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    Dance With Us 3

    Story written on February 27, 2009 by tibette417.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=72737
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    Coming Home

    Helena (laughing): Ironic, one minute I’m perfect and the next I’m insane…
    Peggy (holding out her hands): Helena what’s wrong? I thought you would be happy…
    Helena (stumbling and righting herself as she moved to lean on a rail): I can’t be and I don’t deserve to be. (Waving the bottle around, clearly drunk) you see I committed the ultimate act of (thinking for a word) I fucked a woman who belongs to another and I got off. I fucking enjoyed it (throwing the empty bottle, the glass shattering.) I put my hands inside her and touched her, and I don’t think I got consent to do so. (Looking for the other bottle she had brought out) and the worst part is I enjoyed it. I enjoyed the protests and her cries…
    Peggy (realizing the whole dam picture): It’s okay we can fix this. Well you can. Just as long oh bloody hell, please tell me it wasn’t Tina. (Rubbing her face) not Tina Kennard.
    Helena (sneering): I forced Bette Porter’s fiancé if that’s what you’re asking me. And I’m so dam sick and demented I enjoyed it…
    Peggy (reaching for her): Honey we can you get you some help. I know about the pills, the liquor, the letter and the DVD. It’s okay we can get you some help…
    Helena (looking at the pool): I’m beyond saving mother…

    Shaolin Studios Tina’s Office
    Tina (pleading): Bette no just please oh Gods (watching a retreating back as Bette stormed out of her office.)

    Bette (yelling): Helena Peabody is a dead woman.
    Tina (grabbing her jacket and keys): Shit, shit, shit…

    Shaolin Studios Hallway
    Peggy (trying to keep up with her daughter): Helena will you just…

    Helena (waving her hand): I have things to do before I take the final bow (walking into a background room and slamming the door. The clicking of the lock silencing further protests…)
    Peggy (placing her hand against the door): I never knew you were a quitter…
    Bette (snarling): And now you know she’s dead…
    Peggy (closing her eyes; looking at Bette she realized exactly how dangerous this woman could be and why women threw themselves at her): Bette please listen…
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    Comments

    1. I wanted to read through the whole chapter, but I really had a hard time following the dialogue because of all the descriptions you added in parenthesis. I understand that this is how it is done in script form, but because there is no spaces between the characters lines, it really is hard and confusing to read. I wanted to though!! If you change the format let me know. Thanks!

    2. Okay, I read it. You’ve got the makings of a really interesting story here, but to echo what Seahurst said, the formatting makes this fairly difficult to read. If you need a hand with formatting or whatever else, PM me and I’ll be happy to help. Cheers

    3. WOW! First I was like WTF, then I was like what she raped her, then I was like man what is Bette doing now I’m just confused I don’t know what to think.

    4. I have received a lot of WTF’s (lol.) I’ll give a short explanation. Helena’s a mess and is drowning in alcohol, pills and her past. Bette and Tina are the only ones to reach her. However, Bette has to push Helena to her limits of losing all control before they can get through the walls. The passion between Helena and Tina was bordering on consensual and non consensual. Between Bette and Helena however, it was Bette pushing her control so Helena would let her walls down.

    6. Thank you for the suggestion. I’m still getting the hang of this and appreciate any tips or advice. It’s been re edited for viewing and if it needs more drop me a line.

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