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Dance With Us 3
Story written on February 27, 2009 by tibette417.
Helena (crying): Bette I…
Bette (grabbing Helena’s arms and pinning them behind her back): What did I day?
Helena (nervously; her body was held tight against Bette’s chest; her arms clutched in a vice grip and the heat that was rolling off this woman made her body feel like it was on fire): Um…
Bette (yanking on Helena’s arms): Be quiet (sliding her free hand down the front of Helena’s body; pinching her nipples; smirking at the yelp and pushed further down until her hand rested on the button on Helena’s slacks) so I asked myself what the hell am I going to do with you? (Sliding her hand under Helena’s shirt) beat you within an inch of your life or…
Helena (panicking; she had vowed no one would ever hurt her like this again and yet her she was in Bette’s arm the same scenario): Bette please don’t…
Bette (shaking her head; her lips to Helena’s ear): Stop your whining. It’s so unbecoming of you, paints you in the same light as someone who’s weak. And (her free hand pinching and pulling Helena’s nipples smirking at the moans) you’re not weak. (Pushing her hand inside Helena’s pants) however once I get started you can whine and whimper all you want. (Kissing the side of her neck) sort of like when Tina comes, (pushing her thigh between Helena’s knees) Gods those sounds alone have made me cum without her even touching me. And her accent, that thick sweet southern accent gets even thicker the more she’s aroused (pressing her hips against Helena’s ass) sort of like her juices. Shit (shivering)that alone (pressing her finger against Helena’s hardened clit) like when I bend her over my knee and spank her after she’s done something on purpose to get my reaction. She loves it, but you can’t be brutal about it. No a few swift swats and dam she’s raring to go. (Sliding her tongue along Helena’s ear) she gets so dam horny from that. And when you taste her, press your mouth to her dripping sex, she’s sweeter than anything you’ve ever tasted (pushing her finger down Helena’s clit.) And don’t get me started on her ass. That woman’s ass was made for fucking it (adjusting her stance and biting Helena’s neck, knowing she would leave a mark. Pausing) my question Helena is how do you want it?
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I wanted to read through the whole chapter, but I really had a hard time following the dialogue because of all the descriptions you added in parenthesis. I understand that this is how it is done in script form, but because there is no spaces between the characters lines, it really is hard and confusing to read. I wanted to though!! If you change the format let me know. Thanks!
Okay, I read it. You’ve got the makings of a really interesting story here, but to echo what Seahurst said, the formatting makes this fairly difficult to read. If you need a hand with formatting or whatever else, PM me and I’ll be happy to help. Cheers
WOW! First I was like WTF, then I was like what she raped her, then I was like man what is Bette doing now I’m just confused I don’t know what to think.
I have received a lot of WTF’s (lol.) I’ll give a short explanation. Helena’s a mess and is drowning in alcohol, pills and her past. Bette and Tina are the only ones to reach her. However, Bette has to push Helena to her limits of losing all control before they can get through the walls. The passion between Helena and Tina was bordering on consensual and non consensual. Between Bette and Helena however, it was Bette pushing her control so Helena would let her walls down.
nice story!
Thank you for the suggestion. I’m still getting the hang of this and appreciate any tips or advice. It’s been re edited for viewing and if it needs more drop me a line.
”Not anymore. You’re going to stay with Tina and I.” – Helena, T&B? Wow, this is certainly a combustive combo!
i think there is nothing hotter than the three of them together, i hope you continue with this story!!!!!!
Damn this is so good!