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Dance With Us 3
Story written on February 27, 2009 by tibette417.
Helena (brushing her lips against Tina’s nipples): Relax…
Tina (fighting for control rubbing her face; she felt raw inside and out): Helena, just please I can’t…
Helena (seizing her mouth; she was painfully aroused and this woman had been the cause of it): Then (grabbing Tina’s hand) touch me (pushing it inside her slacks) don’t leave me in this state (thrusting her hips against Tina’s hand) I need you…
Tina (not only seeing but feeling a deep despair inside this woman): Helena, talk to me…
Helena (kissing her): Just fuck me. Gods, that’s it (bracing herself on her knees and pumping harder; sweat trickling down her temples) just like that, fuck me…
Tina (kissing her softly): It’s okay I’m here (wrapping her arm around her tighter) let it go. (Softly) just let it go…
Shaolin Studios Front Gate
Security Officer (checking a clipboard then the computer): No. Ms. Kennard and Ms. Peabody are still here.
Peggy (taking a deep breath): Thank you. (Shutting her window as the limo pulled forward.)
Security Guard (opening the large double gate): Sure thing. (Looking up as a silver Mercedes pulled in behind the black limo) go on in Ms. Peabody. (Waiting until the limo cleared the gate only then did she open the outer gate) good evening Ms. Porter.
Bette (recognizing the guard): Hi! Is Tina Kennard still here?
Guard (nodding and motioning in the direction the limo had driven off to): Sure Ms. Peabody is in there looking for Ms. Peabody and Ms. Kennard as we speak. I’ll let you in maam.
Bette (smiling): Thank you (pulling alongside Peggy’s limo she waited while the older woman got herself situated knowing from past handling’s that if she even made a move to help her, her ass would be in serious trouble.)
Peggy (thanking her driver): Well since the changes were made early this morning Helena should be in Tina’s old office. We’ll start there first then go to the small conference room.
Bette (walking beside her): You mean I’m getting a tour…
Peggy (smiling): Yes darling. (Realizing something) you never went on a tour of the building.
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I wanted to read through the whole chapter, but I really had a hard time following the dialogue because of all the descriptions you added in parenthesis. I understand that this is how it is done in script form, but because there is no spaces between the characters lines, it really is hard and confusing to read. I wanted to though!! If you change the format let me know. Thanks!
Okay, I read it. You’ve got the makings of a really interesting story here, but to echo what Seahurst said, the formatting makes this fairly difficult to read. If you need a hand with formatting or whatever else, PM me and I’ll be happy to help. Cheers
WOW! First I was like WTF, then I was like what she raped her, then I was like man what is Bette doing now I’m just confused I don’t know what to think.
I have received a lot of WTF’s (lol.) I’ll give a short explanation. Helena’s a mess and is drowning in alcohol, pills and her past. Bette and Tina are the only ones to reach her. However, Bette has to push Helena to her limits of losing all control before they can get through the walls. The passion between Helena and Tina was bordering on consensual and non consensual. Between Bette and Helena however, it was Bette pushing her control so Helena would let her walls down.
nice story!
Thank you for the suggestion. I’m still getting the hang of this and appreciate any tips or advice. It’s been re edited for viewing and if it needs more drop me a line.
”Not anymore. You’re going to stay with Tina and I.” – Helena, T&B? Wow, this is certainly a combustive combo!
i think there is nothing hotter than the three of them together, i hope you continue with this story!!!!!!
Damn this is so good!