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Dance With Us 3
Story written on February 27, 2009 by tibette417.
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Helena (vehemently): No. That weekend, Tina I needed…
Tina (not convinced): You needed to get a piece of ass…
Helena (shaking her head): It’s I don’t know and…
Tina (trying not get angry; Helena was so much like Bette): It’s what Helena? Talk to me. I’m here, Bette and I are both here for you.
Helena (caressing her face): I can’t (biting her lip) I just Tina no…
Tina (shaking her head): And why not? It’s okay to take it out on me…
Helena (pleading): No, don’t think that. No it wasn’t like that. I just…
Tina (gently): It wasn’t all about sex then…
Helena (shaking her head): No (standing up) it’s about connecting with something that evades you no matter the veil that covers the realm. (Leaning down) I (looking at the floor) I’m the one to blame not you. (Pressing her lips to Tina’s, enjoying the combined taste of both of them.) I’m going to finish with that inventory check and such.
Tina (closing her eyes; she would get to the bottom of things another way): Alright (Helena’s hand sliding out of her own as Helena slipped out the door. Then and only then would she let the tears fall. She was in love with Bette, deeply in love with Bette. More than the first time. And Helena, Helena was a close friend to both of them. Sighing she leaned her head back and let her emotions go.)
Shaolin Studios Helena’s Office
Peggy (thumbing through a manuscript): Some of these are good some of these my Gods…
Bette (shifting her seat): Gods I didn’t realize how much fucking work it actually takes just to get the movie started. (Flipping through several pages) what agencies to use, different films and their type…
Peggy (wheeling her chair around the desk): You do photography so the film types might have some similarities…
Bette (nodding): Yeah, you’re right. I’m going to go up to Tina’s office and see if she’s there.
Peggy (smiling): Fourth floor take a left off the elevator and the last door on your left should be Tina’s.
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I wanted to read through the whole chapter, but I really had a hard time following the dialogue because of all the descriptions you added in parenthesis. I understand that this is how it is done in script form, but because there is no spaces between the characters lines, it really is hard and confusing to read. I wanted to though!! If you change the format let me know. Thanks!
Okay, I read it. You’ve got the makings of a really interesting story here, but to echo what Seahurst said, the formatting makes this fairly difficult to read. If you need a hand with formatting or whatever else, PM me and I’ll be happy to help. Cheers
WOW! First I was like WTF, then I was like what she raped her, then I was like man what is Bette doing now I’m just confused I don’t know what to think.
I have received a lot of WTF’s (lol.) I’ll give a short explanation. Helena’s a mess and is drowning in alcohol, pills and her past. Bette and Tina are the only ones to reach her. However, Bette has to push Helena to her limits of losing all control before they can get through the walls. The passion between Helena and Tina was bordering on consensual and non consensual. Between Bette and Helena however, it was Bette pushing her control so Helena would let her walls down.
nice story!
Thank you for the suggestion. I’m still getting the hang of this and appreciate any tips or advice. It’s been re edited for viewing and if it needs more drop me a line.
”Not anymore. You’re going to stay with Tina and I.” – Helena, T&B? Wow, this is certainly a combustive combo!
i think there is nothing hotter than the three of them together, i hope you continue with this story!!!!!!
Damn this is so good!