo woo Great to have you back at last lol. I am going to enjoy this slowly pmsl.
For a comeback, this was one. I love family time like this. Life is too short to be fighting and unhappy all way through, Life is so short that any opportunity to be togetherand happyas a family is great.Yet I didn’t want somebody to know what was happening between Bette, Tina and Helena just yet. Not this way anyway. Now, I hope Alice would decide to talk to Tina first before making any fast conclusion. It great to have you back mate. PPVS
Hello TB417, Wow wee what a great chappie.The showdown with Tina aunt and partner was tense and sweetly balanced by the hilarity of Bette and the gang. The methods suggested to try Bette down were so humorous.Good to have Dylan and Helena maknig headway and with Peggy’s approval. They do have far to go and are now on the right track.Angie was adorable as she stole the show and added much needed calmness to Tina’s meeting.The house party was a blast as the whole gang took part. So much laughter and enjoyment as well as splashing and soaking.Then Tina offering Helena some comfort at Dylan’s departure is caught by Alice. Dropped mouth as Alice tries to digest this sight and think about the hurricane to follow.TB417 you have rewritten the rules here and I can’t wait to read more.Please post soon.Many thanks from Your stunned and Loyal Fan.
Oh shit now Alice know!