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    Dance With Us 3

    Story written on February 27, 2009 by tibette417.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=72737
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    Coming Home

    Bette (thinking about a lot of things she had never done): I am such a fucking bitch (muttering…)
    Peggy (stopping and looking at her): And that my dear, is why you have a second chance (continuing on towards Helena’s office.)
    The Planet
    Kit (sitting down and looking over all the stuff she had to finish): I love you being here, however you need to go home and get some rest? I know you’ve got an early morning tomorrow and such.
    Papi (pulling up a chair beside her): It’s alright. As long as I get about four hours of sleep before the drive I’ll be fine…
    Kit (shaking her head): No, you’ve been running crazy lately, helping me, my sister and Tina with Angie, Helena, Peggy and then the Hit Club and then (soft lips kissed hers halting her argument.)
    Papi (kneeling in front of her): No. Listen to me. I care about you, these past few months have been the best of my life. (Pausing and looking at the floor) I just want to be with you…
    Kit (nervously): It’s just until I can get a good manager…
    Papi (leaning against the desk): Is it? (Pausing) I know how important this business is to you, I know this is your dream and you deserve the success. (Biting her lip) we need some us time, baby…
    Kit (sighing and leaning back): Us time…
    Papi (finishing): Yes. Time to do things as a couple, a long walk, see a movie go to dinner…
    Kit (not understanding): Papi I thought…
    Papi (raising her hand): I’d like to take you on a real date (fidgeting) ask Bette well you know…
    Kit (laughing to anyone else it would have been absolute madness to Kit though it was the sweetest thing she heard): So (reaching forward and pulling Papi in closer) you (pressing her lips to her neck) want to ask me (kissing soft skin) out on a date. (Nibbling her way up to her earlobe) you want my sister’s permission to do what you want with me (grazing her teeth along Papi’s jugular…)
    Papi (shivering): Yes I mean (her eyes rolling back as Kit moved behind her and kissed her neck) I mean well…
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    Comments

    1. I wanted to read through the whole chapter, but I really had a hard time following the dialogue because of all the descriptions you added in parenthesis. I understand that this is how it is done in script form, but because there is no spaces between the characters lines, it really is hard and confusing to read. I wanted to though!! If you change the format let me know. Thanks!

    2. Okay, I read it. You’ve got the makings of a really interesting story here, but to echo what Seahurst said, the formatting makes this fairly difficult to read. If you need a hand with formatting or whatever else, PM me and I’ll be happy to help. Cheers

    3. WOW! First I was like WTF, then I was like what she raped her, then I was like man what is Bette doing now I’m just confused I don’t know what to think.

    4. I have received a lot of WTF’s (lol.) I’ll give a short explanation. Helena’s a mess and is drowning in alcohol, pills and her past. Bette and Tina are the only ones to reach her. However, Bette has to push Helena to her limits of losing all control before they can get through the walls. The passion between Helena and Tina was bordering on consensual and non consensual. Between Bette and Helena however, it was Bette pushing her control so Helena would let her walls down.

    6. Thank you for the suggestion. I’m still getting the hang of this and appreciate any tips or advice. It’s been re edited for viewing and if it needs more drop me a line.

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